Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 17
Wow! Completely unexpected! I can't wait to find out what's stalking Sam.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the unexpected twist in this chapter. I had a lot of fun with it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 16
Ah ha! finally they're beginning to figure out they're being played. Very good!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed chapter sixteen. The brothers definitely have caught on to the fact that something strange is going on - but neither will expect what it is. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 32
Took me a bit to catch up with the chapters, sorry; every single one was so good! Still no rest for us here at all, things seem to get worse. I really enjoyed Jenny beating up Kory (sure a lot of us thought about doing this to someone once or twice throughout the years!). And what about the grooves on Dean's back, something to worry about?; also Sam certainly is in too much pain, isn't he? More sorrows ahead I suppose, but don't stop, it's too good!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed all those chapters - kind of posted them in a hurry. Yeah things get worse and then get a bit better then worse again. But no worries as promised I'll fix them by the end. I'm glad you enjoyed Jenni beating up Kory - that was a lot of fun and I enjoyed it. As for the grooves - well just an accidental thing in the throws of passion on Jenni's part. As for Sam's pain - well guess you'll find out. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 26
Sammy stop torturing Dean! Good good good chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 26. Things are going to be a little rough for the brothers for a while - hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 32
this story is awesome!!! keep the awesome work!!, can't wait till the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you have been enjoying this story so far. I'll try to get the next chapter up within the next week or two - as soon as I get my computer fixed. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 32
just read loads of chapters, very exciting story.could have read more ,but there was no next button.awwww.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the last few chapters. Sorry that I don't have any more for you for a while. Having computer problems that I will have to send it in for - but I'll be working on it nonetheless. I'll try get the chapter up within the next week or two. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
Very intense! enjoying this story very much! Gotta head off for a while will read more later!
Author's Response: Things are going to be very trying for the brothers for a while - they are going to need some outside help just to help ease off the weight of the situation for a bit. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 10
Very realistic! Sam's anger, Dean's pain! perfect! moving on
Author's Response: Sam and Dean are cetainly struggling with the new situation. Glad that you enjoyed this one. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
This chapter was heart breaking! Poor Sammy! You did an amazing job of protraying Dean's apprehension and Sam's fear as he awoke! What an emotional roller coaster! I really just wanted to hug Sam and tell him everything is gonna be okay! What can I say I love these boys! Will be reading more soon...gotta get writing, got a story dancing around in my head and it;s making me dizzy!
Author's Response: Yeah poor Sam is really having a hard time with this - and will continue to have a hard time as time goes by. He has his reasons - which are explained later on. I don't want to give too much away and ruin it for you. But the ride for both the brothers is going to have its ups and downs and is going to definitely going to be hard for them. Hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 26
fantastic updates, i'll be back later to read more of this great story.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the last few chapters. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
Poor Sammy! What a wake-up call for Dean! will read more soon!
Author's Response: Well, it certainly was a wake up call for Dean. One thing is for sure he'll be putting how he feels on hold so he can be there for Sam. But it doesn't mean it is going to be a rough one for him. Hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
Uh oh! Did the harpy somehow blind Sam without scratching out his eyes? Not good Dean's bleeding too much! You really put the boys through the ringer!
Author's Response: Yeah the harpy is responsible for Sam's injuries - couldn't have her scratching out his eyes - that really wouldn't be nice. LOL. Don't worry Dean will be ok. I did really put the boys through it in this one didn't I? Well thinks are going to be rough for both of them for a while. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
AHHHH! Poor Sam! Hurry Dean hurry! great chapter the build up was killing me! LOL nicely done
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this one - things are going to get really rough after this. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 5
You are really getting into the boys heads on this one and I have to say I am a fan of that! Nice job...though I am getting a little bit of a stomach churny feeling that something bad is gonna happen out on this hunt...Nice build up
Author's Response: I'm glad that you've enjoyed how I've been getting into the brothers heads in this one. I've really enjoyed playing with the concept. Your gut feeling is right - hunt is going to be really rough for the brothers. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 4
informative chapter...not sold that it's a harpy though...something nagging...reading on
Author's Response: Uh - actually it is a harpy - poor guys. It's going to be a rough hunt. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
Dean in boxers *sigh* sorry got distracted...lol Nicely done exploring Sam's angst
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the whole Dean in his boxers thing - don't blame you for getting distracted. LOL. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Dean, so consumed by what his father told him...*sigh* just wanna hug him and nurse him back to health!
Author's Response: Yeah poor Dean really does have a lot on his mind right now - afraid to say that this story is going to be really hard on both brothers - he could probably use a couple hugs. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice start, good read on the boys here...reading on
Author's Response: I'm glad that you decided to check this one out and that you enjoyed chapter one. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 32
Great chapter, Sorry to hear that the next ones might be a while in coming, can't wait to see what the final out come is,
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the last few chapters - and yeah it will be a bit before I can get the next chapter up. Having computer problems so I'll have to send my computer in to get it fixed. I'll be working on the next chapter on different computer but I can't promise that I'll be getting it up soon. I'll shoot for a couple weeks though. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 15
Wow! You had me holding my breath when Dean was trying to get through to Sam. I didn't even realize I was doing it until Sam acknowledged Dean was with him. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this one. It was only a matter of time before Dean got through to Sam - they still have a long way to go though. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 14
So pitiful and sad! This chapter just rips my heart out! You have them suffering worse than any demon could.
Author's Response: I know I'm being really nasty to the brothers at this point in the story - but what can I say? I'm evil. LOL. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 13
So is Jenny showing up just coincidence or does she have something to do with this whole thing? Did Dean really call the first time or was it something else? Did Sam really throw the tantrum and wreck the bungalow? I'm dying to find out!
Author's Response: Actually Jenni showing up is just a coincidence - she has nothing to do with what is going on with anything. Just went out for a beer. As for Dean calling the first time - that is revealed in later chapters - as is the tantrum Sam threw in the bungalow. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 29
Another great chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 12
Obviously something more is going on here than just Sam and Dean having clashing moods. You have some paranormal being playing with them, don't you? And here I thought this was going to be strictly an injured brother story. Tricky!
Author's Response: Well - actually things are a little bit more complicated than something supernatural messing with the boys. It is revealed later on - and it is quite a twist. But Sam and Dean certainly are at each others throats aren't they? Don't worry things will clear up between them. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 26
Another great chapter,you seem to have caught the characters really well, you can picture Jensen and Jared while reading. 10/10
Author's Response: Oh - uh, wow. Thanks for that. I'm happy you feel that way about how I've written the brothers. I'm glad that it is so easy for you to picture this story. Thanks for the review!
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