Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/05/08 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 37
poor sam,he's really starting to feel the strain now.
Author's Response: Sam really is feeling the strain right now - but it was bound to catch up with him sooner or later. But hopefully things will ease up in a few chapters. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 31
I'm curious how the winchesters are going to get Jenni out of this mess, too. I'm sure you have an idea.
Author's Response: How are the brothers going to get Jenni out of this mess? Well, that is a good question, and unfortunately I don't have an answer for just yet. I'm going through several ideas and weighing the pros and cons to each one but nothing solid just yet. But I'm sure I'll come up with something I like. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 30
Whew! I know it hasn't been very long, but it seems forever since Sam went blind. I'm so glad there's finally a glimmer of hope!
Author's Response: Yep a small glimmer of hope for the brothers, although Sam's recovery is still going to be a long one. This is just a simple break through in the fact that he can see again. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 29
This gets better all the time. jenni believes in evil things---cool! So she's perfect for Dean. I hope you explain later more about why she believes.
Author's Response: Yes Jenni does believe in the supernatural aspects of things - and there is a reason for that. I promise I will dig deeper into that later on, I'm still working on a few things and that is definitely in the cards. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 28
Clever of you to throw in the two different names! I wondered, but hoped you had an explanation.
Author's Response: So you caught on to the two different names huh? I threw most people with that one - but yes there was an explanation two different cards one for each of the brothers but they were claiming to be brothers so the hospital was bound to dig around a bit. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 27
Jenni's a lot more spunky during sex than she seems to be at any other time. I don't think she or Dean realize what they've gotten themselves into.
Author's Response: Sometimes people can surprise you - I think Jenni let's herself be a bit more vulnerable while being intimate with someone - and Dean really lets her be herself. But you're right this relationship could be a bit of a problem later on, still working on the aspects of it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 26
Holy Cow! This story is more fun than a roller coaster! Wheeee!
Author's Response: More fun than a roller coaster huh? LOL. Thanks I'll take that as a good thing. LOL. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 25
Poor Dean! It was bound to happen sooner or later---falling asleep. Just one more thing the brothers can beat themselves up over. Hopefully, they'll catch a break soon.
Author's Response: Well - with all the stress and sleepless nights it was bound to catch up with him sooner or later right? He certainly wasn't too happy when he saw how long he had been out was he? They'll get a bit of a break before too long. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 24
Okay, you have me stumped! where did Dean go? To get a motel room across the street from the hospital? He wouldn't have gone far without Sammy.
Author's Response: You're right Dean wouldn't go too far while Sam is in the hospital. He couldn't leave his brother on his own. So no worries about him leaving Sam on his own for too long. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 23
Geez! Just when you think they might catch a break, the old Winchester luck stabs them in the back. Poor boys!
Author's Response: Well - things never go as planned right? There is always something that the brothers need to be looking out for. Unfortunately this time it kind of caught them by surprise. Poor guys. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 22
Poor Sam. I'm glad he and Dean had their brief talk. It seemed to settle things a little between them, re-establish their brotherly connection.
Author's Response: Sometimes all the brothers need to do to settle things between them is have a quick talk. Hopefully it will stay that way right? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 21
Jenni is so helpful! I'll bet Dean and Sam are glad to have her around.
Author's Response: Jenni has been helpful to the brothers and will continue to help the brothers through this little hurdle. Hope you continue to enjoy her. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 36
As mentioned before, I absolutely love the way you describe the harpy, best version I know, so creepy! Sam did a great job rescuing his brother, seems he regains a lot of strength when Dean is in danger and needs him. Enjoyed als always!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you have enjoyed the way I have done the harpy. I really don't know too much about them but I've had a lot of fun with it. I'm glad you feel like she is creepy and I'm flattered that you feel like the harpy is the best version you know. As always the brothers seem to pull energy reserves out when they need to help each other. One of the reasons we love them right? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 36
great update,poor dean.looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yeah poor Dean really went through it in this chapter didn't he - what can I say, I'm evil sometimes. LOL. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 30
Sammy can see yay good job =-b
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed that part - it was fun. Although he can see he is far from getting better - it is still a long road to recovery for him. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 35
wow that was an amazing chapter.i'll be waiting for the next update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter - I had a lot of fun with it. Fortunately, the wait for the next chapter won't be very long. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 35
So good to have you back and to hear your finger is better! Such a scary chapter, creating this very dark atmosphere you could actually feel the darkness seeping in and taking hold of them and their hearts; the talk Sam and Jenni had will be important later on I'm sure, loved that. And with the harpy terror is back in full force (the way you did this, grand). It's about the worst situation so far, all in bad shape, especially Dean, and the harpy still hunting them, wow this was great, can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: It's good to be back - with a mended finger. I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter it was a lot of fun to toy with. I felt it important to bring the harpy back at this particular moment and that will come into play later on. Needless to say although it is going to make things hard on the brothers for a while it will have it's good points as well. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 35
Just a quick note that I'm thoroughly enjoying your story, it's really, really good! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are really enjoying this story - I've really had a lot of fun with it. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 34
What a sad chapter, I just loved the lake scene, so quiet and beautiful, like taking a deep breath to regain some strength and that's what both brothers need, they're still on the decline - Dean's comment at the end that there is nothing to have faith in showed it, so Sam's recovery is really important, what a task! Hope your finger is getting better soon, all the best for you!
Author's Response: It was a bit on the sadder side of things this time around wasn't it. I'm glad that you enjoyed the lake scene - I really enjoyed writing that and giving the brothers a bit of time to R&R - even if it didn't last long. It's true that both brothers are stilly really struggling with everything and the little conversation Dean had with Jenni at the end kind of showed how he is really feeling about certain things didn't it? But there is a reason that Jenni wanted to know these things and that will be revealed later on. As for Sam's recovery - well it is still a long time in coming but he'll have other things on his mind that will occupy him. As for the finger - well the regular color is back and except for a few damaged nerves there isn't anything seriously wrong with it. I know I'll be keeping my distance from staple guns from now on. LOL. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 34
that was a lovely chapter.hope your finger gets better soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed chapter thirty-four. I'm just glad I got it written before I shot the staple through my finger. But it's better now, thanks, and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 33
Great chapter, very touching! What an apt comment Jenni made saying the brothers 'stand out in a crowd', this absolutely covers this unique relationship, I so enjoyed this picture! By the way, this here really makes my days brighter, so thanks a lot!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 33. The way Jenni describes Sam and Dean's relationship with each other is pretty apt isn't it. I'm glad that you enjoyed the way this was brought out in this chapter. I'm glad that you are enjoying this story so much. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 33
another brilliant chapter,i'm still really loving this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 33 and that you are still really enjoying this story. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 20
You had me scared for a moment when Sam wasn't on the sofa anymore! Pretty intense chapter!
Author's Response: Well as you know Sam didn't go far - not that he was in any conditon to go very far anyway. Still it was a tense moment for Dean as well. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 19
Geez, Sam is a handful! I hope Dean can handle him. Oh no, Jenni left and they still have no food.
Author's Response: Yeah Sam is a handful right now for Dean and things will continue to be stressful for the brothers for a bit. As for the no food thing - well that won't last long. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 18
Way to keep the mystery going! You're building suspense without giving anything solid away---and I'm going crazy!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the whole mystery thing and that you felt like I didn't give too much away. I wanted to keep it going as long as I could. Thanks for the review!
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