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Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 14

This was a great story. I liked Shalimar..glad she got here revenge with Kate..I'm gonna read the next part to this story. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hi, Lucky Shalimar, how many of us would love to plant a kiss on Dean's cheek, or anywhere on Dean for that matter!!!!!!!!
Loved this story.
Will you be re-introducing Shalimar in any future writing you do?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story and reviewing every chapter of Revenge is Sweet. I have started a new story entitled A Ghost from the Past featuring Shalimar and the Winchesters.

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hi, Sammy's awake, yay.
Dean's checking out the nurses and teasing his brother, love it. x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

Hi, I really like Shalimar, great character and so very much needed by everyone involved. x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 11

Hi, Dean sure is a great actor. He played the victim with such ease who could fail to believe him? x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hi, Bad news the detectives aren't giving up. Loved how Shalimar managed to ditch them. Trouble is now that they've entered the farmhouse they're gonna be sniffing around a lot more. x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 9

Hi, Sam and Dean are lucky to have Shalimar on their side. The way she handled the detectives was very impressive.
The medical stuff was fine, i was impressed by your knowledge. x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hi, Love Dean's smart comebacks and Bobby's snarky comments to Sammy about Dean's stubbornness.
What's wrong with Dean? x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hi, This chapter was very much needed to get Sammy the help he needed and give Dean time to figure things out a little. x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, That was ugh, breaking Sammy's fingers like that. Kate's made her escape for now but i have a feeling that Dean's going to hunt her down and make her pay for what she's done.

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

Dean's rescue of Sammy is not too hot at the moment. Nice touch adding the vampire's who appear to have a consience to help the boys out. x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love to read Dean 'all guns blazing' and racing against time and common sense to get to Sammy and i love reading Bobby working on a plan to step in and help out when needed because lets face it our Winchester boys quite often need a hand from their only remaining 'family'.

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

Mitch and Stan think they're a couple of comedians which i'm sure Sammy could do without right about now, although i have to say i love the way you've written them. Kate is really cold and vengeful so Dean and Bobby better hurry on and find a way to rescue Sammy because it sure doesn't look good for him at the moment.

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 2

So it's the vampires from 'Dead Mans's Blood', poor old Sammy's not going to get out of that any time soon, hopefully Dean and Bobby will figure something out soon. x

Reviewer: sunnyjunedays (Signed) · Date: 12/08/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Loved this first chapter. Where has Sammy gone? Who is the mysterious person who has him tied up? Are the store assistant and store manager involved in some way?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 14

Heck yeah! I'd kiss Dean, too!
I gotta feeling we'll be seeing Shalimar Jones again.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 13

I'm stil breathing, you're safe and the bitch is dead. True Dean Winchester!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 12

Yeah! Go Shalimar!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

Dean really played the dumb innocent victim great! He even got in a few cheap pot shots under the guise of ignorance. Cool!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

Shalimar and Bobby are good sparring partners. Good touch adding that Shalimar could still smell Dean's scent in the pit.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 9

Shalimar's like a lioness with her cubs. Good for her! Love how she handled the detectives.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

Bobby's comment about Sam's knuckle-headed brother was funny!
I also loved Shalimar's remark "I always do" after Dean tells her to take care of herself.

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 14

Marlana,
great story i liked how you had Shalimar helping Dean and Bobby save Sam from Kate.
Renee

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 14

this was a great story!!!!!!
you had all the elements that would satisfy any reader-timing , tenor, suspense, the Winchester boys, Bobby, and a great new character -Shalimar-AWESOME writing!!!!
I waited to the end to review because i couldn't wait to see where you were going with this. I loved the idea that a vampire would help the boys because of Sam letting Lenore's nest go back in Bloodlust. OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!
I really wanted Kate to pay for what she did to Sam and Dean-excellent job!!!!!!!!!!
you have an interesting style and you keep your readers interest!!
BRAVO!!!!
ps: it would be great to see Shalimar in another story.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good more shalimar! I love the name Shalimar Jones. It's like Foxy Brown.
Dont' worry about the ack of action. You have to set thing sup and take care of the wounded.

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