Reviewer: Swellison (Signed)
30/03/08 05:41 PM · On:
I've been enjoying your light stuff so much, I've forgotten how well you do deep. Fabulous, angsty piece. Poor Dean!
Wow--thank you, Sue. This story is one of my favorites and your kind words about it are much appreciated!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed)
21/02/08 04:12 PM · On:
The Winchesters sitting outside in their underwear---too bad that wasn't how Kripke's version ended!
Yeah, it may be boxers or boxer briefs and t-shirt--but still--underwear is underwear. hehehe I couldn't help but wrap up the story that way. It just seem so perfect "Winchester brothers" to me.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing my stuff.
Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed)
16/02/08 10:24 PM · On:
I really like the way you write Dean's tortured thoughts, A+!
Thank you so very much!! I had thought this story might be a little more well received and have been a bit disappointed---so it's very nice to hear that you liked the way I presented Dean's tortured thoughts. Many thanks too for the lovely stars.
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed)
16/02/08 08:23 AM · On:
Well done, Ness. That nightmare was great!
Author's Response: Thank you, Sanna. I'm so glad you liked it!!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed)
14/02/08 06:12 AM · On:
Firstly I have to let you know that I am appreciating your writing skills on face value, as I haven't watched this far on in the season... but I needed a quick fix and I have enjoyed your work in the past (yes, it kind of does sound like I am calling you a "sure thing" right?!). Now having gotten that out of the way.... you haven't lost your touch! I liked this piece a lot. I know I am not appreciating it in context of the show, but as a reader. I loved your description of thousands of rings of Demons and representing the hierarchy through their eye colour. The circle thing was a little Dante and worked for me. The effect of this dream (premonition?) on Dean was fantastic, the physical response and psychological fallout- excellent stuff. Sam really seems to be at the end of his rope trying to cope with the "I'm fine" act!!!!
And you bring it all back to normal with the boys usual banter - that really is the source of their heroism for me, that whole laughing in spite of it all thing, and you wrote it here really well.
All in all - good fix, thank you!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, CdeWinter78. I appreciate the fact that you consider me a sure thing--at least most of the time. I really was hoping people would like this episode tag. It's a story I feel passionately about for the simple reason that it--the dream scene anyway--was so very vivid in my head. I desperately wanted this story to be great.
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed)
13/02/08 09:20 PM · On:
WOW! Loved the striptease (at least the one that went on in my head when Dean took off his clothes!)
Loved the story too Vanessa, great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Helen. I greatly appreciate your kind words. I do believe the very same striptease was playing through my head as I wrote. hehe It brings a smile to my face to hear that you liked both the striptease AND the story as a whole!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed)
11/02/08 02:37 AM · On:
Thnaks for sharing this great read with us. Very well written. I enjoyed the way you portrayed the boys alot.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Soennelchen. I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed this episode tag. It's one that I was really hoping people would like.
Reviewer: Sambo (Signed)
10/02/08 03:49 PM · On:
This was really good! I especially liked the nightmare scene, very vivid, and real. Sam's little rant was bang on. Just an all around great one shot. :D
Author's Response: Wow--thank you so much, Sambo. I really appreciate your kind words. I'm very pleased you enjoyed this story.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
10/02/08 02:10 PM · On:
Ness, this is fantastic, I was completely in the moment and this would have been a great finish to that episode.
The nightmare and after effects were trully haunting, and as always expertly written.
Author's Response: Thank you, Louy. I do believe this is my first tag/alternate ending for an episode of the show. I was dropping off to sleep the night following the episode, and the nightmare just popped into my head. I had to write it down and just knew that I had to write the tag. I'm so very glad you liked it. I figured it might not be everyone's cup of tea.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed)
10/02/08 01:56 PM · On:
Author's Response: Thank you.