Supernaturalville
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice, loved Dean's realization that things could have turned out very different. - Kel

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

That story was so sweet and incredibly peaceful considering the life Sam and dean live. dean sharing his feelings was an insight into the man behind the bravado. thanks

Author's Response: This is rapidly becoming my fave story, it just popped into my head! Thank you for the review, loverly stranger!! :)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

I wouldn't change a thing!  It's wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate all the lovely reviews, :)

Reviewer: troutface (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome story, thanks for postin dude

Author's Response: No worries strange person! Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice work, your descriptive style is beautiful, very poetic, especially the start.

I like the way you had Dean talking through his feelings with the ghost - it seems fitting and so sad at the same time. It also played very well when you had Dean accuse Sam of being a "girl" though that is usually the Dean Winchester brush off - it will now strike me as something a little more. I can't imagine spirits always go so peacefully, so I have to smile at this surreal moment for Dean - and appreciate all the Alice in Wonderland references more.

Skillfully written and thoughtfully put together - great work author.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I had that image of the moon and the lake stuck in my head for ages so I had to put it in a story of some kind.

Thank you also for reviewing, I really appreciate it!!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was very sad,but i also found it quite beautiful.you should be proud of this,well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am pretty proud, I love writing stuff like this, so glad you liked reading it!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

that's nice I liked it.  it has a softness, maybe a quietness about it that allows it to insinuate gently into ones conciousness.  It was sad but not bleak.  Thanks for sharing

Liked the title too, it's whistfull!

Bev xx



Author's Response: Thanks, I didn't want it to be too depressing or anything so that worked out ok! Ta very much for the review, much appreciated! :)

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