Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/06/09 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 11
Thank you . . . thank youd. I honestly got scared, but the way you proceeded with this story is simply amazing still the great. I ought to kick your ass to timbuckto for scaring me, you still my favorite. Thanks once again.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/06/09 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
Okay, likeing the character at this depth its freaking me out. Hey, you are good I tell you.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/06/09 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 9
This story is really killing me. My favorite character has always been SAM.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
You are one of the second creative story teller. Thanks for the work I appreciate the talent you place. Its just you scareing the hell out of me.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 7
Is this going to be an issue that the boys did not get any part of the rings thing.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
Who or what the hell are they? If its there father it is a sicking joke to put on yuour sons.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 5
Okay, where the hell is the father, and this is realy scaring me now.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 4
Okay, that is not good. Quit picking and hurting SAM. . . This is getting scary as hell.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 3
I do like the graphic and I can see the damge along with the effect of what is happening. Your good second on top list.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
Okay, this ding bat of what ever is not playing nicely and I do like the creative part of the story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
Okay I do think that this could be a WINDIGO?
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
Aah, Muffy, that was beautiful! I've been on holiday for the last three weeks and couldn't pick up the internet so I'd missed the ending to this, so I was delighted to log on now I'm back home and find it sitting here all finished! I've been sitting here alternately shuddering at those orc tendrils creeping ALL OVER Sam and grinning like an idiot at Dean's 'Call me Aragorn'. I loved all of the Lord of the Rings references and tie-ins, Dean, as always the perfectly understated hero. Superb cure and rescue, just in the nick of time. This has been one of my all-time favourite stories, it's made me laugh, cry, squirm and now it's just made me sad that it's ended. However, I've spotted two new stories from you to lighten my mood. I'll make a start on them tomorrow. Any news on when your book will be published? Hope you're feeling better too. Thanks for a great read. Jane
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much Jane, I'm a little speechless with this lovely review. I have to admit this has turned into one of my favs as well. Once I had the idea for the orcs it all seemed to flow and I was surprised when Dean pooed out with his "I'm Aragorn" moment. I love Tolkien and I think Dean fits into his idea of a hero so well! I'm waiting patiently on my mystery. It's in the hands of the publiusher now and I've decided that my birthday gift to myself this year is sending out the query on my second novel. *crosses fingers* I am slowing getting better after another bout of the stuff these past few weeks. Grrr. I hope you enjoy the other stories I'm posting, although In Darkness is VERY dark, Huge hug, Muffy
Reviewer: kika (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 11
This is really, really a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! My friend asked for a story with the boys out in the woods, a little hurt Sam and an interesting hunt. *grins* I'm so glad you liked it! Hugs Muffy
Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 11
i can't count the times i thought i was going to hurl or start scratching at my skin to claw off the crawlies that weren't there, or crying because it was all so hopeless and terrible, or puling at my recently cut hair because i was simply freaking out. so, basically, i love you.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much *blushing* I'm glad the creepy crawlies worked. I debated scaling back on them, but a very wise voice said it would be a major cop out! Thank you again!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 11
A brilliant ending to a brilliant story. I have loved reading it thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this one and I'm so glad the ending worked. I do panic about endings...I always wonder if they'll do the story justice. I'll have something new soon!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
Aw, it's over! I always get this major disappointment when I realise there's no more to one of your tales - they draw me in to a wonderful world of freaky fantasticness. I mean - Orc killer? magic sword? Aragorn? Great! And as always, you leave it with just enough of a smile to let us know that, once again, they really are going to be okay. For a while. thanks for a brilliant read!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm a little sad it's over too. I always am when I come to the end of a story. I am particularly happy with this one. It just seemed to go together so well, and the happy picture I have in my head of Dean as Aragorn will keep me smiling for weeks. I'll have a bunch of new stuff very soon!
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 11
“I’m Aragorn.” I just LOVE the way you think :D “We’re waiting. They removed the…the…” “Orc fungus?” Dean offered, dropping into the chair beside the bed. SERIOUSLY! This is just one great big collection of great lines. Aaaahhh just a great story... Great writing :) great snark. Wonderful job with the "male bonding moments"... In short: This was just a really wonderful read, a great thrill and a great story... Thank you very much for sharing :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Dean and Sam were very helpful with the lines. I'm so happy with the way this story turned out. It just grew organically and I couldn't be happier with the result! Thank you again!
Reviewer: gapdragon (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 11
brilliant - really enjoyed it and the LOTR references were fun. look forward to the next one
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad the LOTRs refs worked. Once I had the idea of the forest demons, I knoew there would be a few, and Dean was so cooperative!! I'll have something new very soon! Thank you again
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Thanks... loved the ending...no cliffie but wondering... will Sam being able to repeat what Dean is thinking come up again?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I think Sam repeating Dean's thoughts will come up. It came out of the story so naturally, I think it wants to be there more, so I think it will be back. Thank you again
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, YAY! There was a happy ending after all. I have to admit, after the last chapter, I was a little worried. And you threw in a little hurt!Dean which always makes me smile. Very, very nice ending to this story. THANK YOU!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I love a happy ending, even a bittersweet happy ending, but happy! I also love hurt Dean, the temptation is to hurt him a little more, but I try and keep my Sam fics less hurt Dean. It doesn't always work LOL. Thank you again!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hey Muffy.This is so funny, Dean being ‘into’ camping when one would expect if anyone Sam would. I am defo not a camping girl but if I could go with the boys I might risk it. Do you think they’d carry my pack for me? Bev xx Ok Muffy got to the end of chapter 8 now and well hoowee! Orcs huh? Sam’s in a state isn’t he? And Dean’s being brave but I can sense his panic and he is getting to the ‘Oh my God, Sam’s gonna die’ stage. Needs us a miracle Muffy!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved the idea of Dean camping, you know he would like it, you know there had to be a reason he didn't... Miracles are coming, I promise! Soon soon soon!
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great story... I backpedaled because I felt a little bad about not reviweing every chapter... And since I have now read chap. 10 I just have to post my speculations as to how Sam was able to beat the Orc-fungus the first time?? Oh goodnes this story gives me the heebiejeebies... Only the really good ones do that. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I understand about not reviewing every chapter, I take it as a compliment that you were just devouring the story! How did Sam beat the fungus? Hmmm. I'll update very soon! Promise
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 10
I hate you a little bit... How can you leave them like that??! It's completely inhumane and it tortures the readers :D Am I gettig too caught up? Probably, but this is just a great story and I can't wait for the next chapters... And it seriously feels like that freakyfungus is on me. I feel like ants are marching over my skin- Oh my god the fungus scenes are killing me! I suspected that the fungi-thing was just turning Sam not actually killing him... Oh so gross... “Even if I have to fight every freaking orc on the planet. And you know that gets better every time I say it. Orcs. How the hell did orcs end up here?” - One of my many favorite lines... I just love this story so much... Such a great job :D Please hurry woth the next chapter :D :D :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The fungus scenes give me the oogies too, belive it or not. I'm so happy with the way this tory is turning out. I hope to have an update soon, maybe even later today. I feel bad about the slow updates on the last two chapters--but I'm slamed against a deadline for a novel and madly editing and my editor growls when I say "Oh, I was working on Welcome..." But it's in the mail onTuesday! Woo Hoo
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 9
“Sure. Do you want me to set up the tent?” Maybe that’s not a good idea. I’d rather keep him by the fire with me. “It’d rather stay out here by the fire.” “Stop that.” “Stop what?” “Nothing.” Dean smiled and pulled the coffee out of the fire. My favorite part of your story. I love the little snibbets where the comical relief shines through... LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I like a little humor to help get them through the rough patches! It keeps me smiling while I'm torturing the poor things.
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh that is just gross! Fungi???!!! Seriously???!! Oh god I hate parasits... I've got goosebumps... And the description of the wriggling... Gahh...! I love your story by the way :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry about the fungus, it kind of happened and I've been giving myself nightmares with it. :D Is it bad when you give yourself nightmares?
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