Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 9
oh, man, brian's dead, definitely not good for the boys, and now what's wrong with Sara...Dean get your ass in there and find out now...great tension building chappy, kel!! moving onward....bambers;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 8
dang, i was hoping Dean would've have found something out the ordinary about with greg...hopefully the yfigure this out before it's too late for Sara...moving onward...awesome chappy, kel!! bambers;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 7
love the family moments you put in here, excellent touch!! Maybe it was the fact that each scar was not just some minor mishap but a badge of honor he'd earned while doing a thankless job. Maybe it was the fact that she knew each scar as well as she knew her own and she could empathize with the pain he'd gone through. Who knows, all Sara knew was that she'd missed him more than she had imagined it was possible to miss someone over the last six months. Worst of all she was pretty sure that Dean now knew it. --loved this line!! reading onward...bambers;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 6
"Sam, you'd better not be rifling through my panty drawer," Sara called as she headed toward the stairs. --heehee...loved that!! Come on, Sammy, figure it out, somethings wrong with Sara, she's not just really tired!! damn, men are stupid sometimes!! great job so far, kel...moving onward...
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 5
A snort of laughter burst from Sam as Dean’s expression went from overconfident to incredulous. So deadpanned was Sara’s delivery that he would have believed she was truly oblivious to the tension in the room, if she hadn’t chosen that moment to tip Sam a wink. Sam couldn’t help but grin, after all, the girl deserved to get a bit of revenge. -- HA! Woohoo...get your revenge, Sara!! that was great!! Love the serious tension in the room, and glad the boys have realized that Jack barking and obvious dislike of Greg might be something more than general dislike!! great chappy, kel!!
Author's Response: Glad to see you're hanging in their B.. Did I say thanks for this...cause I mean it really I was so bummed - Catch you later, Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great, big wonderful Jack. I've always wanted a St. Bernard to come rescue me -- though instead of brandy in the cask around his neck, i would request chocolate. another amazing chapter. i'm looking forward to the ending to wrap it all up with a nice big bow. i love how sam finally told dean the truth about gordon's death. i hope he now can see how strong sara really is and stop being such a doofus and get back together with her!! *hint hint hint* i love how you write sara, a strong capable woman, who doesn't take an s***! Looking forward to the ending! :) --cricket
Author's Response: LOL, yeah chocolate would work better for me too... hm.. I'll have to consider hooking him up this winter when we're out sledding. What fun ;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 4
have to run off to get ready for work, but am looking forward to more when i get home tonight...lovign the story so far...bambers;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 4
awww...my heart is breaking for poor Dean!! Trying to remain stoic and strong, not showing how he really feels for Sara...another awesome chappy, kel...bambers;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
Damn, Sam slashing Dean's tires to get him to stay there, when Dean finda that out he's gonna be so pissed...my poor Sammy!! lol...good plan until Dean went and ruined it by saying they needed two new ones...moving onward...
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loved how you had Sara's smile falter the moment she was alonem showing her true feelings...lol, i feel like i should know all these characters, including Jack...for some reason they sound familiar to me!! great chappy...moving onward...bambers;)
Author's Response: LOL, yeah well when y'all come on down for Amazons '09 you can meet big jack in person ;) Thanks for the review - Kel
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
awesome start to your story kel, love Dean in protective mode...love how he told Sam that he watched him while he was in college just like he planned on watching Sara now...reading onward...bambers;)
Author's Response: Ah....B, you rock. Thanks so much for dropping by to help shore up my lost reviews ;) Hope you enjoy - Kel
Reviewer: WICKY987 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 15
just started reading your stuff its great , i like the feel of it although in the real or unreal world of spn this wouldnt happen, but us thirty somethings can dream!!!
Author's Response: Thanks...Wicky, that's what makes this series fun, It'll never happen on the show..(and I'd probably hate it if it did...lol) but it makes for a nice little daydream...Thanks for reading and taking the time to review - Kel
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 15
loved the update. i'll be sad to see the story end.
Author's Response: Thanks, Anna, that's a really nice compliment.. No worries, the last chapter should be a good long one...
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 15
Nope...didn't even yawn. I love your Sara stories.
Author's Response: Not even a yawn...LOL. I'll take that. Glad you enjoyed and I'll get the update going soon.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 15
Sara fought the fairy like a pro and Jack too. Hope both of them'll be fine. That was a terrific chapter Kel, can't wait to know how the story'll end.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane, so glad you enjoyed and I hope to update this week. I always appreciate your thoughts. ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 15
that was a great chapter,i really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks Darkhunter, so glad you enjoyed. And thanks for the review it's always nice to know that people enjoy - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 15
Loved, loved, loved this chapter! Jack was so awesome, Sara put up an amazing fight and Sam and Dean tried their best.... TRIED???? Hell, I just read Fredo's review! YOU ARE NOT GOING TO KILL A MOTHER OF THREE!!!! Ahem, that being said, I hope it is just a joke, as we do not want to see all the women Dean loves getting killed and especially not a mom. Glad you didn't break up the chapter - it was nice and juicy. Now on to the happy end, ok??? :) ! So, a house guest - who might that be - lol? Have a great Mother's Day and you ladies enjoy the time you get to spend together!
Author's Response: LOL, my houseguest was messing with you...I'd never kill Sara off especially with you in your delicate condition ;).....lol. THis time I get to give Fredo a hug for you...Talk to you soon, take care - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 15
Loved, loved, loved this chapter! Jack was so awesome, Sara put up an amazing fight and Sam and Dean tried their best.... TRIED???? Hell, I just read Fredo's review! YOU ARE NOT GOING TO KILL A MOTHER OF THREE!!!! Ahem, that being said, I hope it is just a joke, as we do not want to see all the women Dean loves getting killed and especially not a mom. Glad you didn't break up the chapter - it was nice and juicy. Now on to the happy end, ok??? :) ! So, a house guest - who might that be - lol? Have a great Motehr's Day and you ladies enjoy the time you get to spend together!
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thank you, Kel...this was an excellent Mothers Day gift. I love what you have done with the story... Now you would make me really happy if you could just sort Dean and Sara out and give us a really happy ending coz I'm not sure I would ever read another story with the two of them in it if it ended badly...Sorry. You have a wonderful visit with your friends and hope to hear from you soon. Cheers, Vicki
Author's Response: Sort out Dean and Sara, huh....well I think I might be able to do something along those lines ;) Glad to see you're enjoying and I should be able to get the next chapter up before my company comes... thanks for reading and reviewing - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 15
so you've got company next week huh... Man i woke up at six this morning and almost got up immediatly to start packing, lol... okay, about the story, great great chapter! Awesome rescue mission, loved loved loved Jack, and yikes for this fairy thing! And now the wrap up, i'm so sad you recenlty confide to me that Sara's gonna die because you want to end the series, i really would have loved a happy ending... But i understand and respect your choice...;) hehehe and... 3 days!!!
Author's Response: LMFAO....Oh, Fredo I have to admit I was rolling on the floor when I read this review... you just live to cause me problems don't you...LOL. Poor Dagmar's hyperventilating as she reads thinking I'm killing off Sara... As if I would end the series, then what would I write for your Chirstmas story??....Only one and a half days left to get through....HEHEHEHEHEHEHE....SEE you soon ;)
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 15
OMG!!!!!! There was NO WAY I could have fallen asleep in that update. HOLY COW!!!! As always the descriptions of everything was awesome. Sarah will be ok, won't she?? Won't she?? I can't wait to read the last part, but at the same time I don't want it to end. I'm torn!!!
Author's Response: LOL, well torn is good right. Glad you've enjoyed so far and I will hopefully get the next chapter up this week. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 15
I'm glad you didn't break it up either. I like long chapters. I can't believe it's almost over already.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, I'm glad the length wasn't a problem. :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 14
When Sara thinks appreciatively to her life, her children, her job and the two great loves she's had in her life, my heart melted. Two great loves---awww! She truly is lucky.
Author's Response: glad that part touched you, From my point of view...even a limited amount of Dean-time is better than none at all....lol
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very nice update!!! Look forward to the next one!!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 14
A bit of hurt Dean, a tough Sara challenging the monster and a wonderful portrait of Jack under the bed -terrific chapter Kel! But please don't rush to the end. I could keep on reading much longer! And remember, I'm waiting for that happy end here - lol! Hope life is treating you well :)
Author's Response: Life it fantastic Dagmar, hopefully it's treating you as well also ;) Sorry toots, but this has to end at some point...lol. I do promise that the next chapter is nice and long, if that helps. Take care of yourself and thanks for the stars ;)
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