Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sanatoriums and Self-Exorcism
fantastic update,aww only one more chapter.
Author's Response: Lindsay, Belle says thanks for reviewing and would you like to join him fro crumpets and Earl Grey? bev xx Tuffy say's don't do it...Earl Grey was a real Earl once and you don't even wanna know what Belle's crumpets are made of!!!!X Louy
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
First off - LOVE the title!!! Vomitious Virgin, is so Terry Pratchett, and to write quirky, original funny... tricky stuff .... still you devious dames have pulled it off so well all the way through! Have to say I find myself agreeing with Tuffy - the "Pretty Pretender" doesn't seem as likely a choice as THE JAW!!!!! As for giving the Chiseled Chin a place in the AIA... good use of his special powers! Tuffy was definitely on a role with the diabolic directions in this addition. LOL at the Spanish Inquisition story and the advice to "use another organ" (just ask the male pinkies... many are adept at this!!!!LOL!) and also "Weedy Wheadon"!!!! Of course it is all so clear now.. how else could he centre our attention on one hell-mouth for seven episodes?!!!! Is there a draft of Bucky the Human Slayer lying around?!!! Maybe it could fill a time slot on Hellovision down there? As for poor heartbroken Bellepheron, how sad that Lust is such a player, but loved the image of Hellcamp and his younger days; "I had those dashed braces on that stubborn kink in my devil tail and the glasses on my lazy non-obsidian eye." Lol!!! The Satanic service for Auror was amazing- the amount of information I learnt about horseflesh ... astounding!!!! (Secretly have to say, I am not surprised to find Mr Ed there!!!! ) Sorry to quote on so much but this just deserved a place all it's own; "It’s a bit like a mild dose of the sweet and tasty bubonic plague and the girly-type Pinky’s seem to approach it with the same enjoyment that we do diphtheria down here. However your male-Pinkys are just so much less robust and even a sniff of this ‘Man-Flu’ will knock them of their ridiculous bone flaps and straight into bed for a fortnight." (Preach brother Bellepheron PREACH!!!!) The Ungen mention made me smile as I thought about some of my favorite Whumpcapade stories - yeah it figures!!!!! LOL! I spent the last half of the postcard wondering at the irony of Bel "seeing" Phygar's blindness as an obstacle to him "enjoying" the delights of Hades, with Lust as his tour guide - me-thinks it's Bellepheron that is nearsighted?!!!! All in all this was another triumph, you ladies just keep the laughs coming. How in Hell you manage to keep it all as fresh as the first chapter, is the wonder!!!!! Great job.
Author's Response: Where are you Belle's got a Vomitous Virgin and three purple nurples lined up on the bar for ya? Oh and Mr Ed says you still owe him a huge snog with tongues. saucy girl! Love Bother Belle the nearly blind. xxxx I think Belle's experiences in Hellcamp had a VERY profound effect...that's ALL I'm saying..lol X Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sanatoriums and Self-Exorcism
remind me not to swim in the Dead Sea anytime soon, BB...... Supernatural a documentary about the Winchesters....LOVED THAT!!!!
Author's Response: Belle is an intellectual and loves his documentaries - SN, Dog, The Bounty Hunter (Leland-yum!) and Jerry Springer! Bev xx Doesn't own up to it much (too embarrasing for a hard core old school daemon like him) but he loves 'My Name is Earl' too!! X Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 6 Feathered freaks and fistycuffs
and on headless Gordon we end....no way in Hell (pardon the expression) you can pick out a favorite part of this.,....You two have lost your minds....loving it !!!
Author's Response: Lost our minds? that's assuming we were right to start with! Heehee bev xx Lost?? Haven't been able to find mine in ages, left it lying around and some perisher's made off with it...lol X Louy
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sanatoriums and Self-Exorcism
One more chapter to go only???sigh... i like the duel part! and the self-exorcism!! LOL i wonder if Tuffy would purposefully geit himself in the boys' line of sight and get himself exorcised as a result? hopefully!
Author's Response: Lyn, Yeah well tuffy is missing his wise, mature and devoted big bro so much that he might just rush headlong into anything that'll get him home! Bev xx Now you two should have more faith in the lovelly Tuffy, he's not a daft demidaemon y'know, this dude's got some brains up top...X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sanatoriums and Self-Exorcism
OMG--ladies, you're both so twisted. And I LOVE it. The whole pustule thing at the beginning?? Superbly gross. As was the picture of what Tuffy's motel room looks like. AND the ending about the Dead Sea and the fish etc. Eeewww! I think it made me queasy--but delightfully so of course. It was fun to see you work in UnGen again as well as "the documentary of the Winchesters called Supernatural". I was soooo smiling when I read that. Lovely work as always!
Author's Response: Ness, Oh the Dead Sea fish's nibbling is the sweetest, sexiest tickle...give it a go hun! bev xx Too tempting with the current 'Sam's list'...hehehe. Thanks Ness, glad you're smiling.X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 Feathered freaks and fistycuffs
OMG--laughing soooo hard. You're references to UnGen by both brothers is incredibly funny. Tis a veritable handbook for them to use, is it not? hahahaha Interweaving Dixon and Gordon--another stroke of genius. Delightful chapter, ladies!
Author's Response: Ness, Yup, UnGen = daemon Wikipaedia and boy does Belle love your poetry. bev xx Only a matter of time before UnGen gets a mention on the show, surely...lol..X Louy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 6 Feathered freaks and fistycuffs
great update,still very funny.i'l be waiting for more.
Author's Response: Lindsay, Yup , nearly at the end, Belle's quill is almost worn away...bev xx Won't be long now Lindsay.X Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
well, at least poor Dean will have one thing in common with the Head Hell Honcho...PEANUT M & Ms At least the hellspawn know which hero is PRETTIER..... great again, kids!!!!
Author's Response: Jude, see even the hellspawn recognise the prettier Winchester and want a piece of that perfect ass bev xx Easy Bev, down girl...can't take her anywhere!!!! Thanks for another great review Jude, glad were making you smile...um? That is a smile isn't it? You're not grimacing in pain...??? lol X Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
I cannot even begin to tell you how WARPED you two are........Must be some great painkillers for you guys or something .....So funny in a twisted, fluffy as hell kinda way..... can't wit to see where you are going with all this.....always knew the designers and all the not so comfortable designer clothes and shoes HAD to be in league with the Devil......... Keep it coming, ladies
Author's Response: Hey! me = absolutely no addictions, compulsions or perversions at all but Lou serious addiction to cheese and onion pasties and Ugg Boots! bev xx How could you tell everyone my deepest darkest secrets like that Belle??? Me? Warped?...Nah, just a little bit twisted along one side. Thanks Jude...XXX Louy
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side
Ha! I knew it! Chihuahuas and high heels are hell spawn! Hehehehe this is great. Laura
Author's Response: Yup hellspawn = chihauhau's, high heels, underwired bras, fish knives and eyelash curlers...no wait...Dean's long beautiful curling lashes and sleepy green eyes...strike that last one off the list! bev xx And not only them but braces and the inventor of the bikini wax too, mustn't forget him..lol X Louy
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 Hooves and Hellhounds
LOL...this is delighful! I love the hellhound by the way. Anything with a dog has got to be good!
Author's Response: Laura, Should we send our hellhound Snuffy to nibble on the Nasty guys in your wondeful "The Game"? Save our beautiful boys! bev xx Thanks Laura, and glad your having a laugh at this one...X Louy
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
Hahahahahaha...poor Belle.... having his heart (metaphorically speaking) broken by Lust, and Tuffy should be saying I Told You So to him in his next postcard.... Older brothers never listen to younger ones!!! And Lucifer loved peanuts M&Ms too?? maybe he and Dean are more similar than we know it..... and why is it that even demons want a piece of Dean???? LOL
Author's Response: Yeah well who wouldn't want a piece of Dean, he's gorgeous and peanut M&Ms? The devils favs, especially the blue ones! bev xx Think you've pretty much summed it up here Lyn...hehehe, poor Belle, everyone feels sorry for him...and he is sooooo the anti-Dean isn't he? X Louy
Reviewer: elizacarp (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
Very original and very funny!
Author's Response: Thanks for that elizacarp, and I'm glad were bringing a smile to your face :) ...X Louy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
fantastic chapter,hilarious,poor bellepheron.
Author's Response: Lindsay, Yeah, poor Belle! Wanna come kiss him better? bev xx Thanks Lindsay, but what about poor Tuffy????? X Louy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
Still very funny ladies - and if anything belongs in the pit it's wasabi. Poor Snufflenutkins, he'll never train up in time now - oh wait, maybe that's a good thing - Angela
Author's Response: Angela, Don't worry Hun, this trainee hellhound is certainly not too old for new tricks and he will rise to the challenge! bev xx You may be surprised what my Snuffy can do Angela, don't be 'dissin the pooch'...ooh might have to use that...lol X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
Pffft. Another freakin' hilarious postcard from the pit. hehehe The "Vomitus Virgin" drink just totally cracked me up.
Author's Response: Ness, Belle says get yourself down here he's got ya a Vomitous Virgin and a purple nurple lined up on the bar! bev xx Giggles...thanks Ness, we must go drinking sometime...lol X Louy
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
Hello, me again! Running out of ways to say 'funny & original' so I'll give a brief top 3 fave bits: Mid death crisis, cultural exchange and a demon on a space hopper! And, it's funny & original - me like very much! Kirsty xxx
Author's Response: Borrowed the spce hopper idea for Dan hun. he said you guys used it to create dear little Crazy Eddie so what more recommendation would a deamon need to adopt one? bev xx Me like that you like very much...lol XXX Louy
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi
Hi again girls, I have to say, I am now feeling a mite guilty as I fear I may be a bit demonist, myself. To make amends, I was thinking of organising a march thru Cambridge. All the students will join in - we could wave pitchforks and sprinkle sulphur in our wake. I guess you 2 will be up for it? I'll be in touch with the details. In the meantime, keep up the good work. This really is extremely entertaining stuff and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Ooh look, there's another chapter so I don't have to ... Kirsty x
Author's Response: I've made my placard for the rally, it say's "Legalise Lemur Porn!". Does that strike the right tone? bev xx Count us in Birdy, didn't know how demonist I was myself till Tuffy whispered in my ear...XX Louy
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side
Hey, you got in a wildebeest migration - top notch! This is superb, so, so funny and far too many best bits to mention - oh go on then, I'll give it a go: Penguins clogging up the river styx, a hell hound with alopecia & IBS, anger intensification classes, magilights to replace candles, YED singing 'Dancing Queen' and of course the ongoing problems of the 'great, flopping pink bone flaps'. Fabulous work, ladies! Kirsty x
Author's Response: Wildebeest were specially for you Geekster! Well they are one of your many secret perversions aren't they? Bev xx Hehehe, glad you're having a giggle with this one Birdy and thanks for the great review...XX Louy
Reviewer: akumabarai (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
This is freaking HILARIOUS. I've been laughing out loud. I love that Manolo Blahnik is a demon. :) This is sort of The Screwtape Letters meets PG Wodehouse. I love it....
Author's Response: Cool, cool Penname Hun! And PG Wodehouse, wow very flattered! Bev xx Now that IS a compliment, thanks very very much...XXX Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
These chapters just make a person giggle. Such clever wording. You both are doing an awesome job with this story!
Author's Response: Giggling is good Ness! Lucifer giggles like a girl if ya tickle him in just the right place! bev xx So happy you're having a bit of fun with this one Ness, cos I know we are...lol XX Louy
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
The scary thing here is how bright you too really are, and what fiendish ploys you will come up with next!!!! The way you blend such an array of myth, philosophy and pop culture with your own (now patented, I hope?!) mixture of mayhem and madness is mind-blowing! The ideas you throw together or innocently slip into sentences make this whole story work so well. Snuffy as head Hell Hound RUNT, the guild of Succubae, Kronos from the Valkyrie division and many other gems just go to show how deviously talented you both are. By the way I am getting a little concerned that Tuffy might have the right of things and that Lust really is a 'Man-eater'?!!!! What in the Win****ter does she think she is up to?!
Author's Response: Abi - Snuffy, the RUNT sends ya his love and says if ya wanna pop by the Pit anytime soon he'll "give you a paw!" Bev xx Cool daemonic black writing there Abi, you got something you need to tell us????? X Louy
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi
I sense something heating up between Lust and Bellepheron there ... hmmmm? Kind of Days of our After-Lives style?!!!! Ha ha . Again winning lines and just clever, clever ideas ladies, your inventiveness appears boundless! Have to pull out some of my favorite parts - compelled to do so!!! Tuffy's suggestion over repackaging, and re-marketing 'US' so that the Up-top world is less Demonist - sheer brilliance... loved the idea of making "the ‘pit’ more desirable than the ‘aviary"!!!! Whilst as I've already said the 'thing' between Lust and Bellerophon is very interesting to me, as is Vlad using his children of the Night, to sniff out the Winchesters!!!! But on a personal note amongst your very amusing chapter -THIS had me going down in hales of laughter;"I’m sure one of the newly arrived probably wouldn’t even notice if you swapped, they’re usually far to busy with the screaming and the crying and the gnashing of teeth…never did figure that one out, but have you ever noticed it’s only ever the ones who went to catholic school who do the gnashing thing. " Another wonderfully entertaining chapter - they really are a sunny point in the day, and today I have two, to read - Tea and Bickies time I think!!!! LOL!!!
Author's Response: Abi - "Days of our after life!" Haha, Hun you're cracking me up! Oh and Vlad sends you a big...bite! bev xx Got to be the best feeling in the world...to make someone laugh!! Thanks Abi, X Louy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
brilliant chapter,very funny,i'l be waiting for more.
Author's Response: Lindsay - Big thanks for coming again to review, Belle loves his reviews! bev xx You won't have to wait too long, still having a blast writing this one..lol
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