Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 8 Grand Puppies and Duelling Banjos
Cant those idgits understand that their will never be a way to subdue a winchester at least not long enough. 'Cause one or the other will help and come back to the living. Of course that is THE WINCHESTER MOTO OF CLASS 102 KICK DEONIC ASS! I love it litterly.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sanatoriums and Self-Exorcism
This is seriously going to be one hell or earthly event.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 6 Feathered freaks and fistycuffs
These 2 idigets and their fantasy is really scaring me. As long as the boys are still together. I don't think there is any har yet!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
It feels like with the vivid imagery the these two bone heads are stateing feels like one is on vacation while the other is on work detail. It also feels that the arrival of our Dean is going to be a one big messy show case that they are all dieing for.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
‘Boy King’ and his vile daemon assassin brother remain invisible . . . . name Winchester has become a worse curse word than ‘Big J’ up in ‘Heaven’! Do all you can brother dear to track those wicked Winchester siblings . . . . . Two phrase that I admire freely frome of course your appointed mind. It just bugs the hell out of e that in the show SAM is the one that has his head on apedistol down stairs why do they want Dean? When SAM IS THE KEY, BUT TO WHAT? I love the vivid imagery.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi
This just keeps getting better and better. Vividly speaking of course.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side
Hard nosed and ruthless, well at least one of them has it very correct. I am liking it very, but very appreciatedly . . . . can't wait for the vividry of the WINCHESTERS to kick some butt. Do Demons have one? Well there is something about these two idgets of characters that they are very discriptive and illumanate there estate down under.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 Hooves and Hellhounds
Two annels that think very highly over the captian demon himself, but I trully don't think Dean will be coming after all. I do like your insentave discription of those two idgets. Vivid imagery.
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/06/08 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi
good an' thick wasabi? even for the prince of hell that should be interesting! so many fun ideas and little twists on the norm in this story, loving it!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/06/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side
heh heh, almost feel sorry for the seven! and poor Snufflenutkins - tofu? no! more roast human flavour bone-i-o's please!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/06/08 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 Hooves and Hellhounds
Veggie hellhounds, Daquri swilling satan, whimpering squeak toys - it don't get better than this! 'til next chapter anyway
Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi
Another great chapter- just what the doctor ordered! I loved the image of the head swapping with plague boils etc.- The descriptions are just great and the brotherly convesations just hit the spot. The Anger Up class was another great giggle fest- Thanks! Alison
Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side
Hi there Louy & Bev, I've started rereading this as I needed something to cheer me up after the finale and my op. I realised that I left a review to the first chapter and then nothing soo sorry .... Anyway I read the first two chapters to my Mum who's been staying with me and we both ended up in fits of giggles. My Mum has watched the odd episode with me and she loved the veggie hellhound with alopecia, the Ol' Franky references and Manolo Blahnik was also a hit with both of us! Alison
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 8 Grand Puppies and Duelling Banjos
LOL i didn't realise this story ended quite a while ago!! great job!! and i'm sure they are right now having fun with Dean since he's in Hell right now!! *sobs* do you think that maybe someone could write a postcard to them asking to let Dean off easy and not damage the 'goods' too much?? i know it's a bit difficult to ask for, but maybe since they exorcise Tuffy safely back to Hell then Tuffy and his bro might owe the bros a debt, you know!!? :p
Author's Response: ARGhhh how did I miss this review!!!! And thank you...I'm sure we can arrange something but it sounds from the spoiler sites that Kripke has an idea to keep Dean where he is for at least a while. Hope the aformentioned 'goods' don't get too singed though..Lol XX Thanks, Louy
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 Grand Puppies and Duelling Banjos
Last chapter eh- well I am bolstered with promises of more... maybe. What will I do without my insight into Hades High society and Tuffy's high jinx up top?!!! Well I can see Tuffy was heading for home once he decided to go to the sheriff's office to seek out the Wi*******rs. LOL at his attempts to 'self-exorcise'!!!! As always with Tuffy it's the casual comments that slays me (but apparently NOT him in 'pinky' form!!!). Liked the catalogue of violent ends he tried to bring to himself, culminating with his failed attempt to swing off a bridge; "hung around till I got bored then went for a cup of tea" -LoL!!! I thought Tuffy's inventive punishment of the clergy man was positively Trickster-esque!!!!! He has grown right in front of us, no longer simply exploding the problem away!!! Tuffy is definitely growing up - no longer quite so Hoof loose and Horn free - he is now arguing (sounding a little like Belle, by the way) for organisation; "Honestly, I despair sometimes and no matter how many times you tell them to get some T shirts printed up and a pamphlet with battle cries all printed out, they just ignore you" He really does sound like the Gordan Britass of the Van guard doesn't he? Must be his old school Demon genes rearing their multiple heads!!!!! As for BELLE... (my Beau!!!) fancy being accepted into the most elevated Evil family like that - just because Snuffy tried to get one back for Pup kind!!!!! Loved his acting 'drama-queen-of the-damned' classes... with none other than Brando himself and LMAO at the directors cut ending to the Von Crap saga in the 'Sound of Muzac'. Belle really is an upper-crusty Daemon isn't he? I have to say that I am relieved that Tuffy made it home safely - even if we don't know the outcome of the duel, we know the brothers were together... kind of like another diabolical deadline with our Favorite Brothers hmm? I also really enjoyed the idea of Supernatural taking over the underworld with T-shirts paying homage to Dean-isms!!!! Fitting! Lastly the idea for this was nothing short of genius Ladies and I have had such a good time reading all the mad-cap and the mayhem... all there is left to say is... Tuffy and Belle know how to find me... all they have to do is 'click' ... those boyz know how to 'click don't they????
Author's Response: Aci D’Abi, Just thought you should know Tuffy, Belle and snuffy all sporting T-shirts saying Aci D’Abi Rocks! Thanks for wunnerful reviews hunny. Bev xxxx Wow, your reviews are better than our fic you know that right??? Thanks so much Abi, you make me want to pick my pen up and write the sequel right now...lol XX Louy
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/08 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sanatoriums and Self-Exorcism
Ok - She-devils... I LMAO when I saw that you made me into an imaginary 'giant pink cockroach'!!!!!! But was so touched at your use of anything I prattle on about in your great fic, that I would have grinned dopey no matter what!!!!LOL. Now to said funny Fic... Tiffy is back on form hocking like a goodun... loved how close he came to sounding like 'defensive Sam' at the beginning! Loved how inventive you ladies got describing sputum!!! And Tuffy's take on the big guy "in primary colours" really throws that whole other light on Christmas huh?!!!! My fav Tuffy thought had to be his 'extreme do-over' Puppy Edition, to get Snuffy ready for the Deal collection deadline; "a course of hormone replacement may be the answer. They do it up here all the time, and it works a treat, makes everyone who’s on it more aggressive, more unrealistic and a lot more short tempered and that’s exactly what he needs and then some." And I am totally with Tuffy in his concern for big (one-armed, limp legged) Demon Bro. Duelling AND having to make all the arrangements during the Anti-Christmas season - tough gig! As for Belle - as usual he is right on the money - confirming all our worst suspicions... damnable Atkins diet, if something is too good to be true... it's from the dark side!!!! Fell about laughing at BoBo's cell (uh apartment!) and the fact that he is the 'bad' influence on Snuffy!!LOL. My favorite part of Belle's postcard has to be the duel with deSade. NEVER bring a rapier to a cannon fight Belle!!!! LOL. Another chuckle filled chapter - I keep being impressed by how you ladies keep coming up with new ideas like you do - touch of In-Satanity... I wonder? PS. I laughed till I cried - tears of joy of course !!!- at Belle's proposal... but am I she-devil enough for him I wonder? Especially if he is stepping from Lust!!!! (*sly smoldering-sidelong wink, to Tuffy... of course your next!!!!!)
Author's Response: Aci-D’Abi, “In-Satanity” that is just so wicked and cool my beautiful pink roachy friend and Belle says he’s ready for ya whenever! Bev xx What can I say...hormone replacement is the answer to everything...and Tuffy says he's willing to wait in line, he's heard great things about you and he reckons you're worth the wait...XX Louy
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 8 Grand Puppies and Duelling Banjos
Bev, Lou, How sad, the brothers little adventure is coming to an end. I wish I knew when Tuffy was going to be here (i live about half an hour from Monument I can help with the Winchesters, no bother at all) I do worry that you have gone off your meds again No Battle plan or dress code, no printed T shirts (oh the shame) Captain Von Crap In the Sound of Muzac (i almost peed my pants) join in the ironic cry of “Get me some pie!” as Lucifer wheels in the hostess trolley. He picked it up from that damned documentary about the Winchesters (freaking Dean Winchester and his lipid emerald eyes!) and he thinks its sooooo funny! That twisted freak, Kripke, (rules) has such a lot to answer for as half of the hell-spawn in Hades are now sporting T-shirts emblazoned with such epithets as “Shotgun shuts his cake-hole!”, “Hell Yeah!” or “Bitch!”. Oh Yeah!! deranged ‘fans’ (Never )a Pinky gathering called Asylum devoted to this puerile televisual nonsense and are heading off to waste their hard earned sovereigns on SN-ephemera. Have you ever heard of such insanity? There’s even hell spawn coming in from the Americas to attend, and some of those twisted UnGener’s (I want to come too) a perverted conflagration, (Never) The new thing down here is a ‘HunterGirl’. (Yeah HunterGirl) It’s one part each of peach schnapps, marmite, chocolate vodka and six cans of Red Bull shaken together in a bucket and garnished with an anchovy and one of those darling little umbrellas. (That explains a lot) You have outdone your wicked, evil, brilliant, selves with this. Loved this as much as I love the both of you. To my awesome girls. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal, “loved this as much as I love the both of you. To my awesome girls” Those are some of the nicest words I’ve ever had in a review. You have made my day. Thank you and love ya. Bev xx Crystal, as always your review left me breathless, and wanting to write more...I couldn't be happier that you liked this and that it put a smile on your face, you have certainly put one on mine with your kind words.XXX Louy
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sanatoriums and Self-Exorcism
Bev, Lou, I don't know how you still manage to have more. I can't remember the last time I laughed so hard. Just typical if you ask me, the best jobs always go to the pretty ones…that’s why I just know that pretty boy – the older Winchester *squelching crunchy throaty spit puddle* is bound to get the job of his choice once he gets down there. (pretty pretty boy) Even in hell the pretty ones have there choice typical Look out for it so you can avoid it brother dear, It’s called Supernatural and I am dismayed to hear that this Freak Kripke (rules)has blagged a 4th season. It’s a travesty! A travesty indeed!! Snuffy channeling Cujo, and M&M's, the Marquis De Sade, what a treat. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal, yeah unfair huh? Even in Hades the pretty ones rule! But then Dean is soooooo pretty! Bev xx He could rule anywhere, anytime, in any position he likes as far as I'm concerned...lol XX Louy
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 6 Feathered freaks and fistycuffs
Bev, Lou, Oh, you're killing me. I can see Snuffy wander over and starts humping his leg. Get him away from the winged wierdo before he is forever corrupted and is beyond redemption. Only you two could come up with UnGen like this wonderful " Never have I seen such well constructed and documented descriptions of torture and angst, and I can honestly say I’ve picked up more than just a few pointers. At the moment they have a list following the exploits of the worst of us and I must say, the daemonic works depicted have been a true inspiration." If Sam Winchester *spit* had indeed been required to read this list, it would give him way too much of a clue as to what to expect from the likes of us. And public transport, can truly be a concept from hell. Absolutely loved Wikipedia for the wicked, (does sound like us) And Gordon taking him for the cappuccino (I’ll get him a straw or something otherwise it’ll be everywhere!) and see what he knows, once he gets through with his stint in the ‘Sound Of Music’ room. Just too good to pass up. My dears you are both bloody brilliant. (Wicked, Warped, and brilliant) I'll never be the same again since ya'll came into my life. (another of the evils of UnGen) :) luv ya guys Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal, Belle has personally awarded you a lifelong subscription to his wicked Wikipedia. Bev xx Wicked, warped, and brilliant...rarely have I had such compliments...lol Thank you so much Crystal XX Louy
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 5 Torquemada and the Vomitous Virgin
Bev & Lou, YOU ROCK!!!!I think i hurt myself reading this chapter. Don't even know where to start. I laughed from start to finish. Poor Belle, it is time to chose another organ to think with, to let a "bird boy" get the better of him with lust.. Aurora's funeral sounded lovely, would have loved to seen Bucephalus with his black coat gleaming and white star ablaze. The newlly damned on a stick canape party sounded like a proper send off And UnGen a cover, I thought that was a secret. Innocent pure, angel wings harps and all. Yes they could teach a few courses in torture. In fact I’ve heard it said that especially the older one has had a touch of the bubonics a few times and all he would say on the matter was “M’fine, Sammy!”So all I’m saying brother is don’t underestimate the “Boy-King” because he’s probably tougher than he looks. You’re right though the older one is by far the prettier of the two... (i almost fell out of my chair laughing so hard) Your angel moulting because it was too warm, hanging out with lust. Lucifer it turns out is a man after my own heart, cowboy boots and peanut M&M's what a combo. With a rebel yell she cried More, More, More. luv ya'll Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal, Belle say’s would you like to come pet Bucephalus with him sometime? (Think he likes ya Crystal!) bev xx So now I have this vision of you in cowboy boots, popping M&M's by the handfull with a certain daemonic glint in yer eye Crystal...XX Louy
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots
Bev, Lou Another great chapter. I'm loving this. So Goethe was cheating. Lucky Snuffy getting the Dean job. And those wicked Winchester brothers always one step ahead. Red crocodile stacked heel cowboys boots, always had a thing for the cowboys. (Black boots, silver tipped) Can't wait for more. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal, umm, just thinking about Dean in cowboy boots...Yumm! Bev xx Love Snuffy, he so deserves the big breaks...XX Louy
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi
Bev & Lou Oh my naughty girls. This just keeps getting better and better. I was nearly in tears I was laughing so hard. Lust in healthcare, makes for a great bedside manner. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal, Belle’s all for lusty healthcare! Bev xx Yet when I worked on the wards it was positively frowned on...what's that about??? lol XX Louy
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side
Bev. Lou, I don't even know where to start. You kept me in stitches. From John's hell spawn, to penguins, chihauhaus and sloths. Love the pinky *feet*, and of course those full pouting lips can light a lustful fire in any woman, or light a fire in any lustful woman. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal, Belle says the penguins are driving him crazy, could he come stay with you for a while? Bev x Think Belle's got a 'thang' for ya Crys...but he's got a thing about pinky feet so watch out if you wear flip flops..XX Louy
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 Grand Puppies and Duelling Banjos
thankyou so much for this brilliantly funny story,iv'e really enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Lindsay, thank you for being a great reviewer and Belle sends you his love! Bird xx Real glad you enjoyed it Lindsay, always love bringing a smile...XX Louy
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 6 Feathered freaks and fistycuffs
The word Fistycuffs is not used nearly enough - though I am a little concerned that Belle has instigated it!!! Small glimmer of hope... or should that be Hellfire (?) on the horizon that Tuffy is such a well trained demon. But getting ahead of myself there... Enjoyed Tuffy's tirade about the 'Feathered Freak' using his hell hound as a seeing eye dog. LMAO at the thought of his greatest fear of Snuffy showing himself up when the Deal comes due and he leads the pack to retrieve Dean..."starts humping his leg instead of chewing on it!" The idea that you have expanded from last chapter of involving not just threads from the series (like Dixon) but the UnGen is clever. And I have to agree with Tuffy's appraisal 100% on March's reading list. "At the moment they have a list following the exploits of the worst of us and I must say, the daemonic works depicted have been a true inspiration. " The idea of a Man-bag and public transport both being Demonic in origin is a given... you ladies are tortured geniuses aren't you?!!! As for Belle's tirade - whoa! Thought the comparison between Dean's "I'm tired" and Tuffy's weak spittle, lacklusture, current state of mind was convincing and clever. Liked the brotherly advice to let the; "Bwahhahahaha, Come forth foul human and let me feast upon thy tender flesh’ as befits a Hadian of the first water!" But someone has to point out to Big Bro Belle, that his Dean-side is showing.... "You said doodoo, dude! No one who has credibility down here says doodoo!" LOL! The 'Gobs' verses 'spits example was a classic and as usual I found so many more phrases and idea's here that I would like to pull out and congratulate you both on, but I quote way too much as it is!!!!! LOL! Inspired stuff - on to next chapter - though I may run out of time to review.... have to read though, I am actually nervous about this Duel and what it could mean. See how well you dames have worked the brother angel?!!!
Author's Response: Abi, Belle asked me to tell you that he has fallen head over hooves with your wunnerful reviews and he says he'll throw Lust *gob* over this minute if you'll consent to be his bride! bev xx Tuffy bagsies the job as best man and say's he'll have you if Belle is true to form and buggers off before the big day!! X Louy
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