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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 5

A 1970 Pontiac GTO...are you kidding me...the girl had the best parents in the world...lol
Damn, and I thought the chain and charm was a cool present...wow
Great story, liked the golem, and I don't think I've seen a proper one in a story before so nice original idea.
I think looking at this story and the one you posted next, you still have the lovely turn of phrase but are developing your own style...looking forward to seeing what you come up with next...X Louy

Author's Response:
I got the idea of the golem from Terry Pratchett's "Clay Feet". He is an amazing author and if you ever find yourself away from the computer and in need of a read, try him out. I have yet to be disappointed by the man.
This story was weak and has lots of lose ends. But I full intend to learn from it and have some kick patootie ideas as to how to tie up those loose ends. ;)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

Damn, what I would do to get a birthday present like that...lol Moving on for the finish...

Author's Response:
The simple things from the right person can carry alot of meaning.
Thank you for reviewing. I need the opions of non-biased readers to guide me to my goal. To help me grow as a writer and earn another title. Daughter, sister, wife, mother, and maybe one day, author.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

So not a zombie, I like the whole 'body looking like it's made of clay'...and I'm interested to see exactly what happens with M...gonna move on.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

And again my heart bleeds for Eric, and I'm glad he's helping M, I'm starting to have quite a soft spot for him...
Again you hit the boy's voices perfectly...nice work...moving on.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a good start Michelle, and I have to say I feel incredibly sorry for Eric, slowly descending into despair because of the brutal murder...
You have some really nice turns of phrase as well, I smiled at the waitress faking an orgasm of happiness...and you have the boy's voices down...and that's hard to do. Moving on to chapter 2...

Author's Response: I wish you could see the giant cheese eating grin that is creasing my face right now. You are the best.

Reviewer: Pandemonium (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

Good! Glad to see you still writing this;)
God bless x x

Author's Response: You are to kind. The story is a mess but it does have some good parts. Thank you for your support. Kind words go along way to boosting the confidence and who couldn't use that?

Reviewer: Pandemonium (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

Very interesting Mickey!! Keep writing hun;)
Kaide xxx

Author's Response:
Thank you soo much for reading it! Iwas so nervous posting it I was shaking. Nobody ever took an interest in my writings and I stopped doing it along time ago. Boredom is why I thought I would give it a try now.
Thankyou for your kind words and most importantly for taking you time to read it.

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