Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 12
After talking with you earlier today I decided to finally jump into this story, having planned to wait til after my upcoming tech week. So, putting doing dishes and summer prep work aside, i dived in and didn't resurface til i made it to the end of what's available so far. I really love the world of Sara and her children, the relationships they have with the Winchesters. It's also just welcoming to see them in such a comfortable setting where they don't have to lie about they do and are accepted. And i am enjoying all of the layers that are part of Dean and Sara's relationship. And i think you have the pacing right. can't wait for the next chapter. annA
Author's Response: LOL, Anna, well I'm thrilled that you decided to check this one out. However, I don't know that you've read the others that come before. If you have great if not you might want to check out at least, 'Thank You' and 'Awake in the Dark' Glad you enjoyed and I'll update soon - Kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 12
I had to look up what an Anchanchu is & YIKES!! That doesn't sound good at all. I think you have the pace perfect & if that means a couple more chapters than you thought it would be, then I'm not going to complain. I just hope that Dean & Sara can sort themselves out too by the end. Cause I don't like seeing them at odds with each other, that's not how it's supposed to be.
Author's Response: Yeah, creepy little bugger, and just vague enough that I can alter his M.O. a bit. Glad you enjoyed, Kel
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
oh very exciting can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'll update as quickly as possible, thanks for the review, it's always appreciated - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oh you with the mini-cliffhangers! with an ending like this you've definitely still got my interest! The pacing is just fine. I love the quiet moments between sara and dean, just as the great brother moments between the boys. You write them so vividly, it's as if they're in the same room with me acting out the scenes. so, no worries that my interest will wane!! can't wait to read the next chapter ... -- cricket
Author's Response: How nice is it to know people enjoy, Sara and don't see her as an intrusion between the men. So glad you're enjoying. Thanks for the wonderful review - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/04/08 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
Though, it had taken him a lot of years to notice, the Impala held just such a feel. From his brother's box of tapes to the sunglasses that rested on the dash, the car had taken on Dean's personality in every way. When Sam had re-joined the hunt, he had at first felt slightly out of place in what was clearly his brother's space. Then, he'd begun to leave his own mark on the vehicle. From the cigarette lighter that was replaced with a power cord to the extra sweatshirt he always left on the back seat, Sam had slowly but surely made a place for himself in car. loving that since the first time i read it... "Well, despite what a jerk I was earlier, she's tired enough to lay down with me. Does that answer your question?" smiling at that since the first time i read it... "He thinks it's an Anchanchu." worrying about this sice the first time i read it...
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying your birthday present, though by the time it's finished you may be a year older...lol. Oh, and thanks for reading it over, it's always nice to have an extra pair of eyes finding mistakes (and missing comas..lol)
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/08 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 11
cannot wait to see how it ends
Author's Response: Thanks, 15, I'll do my best to keep the updates coming. Thanks for the stars and taking the time to review, it means a lot - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh Kel, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!! The argument between Dean and Sara was heartbreaking. There are two people who truly love each other and yet they just can't seem to make it work. Please knock some sense into both of them (thanks - lol!)! Sam's talk to Dean was pricless - oh, Sara's lines so typical female thoughts! I'm so glad Sam had the guts to tell Dean everything. Loved how Dean doted on Sara and how Sam made him try to understand that "love like that doesn't happen often." So it's not Greg... What a cliffie... I can't wait for the next chapter. I wish this story was going on longer. Only 3 more??? Come on!!! And I do want that happy end here, ok?
Author's Response: Really Dagmar, you want a happy ending? Man that surprises me because you've never mentioned that before, LMAO. I'm working on getting this one finished but it's not going quite as fast as I hoped so yeah...might be a bit longer. Thanks - Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
Couldn't believe this twist at the end of this chapter...it was just masterful and completely unexpected...and only three more chapters??? Any chance if we all got together we could convince you to think about a sequel?? Pretty please??? Awesome work Kel...loved it.
Author's Response: Well I said three before but now I'm not so sure, no one's moving at the pace I wanted...lol. So It may stretch a chappy or two. Glad you're enjoying and as to a sequel, if I do it's not gonna be for a good long while...lol. - Thanks Kel
Reviewer: OrganizedChaos (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
So It's not Greg? Damn .. lol I've caught up with this story and this by far is my fav chapter! Sara and Dean's argument? I Felt the tension! Awesome job! I'll be waiting for more!
Author's Response: Hey, Chaos...welcome. So glad you enjoyed this chapter. I worked hard to try and work the emotions between Dean and Sara. Thanks for the Read and Review it's always terrific to hear people's thoughts one what you've written. Thanks for the stars, Kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 11
Well that was a twist I didn't expect!! I thought for sure Greg was the bad guy!! So, blow me down. LOL. So now I'm at a complete loss as to what is happening. So that means you HAVE to update again soon please. he he he
Author's Response: LOL, yeah well I can't have you guys guessing all my secerets now can I. Greg was too easy ;) We'll be meeting the baddie in the next chapter so you don't have to wait too long. - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
damn, you got me big time here... It's not Greg? Damn, and i was ready to let Princess Luke eat him... Great update, and in five weeks, i'll be... in Brussels waiting for my second plane, lol. I just can't wait to finally be on your couch eating these delicious M&Ms you already start to store for me... But about this story, MORE! I love them, and i like more and more the relation between Sam and Sara, very funny like here, "I'd never..." Sara couldn't help but tease at the highly uncomfortable look on the younger man's face. Sam's face flushed a bit more as he rolled his eyes. "You really have picked up every one of my brother's bad habits."
Author's Response: Man, you're easy (and i mean that in the very best of ways) all I need is a bag of peanutbutter m&m's and a DVR full of third season eppy's and you're good to go. If only all house guests were so easy to please ;) Glad you're enjoying the Sam and Sara dynamic, I'm always worried that poor Sammy falls to the wayside in this series. - Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
You got me big time Kel, if it's not Greg, who is it. I hope that Dean'll remember his conversation with Sam about his relationships with Sara and that he'll go with it, they're so made for each other. Terrific work Kel, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed Oceane, I'm writing just as quickly as I can. Though with all the sunshine we've had lately it's hard as heck to stay indoors and write. ;) Thanks as always for the R&R, I love hearing your thoughts.
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
ahhh! that's... that's just evil! please! you gotta update soon!
Author's Response: heeeeheeeeheeee ;)
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hi Kel - What a treat - Dean almost to his senses about Sara and the start of the meat of the hunt - I enjoyed it and am busily guessing. Don't think I can stand too much heartbreak at the moment, so either make me smile or warn a girl, okie dokie? Love this, Angela
Author's Response: I promise to give a warning, Angela. But keep in mind it's me we're talking about...lol. I've never been one for permanetly scaring the boys, not even mentally. ;) So take heart and take care....Catch you soon, Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 11
"...doesn't prove his innocence. It only proves our ignorance." Great line! Wow! Sara and Dean are passionate people! I can't believe the things they say to hurt one another. So what the hell is going on?
Author's Response: Funny, Shannon, that's one of my favorite line's also. Glad to see you're still enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
fantastic chapter,i was sure it was greg.the mystery deepens.
Author's Response: Poor Greg, taking all the blame...glad you enjoyed and thanks for taking the time to review - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 08/04/08 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
OH, how evil! to end it with 'Mwahaaahaaaa..." Now with Greg gone, the only creature I suspect of causing all the harm is ..... the monster-in-law!!! Three more chapters ... you're killing me -- but it's a happy death. -- cricket
Author's Response: LOL, yeah well you all only have yourselves to blame, you were much to willing to blame the bad mojo on Greg...couldn't let you all think you had the baddie nailed. ;) Glad you enjoyed and try not to go to the great beyond yet...lol.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 10
LOL! Love the disclaimer, Kel! :( So sad! This chapter was too short. I could have read forever! I'm so curious what's hurting Sara. Lucky for her Dean had his dream and that this is monster-mom's weekend for the kids. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Too short, huh? Well, that's a nice compliment. Yeah shipping the kid's off to the monter-in-law was a bit convienent huh ;)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
She's getting worse and worse, I hope that Sam'll find what's wrong with her. Poor Sara, she's stuck with a mother in law like Judy, I feel for her.
Author's Response: Glad you liked Oceane and yeah Judy's a pill huh?...lol - Kel
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 10
huh. well with a mother-in-law like that, i was at least expecting one to get hurt... *grins* okay okay i'll shut up now. thanks for the update and please, PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: Man here something evil is hurting Sara and everyone's pissed at her nasty mother in law...lol - Thanks Kel
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 10
THAT mother-in-law needs to be hurt. UGH....what a woman. Love the story. Leave it to Sam to find the cause of the wound.
Author's Response: lol, yeah she's a nasty one alright, thanks for reading - KEl
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 10
fantastic chapter,poor sara,i bet that greg's got something to do with it.as for judy, what a bitch.i'm lucky my mother-in-law's lovely.
Author's Response: LOL, yeah who'd want Judy to be related right...I do have to say that I had a blast writing her.. - Kel
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 10
Thoroughly enjoying this story
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying, and thanks for the review. I love knowing that people are out there enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh!! Alrighty Kel, you've got me on the edge of my seat now!! Poor Sara ... Evil mother-in-law! The whole toothbrush conversation with Jess had me cracking up ... can't wait to find out what kind monster Greg is. well, I hope it's Greg, cause if not, you've sure done a good job at misdirection. hanging on ever word kel! --c
Author's Response: Hey just remember if you come to visit don't leave your toothbrush lying around ;) Despite the number of times I've tried to convince my daughter otherwise she still insists that toothbrushes should be communal...lol. Glad you're enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
Can we hurt the monster-in-law' now tho?? Please?? I'll give a good swift kick quite happily, she'll never know what hit her!! lol. Here's hoping for a massive wakeup call soon. (sorry, I used to have a mother-in-law like her. *shudders*) Once again, brilliant chapter. What is going on with Sara?? I hope they figure it out soon, cause she's not sounding too good. More ASAP please.
Author's Response: Can we hurt the MIL...lol. Too funny, From everyone's response I know now that my next story will involve a MIL hunt...lol. Dean can have her beheaded and Sam can set her on fire. :) Glad you enjoyed - Kel
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