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Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 15

Another wonderful chapter. I get so excited when I see that you've posted another chapter!! Please update soon!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 25/02/07 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

This was such a good update! To think that Sam and John were so close to Dean just irks me! Especially when Marci rubs it in their faces! She is definitely creepy by the way.

I really hope that John and Sam find Dean fast, but I also know it cannot just be that easy!

I am glad that everything is getting better for you and I cannot wait until the next update!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/02/07 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

Terrific update devonshire. Time is running out for Dean. I hope that Sam and John'll find him in time. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: ABYRGE (Signed) · Date: 20/02/07 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 14

This just keeps getting better. Can't wait for another chapter!!!!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/07 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great update! And don't worry about the lull in the update; I just hope that your sister is okay!

I really love how you are filling in the blanks for us here. I love the emotions between John, Sam, and Dean. They are very well played out and I can actually see it happening in my head.

Update soon!

Oh, and buying Dean and Sam for $1.99...if only it was that simple...*sigh*

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/07 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

Sorry to hear about your sister. But thanks for posting another chapter. It's wonderful! Keep going. I need to know what happens!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/07 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 13

what a cliffhanger!! Update soon! You can't keep me hanging like this!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 17/02/07 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 13

oooh nice clifhanger.

Reviewer: ackles7587 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/07 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 13

What?!? don't kill Dean! please!

Author's Response:

dont worry. :)  i dont kill Winchesters. 

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 15/02/07 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 13

That was intense. Dean and Sam're connected and it's killing Sam. Dean looked in a bad shape and Sam as well. I hope that John and Sam'll find Dean. Very suspenseful story so far, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Terrific work devonshire.

Reviewer: CloverGirl (Signed) · Date: 14/02/07 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow I'm really loving this story!! hope john and sam can save dean soon and find out what's happening to sam in time to stop it!! update soon please!!!!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 14/02/07 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh, that was a great chapter! My heart is totally aching for the brothers and even John. Sam is going through hell in order to find his brother and it seems as if  it may kill him if something is not done. I really want to know if Missouri can help the Winchesters or not. I certainly hope so...

Update soon!

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 14/02/07 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

o mann this story is wicked...I love the connection between Sammy and Dean!!! Who is this mellie person:| sooo curious lol Can't wait till your next chapt:D

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/07 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 12

Dean NOOOOOOOO!!!  You are bound and determined to cause me an anxiety fit over these touture methods you got going on against Dean.  Did he wrong you in another life or what? :)   Please update soon Thanks.

Reviewer: ackles7587 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/07 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 12

this is awesome.  Finally someone makes Dean the one to be rescued! PLEASE update soon! Don't leave Dean all alone in the dark!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/07 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 12

“Well, there’s always plan B.”

“And what’s plan B?”

“You. Sam is strong enough to end this all. But, if worse came to worse, we still have you.”

 Oh no!!! What's going to happen to Dean?? I need more!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/02/07 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 12

O*M*G*So Dean is the bait to trap Sam. Riveting chapter. Captivating story so far. Great work devonshire.

Can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 12

Mellie is soooo creepy! I feel so sorry for poor Sam and his visions frm everyone's pain. And now that we know he is the one to end the sacrifices, that cannot be good. But knowing Dean he will do anything to prevent that.

I'm glad that John didn't go off on Sam for the bungee cord stunt, by the way!

Great job and update soon!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 11

I love me an update!

And my poor, sweet Sammy...that boy sure does go through some hell in that wonderful mind of his. And now he's freaked out about Dean. Only I have a feeling they will be too late for Dean when they arrive back at the motel. And I have a feeling John is not going to be too happy with his youngest for leaving Dean, or locking him in...

Update soon!

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/07 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 11

wow...another awesome chapter...what has that lady done to Dean:|...ahh can't wait till the next chapter...hope u post soon:)

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/07 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 11

oooo! What a cliffhanger! What a great chapter! I'm ready for more!

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/07 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 11

You are killing me with this story!!!! With all of the Dean and now Sam torture I am having nightmares at night.  Ha Ha  But seriously  I am loving it.  ;)

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/07 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 10

omggggg this is soooo gooddd...plzzz post soon...can't wait for the next part:D

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 31/01/07 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 10

Amazing story so far Devonshire. Dean and Sam're two broken souls, how they can save each other. I'm hooked and can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 30/01/07 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ok, that ending was freaky! Great fight between Sam and John though...I was holding my breath the entire time! I really feel sorry for Dean, though. Poor guy...

 Update soon!

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