Reviewer: nightchills (Signed)
18/03/08 07:18 PM · On:
This was a good piece, but ended too open-ended, will see if All the King's Men does the job for me.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Yeah, I was trying to not be so obviously happy and a little more obscure. Many readers wanted more which brought about All the King's Men which I actually like better. Hope it does it for ya! Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed)
16/02/08 09:23 AM · On:
This is a tough one to read, there is a sadness, a soft despair that permeates through the story. The bit where Dean is sitting on the floor crying is heartwrenching.
Well written and thought provoking. thank you
Kripke just always surprises us with the direction the show takes. I think we all expected some emotional moments with Dean dealing with what demonJohn said, but no, the show threw us the curve of John dying and them having to deal with that.
Dean is so strong to keep going even with all the emotional issues he has, and Jensen is just so good when he does the emotional breakdown. Really wish we could see something like this on the show. That would be heartbreaking.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
03/05/07 07:51 PM · On:
That was really nice, I'm heading over to All The King's Men. Better keep my tissues handy. - K
Author's Response: Thanks. I am so please this story still has life in it, even tho the show handled the aftermath of the crash totally differently.
Reviewer: Ice54 (Signed)
11/02/07 01:35 PM · On:
Wow... great story :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Funny but I usually work a story to death, rewriting, etc. but this was a very quick story, basically a first draft. I am glad it works.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed)
02/02/07 07:55 PM · On:
Oh, my poor boy!
This was brilliant! Thank you for sharing this.
I'm off to read All The King's Men!
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad the readers wanted more after this story cause I really enjoyed writing AtKM and I do think the two pieces work well together.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed)
24/01/07 07:55 PM · On:
BJ- Dont know why you dont have any reviews- so I will be happy to be the first over here to leave one. Very much liked this story and I know that broken Dean isnt always so popular- but you did a really cool job with it- esp. in light of where S2 has taken him. Kudos!
Thanks Tree, after the S2 started I didn't know how relevant this story would be cause it isn't how the show handled it. Of course, IMTOD was the perfect way to proceed.
I do think seeing JA act a breakdown scene for Dean would be amazing. Every time he cries, my heart breaks for him. Later, B.J.