Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
A wonderful ending! I especially enjoyed the playfulness between Dean and Sara in the kitchen. It's heartening to see (uh...read about) two people so in love that they can't keep their hands off one another.
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 18
Yay! They got back together. I love your Bobby. If I've thought it once I've thought it a thousand times, your interpretation of Bobby, Dean, and Sam are dead on. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks sooooo much I doubt there's a higher compliment. I've really enjoyed writing this series and its always so great to know people are reading and enjoying ;) Kel
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 20/11/08 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 5
That very last paragraph had me snorting with laughter! Awesome!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/11/08 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
ah, i love your kitchen fantasies... And yes, i'm still in my Sara journey. Just to be ready for the next one... ;)
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 17
Kel, I felt a little voyeuristic when reading this chapter. Your writing has the reader feeling they are not an outsider looking in but as if they are there in the lovers heads. This couple is truly meant for each other - Dean's constant presence and strength, always there for Sara, always drawing her into his "safety". In one paragraph about Sara, you discribed her lines about her sparkling eyes in such a way that I thought my husband wrote those words. So many times as I have stated "I look like the crypt keeper!", my husband will reply with love those exact words. Your writing masters the artform - delicately turning up the "heat" of the couples intimate moments without stepping over the line into more graphic territory, leaving your readers a little breathless and always wanting more. Beautiful, Pook
Author's Response: Pook, I LOVE your reviews, they always make me feel so warm and tingly ;) Glad you enjoyed Sara and Dean, I always have so much fun writing the two of them together. And as you've probably realized I don't do graphic....lol. I'm just one that likes to let the readers imagination fill in the details ;) Catch you on the next one - Kel ;)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 16
Great job kel...hopefully Sam and Bobby have gotten through to Dean!! Although you are killing me with these extrememly long chappies, i think they are needed and work well for the story!! loved how you choose to end this chappy with Dean and Jack...awesome!! bambers;)
Author's Response: BAMBERS!!!! Oh, honey, god bless you for making your way through that chapter, I know how rough it's gotta be for a girl that thinks 2,000 words is about a 1,000 too many ;) Seriously thanks for the support and for letting me bounce countless ideas off ya ;)
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh Kel! I can now die a happy woman. well, not quite yet. What a wonderful ride. I enjoyed this story from start to finish. I know it's going to be one of those that I go back to again and again, just cause it's so great. this part had me drooling: There Dean stood, his legs clad in an old pair of jeans, his feet every bit as bare as his chest as he ran a hand through his short wet hair. Clean shaven and looking better than any man had a right to look, Sara couldn’t have dragged her gaze from him if she’d wanted. Truth be told, she definitely didn’t want to. I love that you put Dean and Sara back together where they belong. And the part where she distracts Dean so Sam doesn't have to 'fess up right away was a hoot! And I laughed my socks at the image of Sam apologizing to the Impala! All in all, a simply marvelous story. I really, really enjoy your writing. Thanks so much for taking us on such a fantastic journey. -- cricket
Author's Response: lol, glad I got it done for you Cricket... ;) What is it with you guys and Dean's bare feet...lol... that seems to be a favorite image. Thanks for the support and I'll see you around the site - Kel
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 18
Kelly, i love your stories that involve the Powers family. Dean and Sam need someone to love them besides each others. I love Sara she is such a strong character and her love for Dean is so powerful. Bobby what a great character as always; you write him good. my favorite in this still has to be Jess. the way you have her melting Dean's heart reminds me of my own Father. i hope you decide to continue on with the Winchester and Powers family. Renee
Author's Response: Thanks much Renee, to know that people like my AU characters is thrilling to say the least. And I have to confess that most of my stories include Bobby at least a little and often times a lot, there's just something about him that I love. No worries about Sara and her family, I'm sure they'll return at some point ;) Kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 18
What a delightful ending, I'm so happy. Dean coming in the kitchen, barefoot, shirtless so a hot imagery. Sara is a lucky woman to have Dean in her live, not only he's gorgeous but he's also a good and loving man. Sam apologizing to the impala was hilarious, lol. Awww...little Jess giving a little kiss on Dean's nose, so cute. I enjoyed this story start to end. Kel, you're a very talented author, I'm looking forward to your next story.
Author's Response: lol, I'm glad you liked the whole kitchen bit, I've taken a bit of flak over the fact that everytime Sara and Dean start getting hot n heavy it's in the kitchen ;) As always I appreciate your support Oceane and no worries, though I'm not sure when I'll post again, I'm sure to have a story going sooner rather than later - Kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 18
LOVED IT!!!!! So glad Dean & Sara sorted themselves out. Ok, so when is the next story?? LOL
Author's Response: man you guys really are a demanding bunch ;) Glad you enjoyed and thanks for all the wonderful reviews - Kel
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 18
beautiful as always, Kel. i can't tell you how relieved and happy i was to read the happy ending. the image of Sam apologizing to the car is one i'll remember with a smile.
Author's Response: lol, glad it got it done for you Anna and thanks for reading. It always amazes and humbles me to see how much people have enjoyed this series...Catch you soon - Kel
Reviewer: OrganizedChaos (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 18
That story was brilliant Kel! I'm sorry i have only just caught up with the rest of the story... Has to be said though : YAY! Sara/Dean together! I Loved Sam apologising to the Impala ;) Great Stuff and i can't wait till the next story! ~Becki
Author's Response: Thanks much Becki.. hopefully you mean the next story I write cause I'm going on record now as saying I won't be visiting Sara and Dean anytime soon....lol. I've got some othe ideas planned that are gonna have to come first. I am glad you've enjoyed the Power's family and I'll catch you around the site ;)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
Aw, and alls right with the world again. For a while, anyway... As always, I love these stories - your characters are real, individual and totally believable, I keep finding myself swearing at the screen when they're being all sacrificial, or being attacked. (Peruvian Vampire Fairy. Love it!) Can't wait for another? Go on, you know you want to... Thanks for a great read!
Author's Response: LOL, well I don't want to...at least not at this moment, down the line? Well who can say. I do however appreciate all the loving I got for this series and I'm glad it struck a chord for you. Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 18
Wow, Kel...the perfect end to a fantastic story. I loved every word of this, and that's something cos usually 'romance' on the list just switches me off... This really was a great read and you seem to have a great talent for this kind of gentle relationship mixed with high adventure...that works so well in the 'Sara' series. Oh, and...Dean making Sam apologise to the Impala? Worthy of the UnGen hall of fame...lol Great work...will be reading this again! XX Louy
Author's Response: Hey Bullet I can't thank you enough for the help you gave me on this one. You're a great beta and a good friend and I appreciate it. I'm glad Sam's pennence worked for you (I thought it was origional at least) and I'm glad you liked my little romance - Thanks for reading Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 18
Kel, thank you so much for this wonderful story and the ending! I loved it from A - Z and I especially loved that you finally gave Dean and Sara a chance :) You nailed this last chapter! Sam appologizing to the car was priceless! Dean calling Sara's place "home" and telling the kids to take care till they get back - awwww :). So, this calls for another story in the series, ok? I am really looking forward to seeing Dean and Sam team up with the Powers' family again in the near future. You did great! Thank you!
Author's Response: LOL, this one not even out of the most recent box and you're begging for another. Well, you're sweet but your gonna have to put Sara and Dean on the back burner.. I'm on vacation nearly the entire summer so I'm not gonna be doing much in the way of posting. I did promise Fredo I'd return to the Powers family at some point so you'll get at least one more.. man I'm always saying at least one more...lol. Glad you liked and I hope you're taking care of yourself - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 18
well Kel, as last night i sent you back this chapter with all my remarks and feelings, i'm just gonna give you here a huge thank you. Or rather several thanks, for this awesome story, for welcoming me last week, for your friendship, and for all the stories to come!!! For now this is it, my story's done, terrificly done, and it's even cooler now that i actually met Jack and the kids. Though Jess is much nicer with Dean than she was with me, lol! Love you my friend, and... we have several other common projects that i can't wait for...
Author's Response: LOL, well the Jess in my story is always nicer than my real Jess...she's too much like her mom ;) And as I already got weepy with ya last night over finishing this one I'm just gonna say one last thanks. Sara is your girl, from the first you're the one that convinced me that she was well-loved enough to continue with her story and you were right...huh, I should ask your opinion more often...so this is your story, and I can only hope I did it justice...as for my next project, well we'll find it funny even if no one else does. Love ya and no worries, we're not quite done with Sara yet. ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 18
A lovely ending to a fantastic story.
Author's Response: Thanks, Dark, and thanks for sticking it out. It was a bit of a long one. I'm so glad you enjoyed...Catch you around - Kel
Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 18
Loved this story, sad to see it end.
Author's Response: Thanks so much tomash, I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed. I appreciate you taking the time to review - Kel
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16
KEL, FREDO'S SPOT ON ... THE DETAILS OF THE COUPLE'S RELATIONSHIP, THE LITTLE STOLEN MOMENTS BETWEEN THEM, THE RAW EMOTION BOTH CHARACTERS EMIT ARE WHAT DRAWS THE READERS TO YOUR WORK. I CERTAINLY ENJOY THE SLOW PACE OF THE STORY. I COMPARE IT TO A LITTLE "FOREPLAY" BEFORE "CONSUMATION" LOL. LOVE THE CHAPTER AS IT SUBTLY SLAPS DEAN INTO REALITY - ALLOWING HIM TO SEE HOW MANY PEOPLE TRULY CARE FOR AND ABOUT HIM AND HIS RELATIONSHIP WITH SARA. HE TRULY HAS AN EXTENDED FAMILY - FROM SARA'S BROTHER TOM - THE SWIFT HUG, PROVIDING FOOD AND COFFEE - THE NURSE BRINGING HIM A CHANGE OF CLEAN CLOTHES, SAMMY'S TELEPHONE CALL TO WORRIED FAMILY MEMBERS - TRULY DEAN DOES HAVE A FAMILY. I CERTAINLY LOVE TOM'S DESCRIPTION OF JACK - LOYAL, BRAVE, STUBBORN - WAS HE TALKING ABOUT JACK OR DEAN? YOU ALWAYS CAPTURE THE ESSENCE OF SHARING YOUR HEART WITH SOMEONE BY MERE TOUCHES, THE SOUND OF THEIR VOICE, THE INABILITY TO DENY THEM ANYTHING. YOUR WRITING OF THESE LOVERS TRULY MUST BE AN EXTENSION OF YOUR OWN RELATIONSHIP AND AS A WOMAN WHO HAS BEEN MARRIED FOR TWENTY THREE YEARS AND STILL MY HUSBAND AND I LAUGH AND LOVE AS WE DID ON OUR HONEYMOON - I CAN SAY YOU ARE TRULY BLESSED. BEAUTIFUL WRITING AS USUAL, POOK
Author's Response: Guh, Pook, I just about cried when I first read this review.. that's just the sweetest thing just about anyone's ever said about my writing. As a woman that's been married to her highschool sweetheart for the last 14 years I guess I'm all about comittment. So glad you enjoyed and thank you again for the lovely, lovely review.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awwwwww Very nice chapter
Author's Response: Thannnnnnnnnnks Winch ;)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wow, brilliant chapter. I can't wait for the next part and Sam's confession.
Author's Response: Glad you liked....and thanks for sticking with me. - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 30/05/08 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 17
YAY, Yay, yay!!!! Oh, dear, you had me scared there for a moment when things went up and down again between Sara and Dean. But it's looking good now :) !!!
Thank you hun! I loved this chpater, I love this story, I love the Sara series! You sure made me happy with this one. Now on to Sam's confession... he he...
Author's Response: Breathe, Dagmar, Breathe... you didn't really think I wouldn't get these two together at the end did you.. Man talk about little faith ;) Glad you enjoyed chicky ;)
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 17
Kelly, chapter 17 was great. of course i was Sara; except for the Anchanchu part. God i wish......Dean is so yummy
Renee
Author's Response: *sigh* I hear ya Renee, I hear ya ;)
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awww.... Dean and Sara's confession of their love for each other and to end this chapter with them laughing put a big grin on my face. Kel, I can't wait to know how your amazing story'll end.
Author's Response: Well, I don't think I could ask for more than to put a smile on your face Oceane. Glad you enjoyed - Kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 29/05/08 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 17
*punches the air with both fists* YES!!! They have FINALLY figured it out. They are meant to be together!!!! YAY!!!!! I LOVE this series.
Author's Response: LOL, man that's a LOT!!!! of exclamations....So I'm gonna guess you approve ;) Thanks for the reviews and hopefully you'll dig the last chapter - Catch you later - Kel
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