Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
Lou, This is stunning I was in tears from the very beginning. The raw emotion is overwhelming. Bravo!!! Crystal
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that Crystal. I shouldn't be happy that you were in tears but I'm very happy you were touched by this. Thanks for the stars and the lovely compliment. X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
wow, very very nice, and sad, but definitely the sentiments of hope and love that stay...
Author's Response: Hope was the most important part of this story for me to try to get across, so I'm so happy it worked for you. Thanks for the rating fredo. X Louy
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
I very much enjoyed. I hope things are better for you. Laura
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the rating Laura. And I never stay in the dark for long...lol X Louy
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
Oh, that was so good and written so beautifully! Don't stop there.....how does Sam save Dean? How does Dean handle the last hours? What does Bobby have to do with it?
Author's Response: Do NOT worry!...This was only a snapshot of a scene in the sequel to 'Fall of the House of Dream', which will be concerned exclusively with the deal and the solution Sam and Bobby come up with. But I need to finish a few things first...lol Knowing me it shouldn't be too long though... Thanks for the review and the rating GTS and I hope you enjoy the rest of the series. X Louy
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
Wow! That was so very beautiful and heartbreaking! I just don't have the words to tell you how much I loved the image of Sam curling up alongside Dean..I felt something give in my chest when I read that. Thanks so much for sharing!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for such a beautiful compliment Phoenix, (love this name by the way) I'm glad that scene didn't end up being to much and that it worked for you. And thank you for the lovely stars. X Louy
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
What a wonderful story! It reminds me of the times I layed with my grandmother before she died. Sometimes we would talk and sometimes just pretend to sleep. Those times are among my fondest memories of her. I'm glad Sam and Dean were able to share that, even if Dean escapes his deal.
Author's Response: And he will escape...If I have anything to do with it...lol Thanks for your very heartfelt comments Shannon. There can be no better compliment than to hear a story has taken you back to somewhere as important as that time with your grandmother. Thanks for sharing that. X Louy
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
*works to swallow past lump in throat* Beautiful and heartfelt. The storm was a fantastic backdrop to the emotion raging within both brothers. Sometimes a touch is all we need to remind us that we're still here. Thanks for writing. I hope it was cathartic. :)
Author's Response: It sure was which means all my writing will be fluffy bunnies and rainbows from now on...um, well I may have exagerated that a little, but...lol Thanks for your comments gaelic, they always mean the world to me. X Louy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
Forgot to mention how great you are and how inspiring you are to me!!! Couldn't ask for a better friend to look up to and aspire to other than you;)
Author's Response: Rare that I'm speechless Schelz but you've done it. Thank you so much for such an awesome compliment. Y'know, anyone who say's us Brits are just 'stiff upper lip', well they just don't know us do they...? lol Thanks mate X Floetry
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
Floetry, You forgot the kleenex warning on this hun..had me in tears not only was it written beautifully, it felt personal and as always flowed like a ripple in the sea. The silence is long but not uncomfortable. Dean watches the pink and red sky smiling gently at the naivety of the sentiment…but there’s something about that earnest look and the tone of his brother’s voice…something that makes him believe it. -Love how you used this, both times it worked wonderfully for the boys in this situation. I believed as well as Dean!!! Emoted so well!!! I immediately got wrapped up in your smooth and silky words of description like prey in a spider web. This is a very special piece, I took it to heart and my eyes are still burning.. Now out of the darkness, the light shines brightly above you at all times!!! And when a cloud covers your sun, the stars will appear so you will always have light;) Great one shot!! Love ya Floetry, you rock!!!!! Schelz
Author's Response: Kleenex warning, darn...I knew I forgot something, lol. Thank you so much for this beautiful review Schelz and you so need to try your hand at poetry, your quite the wordsmith here. Thanks for the lovely review and the stars...X Flo
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
very powerfull writing.so sad,but yes the hope does shine through.
Author's Response: Then it was worth writing. Thanks for that darkhunter, I'm very glad it worked for you. Thanks for the review. X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
OMG! Girl, you had me sobbing. In fact, the tears are still tracking down cheeks--so much so that I can barely type this. Two parts really got to me. One was wee Sammy putting his hand over the graphic novel and saying, ”Nothing’s gonna get you either, Dean, not while I’m here. I promise.” The second thing that really got to me was this: It takes less than ten minutes for Sam to follow. He waits till Dean’s breathing is slower and deep, but he knows he’s not sleeping. He knows Dean hasn’t slept in days because neither has he. He walks silently over to the bed, easing himself onto the mattress against Dean’s shape. Stretching out and curling around him, his shoulder firm against his brothers back, his chin resting above Dean’s hair, breathing in his scent. They’re barely touching but Sam feels the tremble radiate through his brother’s body and knows it’s the fear Dean refuses to show, forcing its way to the surface.
Author's Response: There is no better compliment than this. Thank you Ness, glad this story has touched you, the same way your poetry touches me. Thanks for the review and the rating.X Louy
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
good job
Author's Response: Thanks Bookworm...love the name by the way...lol X Louy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes
The imagery of the sky in this is poingnant, I've sat through a few last sunsets with people, even with the ones who were almost strangers it's a feeling you never forget. You've caught that mood beautifully here and infused the melancholy with hope. It's lovely.. Angela
Author's Response: Thanks Angela. That comment means a lot to me. In all my years of nursing I was also in that position a lot, and I always felt it was a huge privilege to be there... ...but I'm mostly glad you found it touched with hope...that is what I wanted more than anything. Thanks for the review and the rating. X Louy
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