Wonderful chapter!  I was touched most by Bobby wondering what his life would have been like had his wife lived.  That was so sad!  At least he has 'his boys.'

Author's Response: Yeah Shannon, I'm a sucker for Bobby. His relationship with the boys has always touched me big time, glad you enjoyed - Kel

AHHHHHH! we've been waiting so long for this! *cheers ring out* i actually got up from the computer and did a happy dance of joy when i got to the end of this chapter! 

this line in particular had me chuckling:

Sara wasn't sure at what point her ‘just let him go' plan had become her ‘hold on tight' plan

Fantastic, Kel. I love how you write the relationship between Dean and Sara.  I can't wait for you to wrap it all up and I'm looking forward to Sam's time in the confession booth!

--cricket 

Author's Response:

Come on, Cricket, you know you'd hold on tight if you had the chance...lol.  So glad you enjoyed and I've enjoyed your reviews - Kel

 

Awesome... outstanding... very emotional! Aww. I loved it! So glad you didn't rush, so glad you spoiled us with a wonderful long chapter. Thanks to Bobby and Sam - will Dean listen? Come on.... :)

Author's Response:

Will Dean listen...hm...well......

 

 

You'll just have to wait and see ;)  Hope you're well  - Kel

 

Just beautiful. I'm so glad your taking your time and not rushing, the whole romance between Dean and Sara its a subtle story and I think you're handling it perfectly.

And the action/horror side only goes to strengthen the whole relationship, and I LOVE the way you've written Sam and Bobby in these chapters.

Great work Kel, and I'm glad the amazons had a great week, there's nothing like meeting up with other authors and friends!

Take care XX Louy

 

Author's Response:

Thanks Louy, we did have a terrific time.  And thanks for doing the beta on this chapter I know it was a long one ;)  Hopefully, you're little Brit-con went every bit as well.  Take care and I'll catch you soon. - Kel

i'm completely still with you.  beautiful chapter.  i'm one of those that's enjoying the slower pace.  and i absolutely love that you had sam and bobby corner dean.

anyhow. loved it.

Author's Response: ANNA.... I keep missin' ya in the shout.  Glad you enjoyed the slow pace and I hpe that you'll enjoy the end.  Catch up to you soon - Kel

So a very emotional chapter. Sara'll be alright, I'm relieved. After Sam and then Bobby's conversation, I can't wait to know what'll be his decision about his future with Sara. The end of the chapter  with Dean and Jack, Dean remembering  past moments with Sara and her kids and how he would love to be a part of their lives, simply beautiful. Wonderful work Kel. 

Author's Response: Thanks Oceane, you're the best.  I'm so glad you enjoyed.  I promise I haven't let Slip go yet either.  Just wanted to finish Sara before I focus on the end of Slip.  Thanks for the stars - Kel

Oh, Kel ... Fredo was right. So much of what i love about your stories are the fantastic details. this was long and i loved every last word.

The interaction with Sara's brother was lovely, and  Bobby and Sam ganging up on Dean to try to knock some sense into him was beautifully written.

I love how you ended this chapter with Dean curled up with Jack, both offering and taking comfort.

Really looking forward to the next chapter, and if it isn't the end, great! that just means more wonderful writing to read. :)

--cricket 

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you agree, but I've learned Fredo's always right ;).....lol.  Seriously don't know how much more there is, but I'm thinking it won't be too much longer.  Thanks for all the support - Kel

it was one hell of a week we spent together, wasn't it... Lots of laugh, lots of junk food, and lots of driving, lol! And cherry on the cake, the season finale (three times right?!).

Now about this story, i told you not to rush it because i don't want it to end!!! Never. Ever. Yeah i know that won't be possible, and that's why at least it deserves an awesome ending, and this chapter was outstanding. And you already have 2000 more words?.. How the hell haven't you send them yet!!!

Anyway, thanks for everything, my story and my vacation, and don't forget to save money, because i'm expecting you to visit very soon...

Author's Response: LOTS of driving....lol.  And really what more could we ask for than watching the boys sing a little 'Bob' Jovi.....lol.  So glad you're enjoying the story and as always I appreciate your input.  You're the reason Sara's survived this long and I'm always gonna be grateful for your enthusiasm for her and her little world ;)   Keep a spare room open cause sooner than later I'm heading your way!!! - kel

You sure know how to leave the readers wanting more Kel, I'll give you that. lol  Another great chapter!!

Thanks for the read. :)

Merrie

Author's Response: Glad you're hanging in their merrie and that you're still enjoying - kel

Chappy 15 was awesome, kel...loved the action...loved that the fairy had created the illiusion of a different place that disappeared once he was bound by the spell...now kill that littel evil guy, and oh, yeah, get it done right now as i sat here the whole day reading and really want the conclusion...now...did i fail to mention that i want it now...so it better be all written...now!! PS...wrote this review on chappy 14 cause i am so not about to lower your reviews by touching the dreaded cursed chappy you have going on...awesome job...bambers;)

so this vamp fairy is trying to possess Sara, well, that's definitely not good...and it sounds as if they are running out of time and now dean is unconscious...what an evil little cliffie there, kel...good thing i can just move onward to the next chappy...bambers;)

oh, not greg, knew it couldn't be greg...but if not him then what is it??? loved the moments between the boys and Sara in this chapter...Dean letting his guard down when Sam talks about Jess...that was perfect!! great chappy...movng onward...bambers;)