Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very cool. don't like that greg one bit.
Author's Response: LOL, thinking that's the general concensus Winch ;) Glad you're enjoying - kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 7
I hope Dean does prove it, his instincts are always right & I trust Jack too. GO DEAN!! Brilliant chapter & I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: More on it's way...lol. Thanks for the kind words. We'll find out if Dean's right soon ;)
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh dear, face to chest... one could feel the energy and the tension there. Can you please knock some sense into Dean? I wish Sam was right, telling Dean that Sara is ok, but somehow I have the feeling the worst is yet to come. And maybe it's not Greg? Loved the interaction between Sara and Jess. I can so picture you sitting there with her :) Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Yes, hm... isn't face to chest a place I'd like to suddenly find myself ;) More to come, I've got a few more chapters written and on their way. Glad you're enjoying Dagmar and I hope all is well :)
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hey Kel, Thank you once again. You have been making this story very intriguing......and, as always...very enjoyable.... Tell Bullet that I thank her for the pep talk, too...but if you needed reassurance for your story then that is so sad because there is nothing wrong with any of your stories, let alone this one. You always make reading such fun for me...thank you Vicki
Author's Response: Ah, Vicki you know you put yourself out there you get a bit nervous every now and again...lol. Glad you're enjoying and I'll keep the updates rolling as long as I can ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter! You got the wheels in my brain spinning! If Dean suspects something"s wrong with Sara then there's something wrong with sara! Curious to see how Greg plays a part in this (what kind of big bad evil monster is her?)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed and I'm planning on keeping the updates coming so you'll find out soon enough. - Kel
Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
So, I kept seeing this story on the updates list and wanted to read it, but I wanted to read the other Sara Powers stories first. So, over the past few days I did that, and I wanted to let you know how much I love them. You've created an adorable family for the boys and the interactions are all so believable and in character. Awesome job! I'm looking forward to more love, tension, laughter, and suspense.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a wonderful compliment. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the other stories and I"m hoping you'll continue to enjoy this one. I've read a couple of your stories now so I'm happy to have returned the favor ;) - Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
OMG, face to bare chest, what a dream come true that was...and it was so hot and so subtle all at the same time... I love Sam trying to be the voice of reason amid all Dean's suspicions, and then Dean becoming Mr Devious and inviting Greg over... Please don't leave it too long to update...cos I know what's coming and I can't wait!!! Great work Kel, as always...X Louy
Author's Response: Thanks Bullet and thanks for talking me off the cliff so to speak, I've got this one wired now so I shouldn't be bugging you too much longer. ;)
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm not in a position to think thru a decent review - long sob story - so I'll just say thinks for the distraction - ANgela
Author's Response: Always happy to help, Angela. ;) Take care of yourself - Kel
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 7
that was great,can't wait for greg to come for tea,please update soon.
Author's Response: working on it, working on it...lol. I've got to update another story and then I'll return to this one by the end of the week, glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
i love the dragon talk, i guess you actually had this discussion with Jess?! Sounds of one i could have had with Morgane as well... So, guess who's coming to dinner... By the way, you were right that other day, it indeed is the last time we don't discuss your story, because it drives me CRAZY!
Author's Response: Oh, this discussion plus many more, it's rough when your two and the weight of mankind is on your shoulders...lol. She's got dragons, zombies, pirates, and evil queens to destroy and not enough hours in the day ;) I have no doubt Morgane's just as imaginative. Trust me when I say we will not be doing this again...lol. ;) Next time you're a full partner not just a reviewer - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
Aw, great update and no, definately not dragging it... :) Dean has still no clue who slashed "her" tires. Oh, dear, wait till he finds out - lol. I loved him taking the kids along and Sara obviously enjoying that. Loved how you described her excitement about Dean staying longer. But what's going on with her? Any reason to be worried? Can't wait for the next chapter - I love Sara and her family!!! Have a great weekend :)
Author's Response: Yeah I'm just gonna enjoy slowly torturing Sam with the whole tire thing..lol. Glad you're enjoying and this is a supernatural story...lol, of course there's reason to be worried. ;)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
Dean nodded and said, "Someone slashed two of her tires." "Damn, who the hell would have done that around here?" Sara asked. Please please pleas tell me you're gonnawrite the part where Dean finds out. Don't need to write the whole punishment thing, just just the muderous Dean look when he founds out, and the scared Sam one, please... "Honestly, I think it's none of your business, Greg. I'd even say, not only is it none of your business Greg, but also be ready to have your ass kicked! "Mom falls asleep a lot now" ominous... Sam rolled his eyes at her words certain now that Sara had spent too much time in his brother's company. no, never too much time spend with Dean Winchester...
Author's Response: God that's the truth ain't it...lol. Glad you're enjoying and yeah Sara seems sleepy. Might just be the fact that I'm still fighting off this damn cold though...lol. Glad you're enjoying your present and don't forget this was all for you ;) (So if people hate it I'm blaming you ).....
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 6
Very good update. Not dragging it out at all. Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks Winch, I appreciate the vote of confidence, I'm never sure how I'm doing until I hear back from you all..lol. - Kel
Reviewer: Candice (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love your writing! Dean and Sam's interactions with the Powers family always bring a smile to my lips and spirit! Great new story in the series. Looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm so glad you're diggin it. - Kel
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 6
Thanks, Kel......Damn you.....you really know how to an old lady on the edge....I hope I don't die before I get to see the end of this most intriguing story.... Well done.....It's very good....am loving it..as you well know... Cheers, Vicki
Author's Response: ah, Vicki, you're making me think now that I should abandon my other story and post my next chapter for Enrapture...lol. I wouldn't want to lose you because I was too slow ;)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
Dragging this out? Definately not, just letting us all enjoy the great relationship you've built here. Loved the tension between the boys and Greg and the way Sara defended them, that was a great touch...and..."Sam, you'd better not be rifling through my panty drawer," Sara called as she headed toward the stairs...made me lol again! Keep it coming Kel, this story is fantastic!
Author's Response: As always Louy, you're too kind. A big thanks goes out to you for betaing this one ;) Glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
So what's up with Sara's sudden ability to sleep through days? Is Greg drugging her? Cute ending to this chapter! I love how saucey Sara is!
Author's Response: Man everyone just blames Greg..lol. Poor guy ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
wonderful chapter,i really enjoyed that.
Author's Response: Good, glad to hear it, I'm thrilled with the response this story's been getting. Thanks again Bye.
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ok first ROFLMAO at Dean & Sam's reaction to Greg. Oh to have a guy like Dean that smitten over me. *sigh* I'm wondering if Sam's little attack on Dean's baby will ever come out. RUN SAM!! LMAO. Something is VERY wrong with Sara. I have my suspicision as to who is involved, but I'll wait & see. I don't think you are dragging it out story wise, just updating wise. he he he. More soon please.
Author's Response: Of course Sam's going to be outed sooner or later...lol. That's going to be just too much fun for me to pass up...lol. Glad you're enjoying and I'll try and speed up the updates now that I'm feeling better - ;)
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh, I'm loving this story. You broke my heart with the previous tale where Dean leaves Sara. Please, please, I'm praying that they get back together in this one! :) --c
Author's Response: We shall see Cricket...lol Glad you're enjoying this so far and I'll do my best not to dissapoint.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 5
The photo, the new bedding, it's all so intimate and heartbreaking! What a wonderful job you've done reliving Sara's anguish! Your explanation of the brothers' body language was a neat point. I guess I never really consciously thought about what it revealed about them. I'm sooooo glad that the Winchesters and Powers are together again. The joyful/tearful reunion with the kids was the best part! Now we just have to find out what kind of despicable creature Greg is. More please!
Author's Response: Love that everyone's so sure Greg's evil...lol. Poor guys getting no love, I even made sure he was good looking ;) Glad you're enjoying Shannon and thanks as always for the review
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
OH that is just precious. I love the last part. Sara is my absolute favorite!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! -cough- please.
Author's Response: working, working, working on it...lol. Thanks Winch I'm thrilled you're enjoying and thanks for the stars :)
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 5
Kel, You finally did it, I'm completely sucked into another Sara story. I hope I don't get hurt again!!!! lol I truly enjoy your writing, so true to life, using such little simple things in life to evoke deep emotions within the characters and your readers as well. Carry on, Pookee/Janet
Author's Response: Aw, Janet thanks, that's so sweet. I'm happy I've got you back in my clutches and just remember I'm basically a nice person so you should be safe ;) ...
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 5
i don't even know which line to quote, the whole chapter is terrific! No, seriously, i loved... well, everything. Wait, i try again, what i prefered was... between the first and the last words. Not that i didn't like the first and the last words, they were great also. But my favorite part was definitly... No, i can't, i LOVE this story, i want more, and if Jack's to well behaved to eat a little piece of Greg, maybe you could let Princess Luke the carnivor turtle do it...;)
Author's Response: you preferred between the first and last words...huh. LMAO, well then I guess I'm doing something write as this is your story ;) I'm gonna keep that Princess Luke thing in mind just in case my baddie doesn't work out ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 5
brilliant update,really funny,must be something odd about greg if jack doesnt like him.glad to hear you are all feeling better.
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing. It's always so much fun to hear what people like (or didn't) about a chapter - Thanks Kel
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