Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
Of course Sara makes it out alive!!! Right???? Right???? Great chapter, poor Jack, LOL. Glad he is ok at this point. REALLY looking forward to the rest but at the same time I don't want it to end, so just so you know ahead of time, I am expecting another adventure in this series. LOL.
Author's Response: Okay well let me finish this one before you all start hollaring for a new one...lol. I'm thinking I might give Sara, Dean and all their angst a break for a bit. I'm thrilled though that you're ejoying and would like to read more about them. Thanks for reviewing - Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 14
With the help of Jack, I hope that Dean and Sam'll find Sara before it's too late. Terrific chapter Kel, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying, and I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.. it's gonna be a long one. ;) thanks for the review - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 13
Wow! A fairy vampire----like vamps aren't creepy enough! As soon as the wind started to increase and Dean left the room I was shouting in my head, "don't leave Sara!" He listened about as well as the people on TV do.
Author's Response: They never listen do they...lol. Glad you enjoyed Shannon. Hopefully the rest of the story will get it done for you. Thanks for the review - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
great update! Jack under the bed, i can't believe he really managed such a stunt, lol. And a bit of hurt Dean can't hurt right... Oh oh oh, and thanks for the bearded Dean image, this is soooo my story!!! One week to wrap this up, unless you'll hand me the happy ending as a welcome gift... Because you remember, seven days!!!!
Author's Response: LOL, yeah imagine it, though he wasn't quite as graceful in extracting himself...lol. Gotta LOVE the bearded Dean..maim. I'm wrapping this up as we speak, no worries ;)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 14
Loved this chapter Kel and the bath mat solution for sore paws was a stroke of genius, trust Sammy to come up with that...lol Looking forward to the next one...can't wait to see where this is going...xx Louy
Author's Response: Thanks much Louy.. Sammy's one smart cookie alright ;) I'll update soon - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
Wowzers! can't wait to read the climactic ending, kel! this has been a great ride, from the start, and i'm practically jumping up and down to get to the end (it's like a big present, all wrapped up nice and pretty, with a huge red bow on the top). --cricket
Author's Response: LOL, so glad I could deliver it Cricket. I'm working on the end as we speak. Thanks for the kind words ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 14
oh poor sara,hurry up sam, dean and jack.can't wait for next update.
Author's Response: Honestly, I hope to have the next chapter done in the next day or so.. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed - Kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 13
So no more need for windex? Poor Sara - Dean won't take this happening on his watch well... Nicely written, even if I do one give those two a quick shove at each other. Maybe Sam could do it for me after they're minus one vampire fairy? Enjoying it Kel --- Angela
Author's Response: hm...no more need to window wash..well there's one way to remain positive...lol. And no worries, I'm shoving, I'm shoving, I just have make sure that when they finally make up their minds this time, there'll be no going back. ;) Glad you liked.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awww...Dean, no, don't do this to yourself and Sara, both of you deserve happiness. What a cliffhanger, Sara is gone and Dean is unconscious, hope that Sam'll be back soon. I'm waiting with eagerness your next chapter Kel.
Author's Response: Update's up...lol. Sorry for the delayed response. Hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter as well. Thanks as always for reading ;)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 13
Love it to bits...this is such a great and unexpected twist, you had me completely fooled and on/off feelings between Sara and Dean are a great parallel for the confusion that's going on around them...roll on next chapter Kel...awesome cliffhanger too!
Author's Response: Thanks Louy, glad you liked. As for the cliffy, well, I gotta keep you all on your toes....lol
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 12
AH, now it makes sense..very strange experience going backwards in a story but I love this enough to do just that. And all the pieces are falling into place...moving on (in the right direction this time...lol) X Louy
Author's Response: LOL, yeah hopefully it reads a little better this way. Thanks again for all your help - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
When this was all over and done with he would be leaving with Sam. Don't. You. Dare. Do you realise that in three weeks i'm gonna be into your house with the physical ability to kick your american ass?! And if the story is not done by then, you'll perform that happy ending, live! It would be a nice bedtime story... And Cat, yeah i love Cat also, but you could bring Sara back in a Christmas story too... Anyway, three freakin' weeks. You got the M&Ms, take5 and Oreos yet?...
Author's Response: Kick My Ass....yeah right. You'd better watch what you say, cause I'm your American contact on your entrance forms... ;) More Sara, man, I'd figure you'd had enough already. Kitchen is well stocked and I'll even lay in a store of danish ;) Three WEEKS!!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 13
fantastic chapter,can,t wait for next update.
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh crap!!!! You are making it very difficult for me to be patient. Thanks Kel......
Author's Response: Man another Oh, Crap. I really did worry you all didn't I. Thanks for having a wee bit of patience with me here - Kel
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
Kel, what the hell a cliff hanger???? are you trying to kill me????
what a great story so far, i love it. i added you to my favorite list your stories are great. keep up the great work. Renee
Author's Response: A CLIFFHANGER, you say that like you're suprised Renee...lol. I gotta hit you all with the cliffhangers, that way I'm sure you'll come back for more. Thanks so much for adding me to your favorite list and for all the recent reviews. I'm thrilled you're enjoying Sara and her family - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 13
What an awesome chapter Kel! An emotional ride once again... There are so many touching lines in there. You did a great job describing everyone's feelings. The picture of the "dance" you created was just beautiful. I love this story and I am still hoping for a happy end.... Can I tempt you with cookies or gummibears - lol?
Author's Response: hm.. cookies will work just fine. ;) though, of course they'll have to involve some sort of chocolate...just a hint, chocolate covered coffee beans REALLY do the trick ;) Glad you're doing well, kiddo, and I'll talk to you soon.
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 13
Deeeeeaaaaannnn!!!! Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap & once more for good measure, OH CRAP!!! You HAVE to update ASAP, PLEASE!!!!!
Author's Response: OH, CRAP!!, sorry but I couldn't let you be the only one flinging crap...huh, well there's an image. Glad you enjoyed and I will update just as soon as I can. - Kel
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 13
damn! this just gets better and better...
Author's Response: Thanks, Anna glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 13
There were so many things I loved about this chapter. Where to begin ...? First of all, Tinkerbell with fangs? That line had me howling with laughter ... Then the whole Dean-Sara angst had me tearing up. I particularly like the description of their dance, and how their steps are faltering. It was a beautiful metaphor. I loved the conversation between Sam and Sara, too. You've put me on an emotional rollercoaster, but I'm loving it. Can't wait to see how this ends. I've got my fingers crossed on a few things. :) -- cricket
Author's Response: lol, so glad you enjoyed the TInkerbell with Fangs...and I mean come on, I have to put a little Dean-Sara agnst in there or it wouldn't be any fun now would it...lol. I will get the update up just as soon as I figure out where the heck I'm heading ;)
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
good job keep it comming.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
Loved how Dean is taking care of Sara, he's so tender with her. An Anchanchu, seems to be a terrible monster the way Dean reacted to the news. Amazing story so far Kel, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Next chapter is written and waiting for a beta, glad you're enjoying so far Oceane, take care - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 21/04/08 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 12
Kel, this one was once again you writing at your best (hm, English.... is that how you say it?). I was really waiting for this update and I loved it! So glad your family let you take some time off so you could write - lol. Thank them from me :) Loved all the lines between Sara and Dean, Sam's feelings about the Impala and Sara's home, everyones anxious wait for Bobby's call... An Anchanchu???? First I wanted to congratulate you on coming up with such a great name for a creature but then I googled it and... OMG! That doesn't sound good! You have me on the edge of my seat now!
Author's Response: I try and I mean seriously try and always base my baddies on real creatures (well sorta real...lol) It's just more fun that way, plus I actually dig researching them. That being said then I usually twist them a bit to fit my needs. So glad you liked, and yeah Sara is indeed in trouble. Thanks for reading, hun, and take care of yourself.
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 20/04/08 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 12
well im about to fall at the edge of my seat here as what the hell is making sara sick. hehehehehe. please oh pretty please update soon!
Author's Response: Doing my best to get that update done, Cherry. Glad you're enjoying and hold onto that edge just a bit longer. - Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 20/04/08 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 12
Hey Kel, Well, once again you have made my day. I check for your updates two or three times a day, which is totally unrealistic, I know....but, I figure there is always the chance you might sneak a chapter in quick....so I am always delighted when I see your updates sitting there waiting for me. I have to say that this story has been a bit weird. Not in a bad way....but definitely different. I haven't decided if I truly like it or not....sorry. I always like Dean and Sara though and I am hanging...with very little patience I might add....to see where you are going with this. Please, please....don't let it end the way the last story ended, Kel.....You have made those two so compatible, so comfortable, so real as a couple it makes me feel ill that they are both unhappy..... Anyway, enough of that drivel....I hope this finds you and your family well and happy. Cheers Vicki
Author's Response: He he he, Vicki I gotta say for a girl that's not sure if she's enjoying, you've done a hell of a lot of reading...I loved this review. Hopefully, at the end of the trip you will believe it's been well worth it., If not, well let's be honest I ain't getting paid here so basically tough luck :) Me and mine are doing just fine and I hope that goes the same for you. Take care and I will rush, rush, rush that next chappy just for you - Catch you later Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 12
I really enjoy the off and on relationship between Sara and Dean. One minute they're avoiding one another and the next they can't keep their hands off each other. It shows the struggle they're having within themselves over their love.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, I'm really glad you're still enjoying. I'm always worried, it'll be a bit too much whining and drive people away...lol. Hard to find the balance between hunting evil and all the other crap. Take Care - Kel
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