Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
I liked it..old muscle cars are way better than the ricers..IMO..although some of them are nice..I just like the classics..and i'm a hugh Mustang fan..lol..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: More stars? Thank you Mustang! Glad you liked it, I know what you mean about the classics...I kinda figured you were a huge fan of the M when I saw ya name. lol Thanks again.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 20/04/08 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Great description of the race, it felt like I was riding shotgun in the Impala! Uh, did Dean win the 3 pinkslips as well as the 10 grand? Not that he wants the other cars, but he's entitled to his winnings. I can see him letting the other drivers keep their cars for a fee, though. Sue
Author's Response: I suck with this late reply but on a better note: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the great descriptions of the race, I am so chuffed that you felt like you were shot gun!!! Yup yup, Dean got the pinkslips, and it would be so Dean to let them have their cars back on one of his evil conditions xx Thanks again, Sue Schelz x
Reviewer: Huey Riley (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Hell Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah!!! Now that's what I'm talking about Schelz. ROCKED!!! The race was out of this world awesome;) The big black truck sounds like a machine I would drive, especially seen as you pimped it out;) I love the uniqueness of your writing, and the whole theme of Bonnie&Clyde! You nailed this, pace was excellent! I wanna drive the Impala now, Dean drives it with passion and she responds to him. Now that's a team. Thanks for writing this... 10 don't quite cut it for this one... ;) Corey x
Author's Response: WOW!!! Corey that is the kind of reaction us writers like to see;) you have made my day...actually, night! Glad to have brought you so much joy over this, but then again you are a guy...cars, beers, and women! I'm probs way off with the order;) Hehehe it is a great compliment to read that you thought the race was not only out of this world but awesome!!! Haha you liked the pimped out black truck, thanks for liking the Bonnie&Clyde theme, my writing style and the pace. About wanting to drive the Impala, you would have to square that one with Dean, Sammy hardly ever gets to drive her. Thanks again, this was an amazing review and stars hun. Schelz x x
Author's Response: And for some reason, I don't know you'll now have to read my response with glasses. LOL soz
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
great job!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! ;)
Reviewer: dookie (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
DEAN & HIS BABY RULES !! very original, schelz, loved it!
Author's Response: Wow such lovely stars hun, thanks for saying this is original, glad you love it!!! Thanks a lot sweet;)
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
schelz Reading this makes me feel like im watching fast an furious only with better eye candy.(oh an vin diesel too). I really love your description its wicked I can really visualise what you are talking about. It look like old Chubby should have listened and saved the nos for the way back. see no one can up come aginst bonnie&clyde. That was brilliant I definatly enjoyed It. i loved the bit when I wonder where chubby cheeks is at, and when dean said you think you can beat me and my baby. they are real patners in crime all three of them. LOVED IT. UVERGUY JUVAGUST FOVERGORT TOVAGOO RAVAGITE SUVAGUM THIVAGIN IVVAGIN BAVAGAK SLAVVAGANG. SODOGO YOUDAGOO HADDAGAV EDEGNUDAGAR LADAGAND WIDDAGIG. HOVAGOPE YOUVAGOO LUVAGIKET IVVAGIT. JJ_HEAVEN
Author's Response: Why thank you hun, yep defo better eye candy with the exception of Vin Diesel;) Thanks for saying you could visualize. Hehehe Yup, Chubby should've listened. Certaintly partners in crime, all three, thanks JJ. Uver-goo nevaga novago ivagif suvagumwovagun novagoes divagis lavagandivagij...Hehehe
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Hehehehehe....just great Schelz...Love the description of the street racing, very nice job - Kel
Author's Response: Hey Kel, thanks a lot for taking the time to read and review. Really glad you liked the descriptions of the race. ;) Schelz x x
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Like you I love this story too. Nice to read a fun short story. Very well done.
Author's Response: You're a sweetheart! Thank you very much, glad you loved this story and found it a fun read;)
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Schelz this is great, your idea is original! And you shine at description. Thanks for the intense ride! I loved this line: "The Impala roared loudly, just as angry as its loyal owner, Dean smiled proudly, felt the power, adrenalin rushed through his body "That's my girl."
Author's Response: San, you're a sweetheart;) Thank you for finding this original, and it's a huge compliment to me for you to say I shine at description. Means loads to me that you enjoyed the ride. Thanks for picking out your fav part, that's one of mine too. Hehehe
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
As if I would dare bluff my way throught this one.... ;) Absolutely awesome Bails!!! As always the conversations between the boys are spot on, it's actually a tad bit creepy how well you write them... lol In regards to Bonnie and Clyde..... only you. hehe ber xxxx
Author's Response: Ber, you wouldn't dare LOL ;) Aww thanks hun, means so much to me that you found it awesome! Glad you found the conversation on point. I do creepy quite lot though don't I? Hehehe In regards to Bonnie&Clyde...Why thank you!!! I like to try and be as different as poss and come up with ideas I don't think anyone else ever would. Glad it paid off;) Bails xxxx
Author's Response: Cheers for the stars they shine extra bright from my c.p.i.c
Reviewer: orlilover621 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Too too good. I forgot to actually give you stars... lol.
Author's Response: Another one, loving it!!! Thanks for the second visit, this time leaving behind a lovely trail of stars.
Reviewer: orlilover621 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Haha, that was great. Even beat the Nos. Well that's the Impala. A car that great can never lose. it's the best hands down.
Author's Response: Hey Crystal, thanks a lot for this. Yeah course they beat the Nos, Dean and his baby...there's no question ;) You're so right, a car like that and a guy like Dean could never lose.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Glad you decided to post this - gave me a real smile. Can hear the engines and smell the rubber, nice one! Angela
Author's Response: I'm glad too;) thanks for the lovely review, I'm glad I was able to make you smile. Schelz x
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Loved it , a man and his CAR. Dean is as bad as my brother with his f250, great writting...............
Author's Response: Thanks hun. Lol Yup a man and his car indeed! Glad you liked this;) your brother and Dean would get on then...
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
that was brilliant,you should be proud of that.very funny.
Author's Response: Aww thanks Darkhunter, that means a lot, I am very proud and happy that you found it funny;)
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
that was really cute!! bonnie and clyde?? i never thought of them like that but it suits!
Author's Response: Thanks hun, glad you found it cute and thanks for saying it suits.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Can't imagine why you didn't like this Schelz, it's absolutely awesome. You got my three fav. characters down to a T and you just play with them so well... The whole race was mindblowing and the words you put in the boys mouths are so original but so right at the same time...just awesome girl! And tell Rae - fantastic banner, love that image of those two together...X Louy
Author's Response: :) Thanks hun, means the world to me that you think I got Sam, Dean AND the Impala to a T. Nice to know I can play with them without ruining it for the readers. LOL So glad you found the race mindblowing and found some of the dialouge original. I'll tell Rae you said...funny, she couldn't stop looking at them and niether could I, I'll add you to the list shall I? Hehehe Thanks for the stars. Schelz x
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
This is brill. I loved it but the funny bit was when chubby chuck was outta the race.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot sharx, glad you found Chubby chuck losing funny. Hehehe
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Bebg OK Hunny like I said before this is the one where I can see you dressed to the 9's, covered in bling and shakin ya bootylicious bod on the finish line! Dean and Sam's eyes'd be put on stalks Hun! hey, who are you and what have you done with my shy Bebg? Aba xxxx
Author's Response: Shall I do my boootylicious dance? *uh-oh uh-oh uh-oh uh-oh oh no no* Don't worry bebg is still here but everyone has a alter-ego right? Hehehe..wanna know her name? Drum roll.... (e-mail me) bwehahaha Bebgx x x
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Schelz.. You are right, they are much better pair than Bonnie & Cylde...this has the feel of Fast and the Furious... hahaha... Great job!! i'm now thinking why they didn't do it sooner in the series...... :) Dean's a crazy driver enough to win...LOL
Author's Response: Lyn;) Thanks a lot hun, Dean and the Impala are definitely a better pair. LOL Yes, you have good taste in movies, I would have no idea about Nos if it weren't for Paul Walker. hehehe They should do that in the series shouldn't they? I would love to see Dean race! ;)
Author's Response: And thanks for the stars.
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde
Hey Schelz! I know I've already said but I thought I'd say in review too - Great story! I'm glad you decided to write it :D
Author's Response: Aww thanks Rae, I'm glad I decided to finish writing it too. Ta for the awesome Banner hun.
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