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Reviewer: mamapranayama (Signed) · Date: 04/05/10 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 18

Amazing story. I loved it all! :D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 18

*sniff*...*sniff*...:P

Author's Response: yeah, sad. there are a few more stories, even though the chapter notes say that it's the end of the series. lol. thank you so much for the reviews, i'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh wow...Jeez! This is intense! :D

Reviewer: 0kieD0kie (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 18

WOW!!! I absolutely loved this story. Poor Dean and Sam. They have gone through so much. Your writing is absolutely breathtaking. Had me tearing up. Amazing story and love this series.

Author's Response: thank you so much. i'm so glad you're enjoying the series. it was my first leap into the world of fanfiction. :)

Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 10/10/08 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 18

Btter than the previous story. As a lover of angst, I hate to say it, but even I got a little weary of the repeating melodrama here. How many times is Dean going to go over his "I'm worthless, it's all my fault" spiel before he gets tired of himself. And John, as single-minded and closed off as he can be, is not as inept at talking to his sons as this. Sam, at least, has the excuse that he really is the reason for everything that has happened to his family, and can't help but feel to blame sometimes. But to whine about it over and over like this is getting a bit away from his character. Sam does have the power at the moment to do more about the situation than the others, so will, of course, feel the responsibility most heavily. And I did agree that these emotions would be felt. But this part of the saga went on about 4 chapters too long, and ended too abruptly for my tastes. Don't worry, I'll keep reading.

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 18

Man, what can I say, I love this story and this series. I really need this stuff right now, life is a little rough, not deadly, just a little hard. Just like so many others. Your writing has helped give me something else to think about, given me a break in my day. Thank you.

Author's Response: hi, thank you so much for the reviews, i'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I'm sorry to hear you've had troubles recently, i'm happy i could offer a little break from the real world.

Reviewer: Mickie28 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved the story. Grammar was a little rough, but understandable. The story kept me going and demanding more. Good job!

Author's Response: sorry about the grammar, i'm dyslexic and dont use a beta. i know, i should, but i have so little time. lol. thank you so much for the great reviews, i'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: Mickie28 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 18

That was awesome!

Reviewer: Mickie28 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 10

Holy Friggin monkeys!!!!!

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 5

So...about 22 sentences up from the bottom of this page -
And with that the call was ended. John cursing as he bounded the radial.
This is supposed to mean what? Pounded on the re-dial? What? I have gotten a bit more used to translating some of your misused words and type-o's, but perhaps spellcheck or another person reading thru and catching all the errors will make your stories so much smoother to read. You've got good lines and ideas, just need to smooth out all the rough edges. Just a suggestion to make you a better read.

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 18

I didn't quite understand Sam's motivation for leaving/locking Dean in the motel while he searched the library (chapter 10)
Great ending - loved it! It wrapped everything up but was not too sappy or unrealistic.
The whole story was well written and kept me interested to see what was going to happen next.

Reviewer: mylifemyterms (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 18

excellant i loved it and i cant wait to see what else u cum up with nice ending

Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 18

Aw, happy endings....lol
Good job, loved the story. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 18

Geez, I read the last four chapters so quickly my eyes hurt. I feel like I've just run a marathon, but now I'm happy and calm.
At least until tomorrow when I tackle another of your masterpieces. ;-)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 17

OMG!!!!! You are driving me crazy! That heart beat section is stupendous!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 16

Yet another amazing chapter!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 15

I can't really blame Mellie and Marci for wanting Dean---what woman wouldn't? It's just creepy having him felt up by a spirit. Sam must save him now or he'll become psycho Barbie's boy toy.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 14

You are so clever and tricky. I guessed that Sam's new, improved abilities were somehow linked to the Asura---I just couldnt figure out how it happened. It makes perfect sense now that you explain it.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

The suspense keeps building---oh, make it stop! I can't take much more! Okay, maybe I can.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 12

One minute I hate John enough to spit on him and the next I feel sorry for him. Would you make up my mind?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 11

The excitement is building! I love these roller coaster rides!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 10

"And Sam was tired of watching Dean crumble beneath the weight of their father's love." Such a powerful line! I had to stop and ponder everything that implied.
Oh no! Mellie's stepping up her game and Dean's the pawn.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 9

The emotions are so intense in this chapter! I wanted to yell at John myself! Boy, you got me angry! If John had been my husband speaking to my sons like that I'd have slapped him. Good thing Mary wasn't around or he'd be toast.
As if all the emotional turmoil isn't enough, now it's having physical manifestations? Wow! Hurry---next chapter!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 8

You express the emotions of your characters so well, I can almost feel them. I like knowing what each person thinks and feels.
I don't think there's anything creepier than an evil child/spirit. *shudder*

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 7

The paragraph where John thinks about hunting his sons instead of beating them at pool is so beautiful and sad. I didn't think of him actually hunting his children, but that's what he's doing.
This story is so exciting! There's so much happeneing at one time---I don't know which plot I want answers to first, the hunt or Sam and Dean

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