Reviewer: okedoke (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story!Wish it was longer.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I though about adding a touch more but didn't want to spoil it. I have some ideas for longer fics, so keep an eye out.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved this, well done this being your first story, and hope you continue to write more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have a few ideas, its just finding the time to write them thats hard!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a great, great start, so touching. Hope there is a lot more!!
Author's Response: thanks a lot for the review! x
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was nicely done. There is realistically no way Sam would not struggle at least for a little while with the fear of Dean being gone again, and I like how it made Dean more determined in the end to start fighting to get out of his deal. Good first effort :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I'm so glad people enjoyed it soph x
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
You definately need to write more. There are a few tags to MS out there at the moment and this one is up there with the best. Beautifully written and quite poignant in places. I enjoyed this a lot, thanks for the read.
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks for the kind review, you've put a huge smile on my face, my co-workers are looking at me rather strangely lol!! I haven;t had a chance to read the other tags yet, but I will as soon as I have the time thanks again xx
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
If that is your first effort, I think by the time you get to your tenth, we are going to be blown away. That was a wonderful moment. We haven't seen MS in Australia yet, but I have peeked at a few clips, and it looks heartbreaking. I had tears in my eyes when I read this, especially at the end when Sam broke, and Dean vowed silently to never leave his side. That was a wonderful piece, and I hope that you are inspired to write many more. Thank you for sharing this.....Jules
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words, I was not expecting this sort of response or even reviews for this! lol. Truat me you will love MS, easily one of the best episodes to date. I have a couple of ideas rolling around in my head its just trying to find the time to write thats so hard. I'm really glad you liked this, especially if it moved you. I can only hope that whatever I write has some sort of effect on people. But watch out for stuff from me, hopefully appearing here soon soph xx
Reviewer: Kycharmer (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
I can't believe this is your first fanfic! It was really good. I will be looking for new stories from you soon!
Author's Response: Yeah it was and I was really nervous about posting it, but reviews like yours put such a huge smile on my face. thanks so much =]
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG, it may be your first fic, But it was really awesome. I really loved it!!! I really do hope dean as well as sam find a wayout of the deal..... I have seen Sam in MS, He looked so empty, I dont like the new Sam, the one without dean. He is much better with dean than alone!...Poor sammy.... Anyways.....good work, infact I dont have any words to tell ......... keep it going.....All the best!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I got so excited to see that I had new ones this afternoon. I'm sure the writers will find a way out for dean....otherwise....well I don't know what would happen but it would not be good!! =]
Reviewer: FinalFantasyGirl (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Really liked it, thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed it =]
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOL...you should definitely write more....i love the eppy as well, and it kinda bugs me how Sam didn't tell Dean what happened on the first Wed...and this is good tag to the eppy... :)
Author's Response: mmm I know what you mean, sometimes I think the writers need to put in a bit of the emotional stuff when it comes to the brothers. thanks for the review, hopefully it won't be too long before I wrte something new =]
Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great fic for your first!!! Keep them coming!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! I have a few ideas I just need to get down, so hopefully you'll see some stuff up soon. =]
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! I have a few ideas I just need to get down, so hopefully you'll see some stuff up soon. =]
Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
For your first fic this was great. I loved it. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for taking the time to review. You should hopefully see some more of my stuff up pretty soon =]
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well definately don't give up writing. This was good, I liked it. Laura
Author's Response: Thanks Laura I have some ideas floating around in my head, its just finding the time to write, but I'm sure I'll get round to it soon. soph =]
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it! keep them coming
Author's Response: glad you like it. definitely more to come in the future, thanks for the review =]
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow is this really your first fic,it was fantastic.well done.i will be looking out for more of your fics.
Author's Response: thank you for your kind words. its amazing but posting one fic has got me addicted to reviews already, so I guess I'll have to write more lol thanks =]
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
Write more, write more! Great first fic, you really caught their voices and relationship well, and that final image, Dean holding 'his precious treasure' and crying that 'lone silent tear' while he decided to fight the deal, was just beautiful. Well done!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much. That is such an amazing thing to hear .... and my first review too. That has put a huge smile on my face and definitely spurred me into action. Hopefully it won't be too long before a write more. =]
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