There is a good start and it even scared the hell out of me. I thought that for sure the wolf that was inside DEAN was going to kill SAM and BOBBY>

Author's Response:

Well I was writing with the intention to thrill ha ha! When I do my normal writing, it is how I portray Werewolves so I thought it might be fun to have Dean turn like that. I don't think he will kill them, but you never know ha ha !

Thanks for the comment chuck

Arctos

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well i think its great. update soon! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your reply, I will be getting the next chapter up soon. I don't really know how to go about Dean becoming a Werewolf though :S I mean my idea of a 'Wolf is different from that of the one on the episode "Heart" but I'll see :D

Thanks again

Arctos x

Ok...no offense but I'm not diggin' it. They're not talkin' like Sam and Dean do. It doesn't flow. Sorry.


Author's Response:

To be honest, this is my first story and I haven't wrote in the persona of Sam and Dean before. I mean, for a start, I'm english lmao so I am probs going about writing there speech in the wrong way. As for flowing, I don't know, I guess we all read things different ways.

Thanks for your review though

Arctos x