Tragic the way the brothers lives have been hounded by pitfalls and heartache. Just a shame. Those guys need a good glomp and a happily-ever-after! ;). Great chapter. Well written.

This chapter was pure genius. I love  the dynamic you have made in this story between John and the boys..and Deans extreme reaction to his fathers death. We all know he felt it, but you did not see it for very long on the show which I always thought was a shame. Bring on the angst. ;). Great chapter!! :D.

Woah! One word: AWESOME. :D. Your characterization is spot-on!! Wonderful story so far. ;). I'm loving the tension. ;). And the realistic way you have them dealing with circumstances. NOT to mention, beautiful writing. :). Great chapter!!

What an unexpected but highly appreciated glimpse of your next story! Could this "shaggy haired" man really be our Sam? Wow, I'm so looking forward to read this, thanks!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and that you are looking forward to it. I am too when I have the time to work on it. I've actually got a bit of it written, but I won't be posting it for while - which gives me more time to get more of it under my belt while I'm focusing on my VS episode. As for the "shaggy haired" man - you'll just have to wait and find out.

Thank you for this amazing story.

It's been a roller coaster of a ride, i have adored every second of it.

I am really looking forward to your next story.

 

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you've enjoyed this story, it has been quite a roller coaster ride. I really enjoyed writing it so I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much.

As soon as I get my episode done I'll be able to focus on on my next story completely, so if I'm lucky I'll be able to start posting it within the next couple of months. Thanks for sticking with me. Thanks for the review!

Thank you for this fantastic story is not enough, really can't tell what a wonderful time I had reading every single chapter! You are such a talented writer and really catched these two amazing brothers and you did this in a stunning way, so many touching scenes, great images (oh, and how I enjoyed the harpy!) and characters (just loved Jenni and as I see there might be a chance for her and Dr. Burken, an extra thank you for this!), this had everything. I'm sad this is the final chapter, but the story is round and it's a perfect ending - Sam and Dean are together, "...each a vital piece of the other, and always side by side. Just as things were supposed to be." - yes, this completely covers it. Again, a huge thank you and I'm so looking forward to read a new story, certainly will look out for it. Take care!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the ending - and this story. I really did enjoy writing it, it was fun and by far the biggest challenge I've ever taken on. I am glad that you enjoyed the harpy, I did have a lot of fun creating her the way I did. It was fun to try and come up with a new idea for such a traditional mythical creature. As for Jenni and Dr. Burken - we'll you'll see for yourself how things work out for them/or don't work out for them. I am planning on bringing her back in a future story. It won't be the next story I am planning on writing but the story after that, and I already have big plans for it so I am very excited.

As for the next story - well, if I can really settle down and focus on the episode I need to write I could probably start posting Killer At Midnight within a couple months. It just depends on how fast I can write - but I will be working on it periodically so that I have some of it under my belt before I post, that way updates won't be too delayed when I do start to post. Thanks for sticking with me on this story. Thanks for the review!

A fantastic ending, Loved this story, Sorry you won't be writing anytime soon, but will be keeping a look out. Thanks

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the ending - I was very happy with how it turned out. I will be working on the next story periodically, but until I get my episode done I dare not work on anything else. If I get distracted I won't be able to focus as well as I could if I was only working on the one thing. Depending on how it goes though it should be too long before Killer At Midnight is ready for posting. Thanks for the review!

Absolutely fantastic chapter, it was really exciting. can't be long to go now, hope Jenni's alright? And Sam too?can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the last chapter - it was quite a challenge, and a lot of fun at the same time. Trying to finish off the harpy was quite the challenge - a lot harder than I thought it would be. But I'm glad it played out well.

Yes, Jenni is ok. She'll be back in the epilogue, which is being posted now, so she'll be back. And no worries about Sam either - everyone will be fine, I promise. Thanks for the review and for sticking with me!

Yay they got the harpy.

That was an action packed chapter.

Author's Response: Yep they finally got the harpy - she got what was coming to her. I'm glad you enjoyed the action packed chapter. Thanks for the review and for sticking with me.

This had so everything I hoped for! A heartbeat scene when Sam fighted to bring Dean back, very touching. And what a relief to hear Jenni will survive, too (still think Dr. Burken would be perfect for her, he's such a nice and decent guy and Jenni really would deserve some happiness after everything she went through, well maybe...). Loved the brother's talk at the hospital, an important one, when Dean actually told his brother for the first time he's "...not even supposed to be here...", also Sam expressing how much he was afraid to lose Dean, think this will start a healing process for both of them and as much I do fear their fight with the harpy, I think Dean is right, they have to do it as soon as possible and they have to end it together, as a catharsis. So, exciting, wonderful chapter, loved it!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that the last chapter had everything you were hoping for. It was quite a challenge, as was this next one, so I hope that it meets your expectations as well.

 I wanted to touch a bit of what Dean's feeling with Sam right now, but not dive into it since they do that in CSPWDT, so it was just a little snippit for Sam to get a heads up on how Dean was feeling about himself, but I'm glad you liked it.

The hunt with the harpy doesn't go extremely smooth but it isn't as bad as it could be either, so hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review!

Great chapter, very exciting.  Poor hurt Dean, hope they get that harpy soon without anymore damage to themselves. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the last chapter. The hunt with the harpy isn't going to go super smooth, but it won't be as bad as it could be either. Thanks for the review!

Wow, brilliant update.

A very exciting chapter and a cliffhanger ending.

Author's Response: It was quite a ride this time around wasn't it? This next chapter winds down a bit, but it will be all action in the following chapter. Thanks for the review!