Reviewer: Pooka Bunny (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner.
WOW, That about sums up what I thought of this chapter, WOW! The whole thing was beautifully done, even the sad parts. When Sam has to talk about the past you made it feel like his pain was the reader's pain and his worries were the reader's too. I couldn't help but laugh at the last part with the classic Bitch and Jerk line. Finally, I just want to say that this chapter best sums up their whole life completly. Keep yer writin' goin' mate, ashy xx 
Author's Response: My little Bunny-kins  Oh that is such a sweet and kind review, thank you so much. I'm really pleased that it felt realistic you've made my day thanks Bunny! bev xxx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner.
i enjoyed that chapter,like you said they are winchesters,end of chapter was funny.
Author's Response: Lindsay. Hey Hun, yup! They are our lovely, damaged and delightful boys aren't they. Bit more to come yet! bev xxx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner.
Bev honey.. it's not that angsty and not that fluffy either...it's a good balance...and i totally didn't expect the reaction after the revelation...only the Winchesters can laugh hysterically after being told that monsters are real!! Does this mean that we got the old Dean back?? no offense to the old Dean (i absolutely adore him to bits!!!!!) but i miss the new Dean already! i know it can't be that light-hearted and it'll be awfully unbelievable if Dean doesn't have that 'i'm carrying all the pain inside and i've got to keep Sammy safe' mode in him....but at the same time i was quite happy that he was being carefree and happy..like totally at peace with himself... Will be waiting for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Lyn my Hunny. Awh sweety, yeah proper Dean is slowly coming back and that does sorta mean that this adorable, sappy, wonderful temporary Dean will dissappear, but these are the Winchesters and so reality will come back to bite. Their life is what it is and they wouldn't be our boys without all those hurts that make them who they are. He has been wonderful to write him like this and there's still some fun to come. Thanks for your terrific reviews bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner.
Hey, quit blaming the angst pixie, you know you love a bit of suffering to balance out the fluff! Still lovin' this. I know I said it before, but I don't see how else you could have realistically had Dean remembering his past life and you wrote the whole conversation so beautifully: Sam all guilty and angry at the unfairness and 'proper' Dean slowly re-emerging from his amnesia coccoon, rebuliding his walls. And then, at the end, back to the bitch/jerk banter - fabulous! I'll even forgive you for the previous chappys Dixie Chick content. Kirst xxx
Author's Response: Hey my Lemur loving Shagmonkey! What can i say other than thanks for reminding me not to be a big stupid GIRL! And honest it was a pixie, i asked the easter bunny who was with her and she confirmed her identity. Oh and I've booked us tickets for The Dixie Chicks next UK tour, get your boots on Hunny...go on admit it you loooove 'em. bev xxxx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner.
Y'know it wouldn't be Winchester without the angst would it. And at some point those memories were gonna come flooding back, and I'm just glad Sam was there to help him deal. Awesome chapter and I can't wait for more...keep it coming!
Author's Response: Lout True, very true, and thankfully I've got M8s who help me remember that and not go off getting all girly! Thanks Hun. Princess Samantha! xxxxxx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
LOVE IT...LOVE IT...LOVE IT Don't know what else to say...I just adore what you're doing to Dean's character with this, and I must have read each chapter 4 or 5 times - just brings a huge smile to my face every time. ...and I can SEE Dean singing that song...and what his face will look like later when Sam ribs him about it... Awesome job mate!!!!
Author's Response: LouLou, Need no other reason to write it other than it brings a smile to your face Hunny! And come on fess up you really love the Dixie Chicks...! Love ya bev xxxx PS: isn't a nice hot shower just one of lifes pleasures?
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner.
Aww, that was great. Haven't been able to review for a while - been reading on a mobile instead of a computer, but I love the smiles in this story. It's great to see a nice, happy side to Dean (especially since we all love to beat him up so much...), and this last chapter really showed how he coped with giving that up again. Damn but that pixie's good... Give us more! Cal
Author's Response: Cal. Gee thanks Cal, you do the nicest reviews! dancing the happy dance of pleasure all around the living room! Hey what about that angst pixie huh? She runs in and bops ya on the head just when our sweet boy is so damned happy but let's face it the Winchester life is not all kittens and candy canes so here comes the darkness... thanks Hun! bev xxxxx
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner.
Bev, I love how this story is going. i also love how you describe Dean's eyes; i have noticed it in other stories as well. "Jade Pools", "Emerald Lake of unknown," "Sparkling Green Eyes" and "Pearlescent Green." Jensen does have the most beautiful green eyes.....sexy again great read, will be waiting desperately waiting for the next chapter. Renee
Author's Response: Renee. Oh gee you noticed and i thought I'd kept it a well hidden secret heehee..Hell yeah...I do have a bit of a thing for Jensen's eyes. He is a very beautiful man and his eyes are just so alive with emotion, my betas tell me it's an obsession but it's a very very happy obsession! More soon Renee and thanks for reviewing, I so love to get reviews Bev xx
Reviewer: Pooka Bunny (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
 , Hehe great as always, bev!! Loved the line... " “Thirsty!” Dean’s wide green eyes fled from her blue ones and back to the safety of Sam’s gaze as he answered “Milk!” Dean spluttered. “Can I have milk?” Sooo cute!! I kept thinking to myself awwww now Sammy has to take care of Dean like Dean did with him. lol Loved it! Pwease feed me more chapters!!!! Hehehe! Ashy xx
Author's Response: Bunnykins! Heehee, milk = my fav drink! So has to be Dean's too! And yup big old loveable sasquatch boy gotta look after his bro! more soon sweety but it is getting a little darker... Bev xx
Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
You're doing it to me again! This is a neat piece of fun fiction and so different to Angel that I'm really enjoying it. It shows a comic side of the brothers - Sam's amusement at Dean's change in personality and the quirks of Dean singing a song that would have our Dean shaking in his shoes with horror. I'm worried though - too many ideas and only one set of talented fingers.....whew its okay we have computers that recognise voices now..so you can work on two stories at once.....(g)
Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
You're doing it to me again! This is a neat piece of fun fiction and so different to Angel that I'm really enjoying it. It shows a comic side of the brothers - Sam's amusement at Dean's change in personality and the quirks of Dean singing a song that would have our Dean shaking in his shoes with horror. I'm worried though - too many ideas and only one set of talented fingers.....whew its okay we have computers that recognise voices now..so you can work on two stories at once.....(g)
Author's Response: Tracey. Wow I'm flattered that you're reading my catalogue! You're a peach! I was aiming for frothy wimsical nonsense when I conceptualised it andit was gonna be a one chappie! But as you maight have worked out I'm a wordy bugger! It's geting darker tho! just writing chapter 5/6 and it's more angsty! Oh and I sorta apologise for the singing but see I adore country music and the words did so fit Dean and Sam's life Hey and spooky you are because I do have a poorly finger!! Thanks again Hun bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
Bev.... This is so funny!!! Dean's changing his personality!!! milk?? dixie chicks?? non-flirting????? it's like watching a totally different side of him and i don't know if i should laugh hysterically and wipe a few tears off my cheeks....or just roll on the floor straightaway... Although it's kinda sad that Dean can't remember the small things like the fact he likes coffee and burgers...and even mullet rock! And the whole Bitch, Jerk joke as well...sigh.....maybe he'll get better... hopefully..
Author's Response: Lyn my sweety-pie Awh, I know Hun, it's sort of wimsical and sappy with a touch of soft sadness isn't it? I am so flattered that it's hitting you like this because that's just what I was aiming for and as I'm a smash and bash girl really I was worried whether I could pull it off! hang in there with me Lyn because he is getting better, his memory is returning. in fact I'm just writing new chapter now and it's getting a little darker...! You right lovely reviews Hun and I appreciate your time bev x
Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
“Holy Shit Sam, what the hell do we do with all these? It’s like we’re the freaking FBI or something!” I literally loled at this. lmao. i really like where this is going.
Author's Response: Bindi Hey you came back! Thanks Hun - I loves me a serial reviewer. And if you like this then I think you're gonna love the whole swimming pool scene later on! Thanks Sweets! bev xx
Reviewer: SuperNaturalObsessed (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 A bang on the head!
Loved it, i really did. Especially loved how he though his name was Dan. Fantastic. It's funny, cute and a tad sad, bring on more. p.s. I love how at the end, you put i'm more of a smash and bash girl. lmao. me too
Author's Response: Hey Bindi What a cool name! never met anyone called Bindi before. Our Dean is such a sweety when he let's the big defensive barriers down isn't he? But yeah, I am really a torture and violence girl! Haha. But I like to experiment and see if I can write in other verses! Thanks for your very kind words abd hope you'll try the rest of the story Bev xxx
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/08 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
Bev, too funny!!!!!!!!!!!!! i laughed so hard with the whole pool issue i started to cry. i could picture them both saying the lines and Dean's and Sam's expressions on their faces. Sam is trying so hard not to get frustrated makes me laugh even more. Then Dean eating Sam's food again too funny. great job as always; love your work. will wait patiently for the next chapter. Renee
Author's Response: Renee, my sweety-pie! Have to say that whole pool thing made me giggle too! Surreal and funky! And I just had to get Dean onto something more nourishing than his beloved burgers! Thanks for your kind words and more soon! Love Bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
Wonderful chapter! The whole nonsense about the pool was fabulous! Dean's seriousness made it even funnier! Also enjoyed the memory of the werewolf hunt and all the warm fuzzies Sam had about his big brother.
Author's Response: Shannon sweety! Awh thanks, I have to say I loved writing the drivel about the pool. It was just so funny to me because you could imagine Sam being excited by being able to take a swim but Dean? Nah! But he was a man on a mission wasn't he? And I always admire writers like GaelicSpirit who can move from past to present and back again without breaking the flow so I thought I'd have a go with the flashback. Not as good as hers I know but I thought it was ok. Thanks for reviewing, always appreciated. Love Bev xxx
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
great job! please update as soon ans you can!
Author's Response: Hey Gater. Writing as we speak! Thanks for reviewing hun! bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
great update,i agree jensen would sing that song beautifully.can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: Lindsay. Cool, I thought everyone would be up in arms but we all seem to agree that Jensen should so sing some Dixie Chicks tunes for us! Ring him and tell him, Hun! thanks for reviewing hun! bev xx
Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
I love this. Dean singing country music, picking the vegetables over the burger. Haha. Great. Can't wait for the next chappy. Love the innocence Dean has.
Author's Response: Danni. Gee, I figured I'd get lynched for the heresy of having Dean sing country so glad it jiggled your funny bone as it did mine! More to come soon! Thanks so much for reviewing Bev xx
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
Still loving cute, vulnerable Dean. Not that he's not adorable under normal circumstances. I just love his wide-eyed wonder (and innocence) in these chapters. But there's sadness too--with him being afraid to answer the phone and talk to Bobby. The scene with the waitress was hysterical. As was the fact that he picked the healthier meal to eat (and is actually enjoying his vegetables!) Great update!
Author's Response: Ness. There is a whimsy isn't there which is sweet, but as his memory is returning there is encroaching darkness... Rita is a doll and normally Dean would eat her up, but really under all that brash Dean exterior there's a vulnerability that has been so much fun to explore here. Bev xx
Reviewer: Angelbird94 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 A bang on the head!
It was fantasic, but I think it needs a little revising of grammer!!!!! I do love the stroy line though, I can't wait to read the rest!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey jen. Hey the unique and special grammer is all mine, my wonderful beta has tried 4 times now to explain the rules governing commas, semi colons etc but I have come to realise that I repel all the natural laws and am genetically predisposed to chaos and punctuation ineptitude! go figure! bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
Hey Bev (or should I say Rita?) No, Dean singing along to The Dixie Chicks is NOT freakin' funny, dude! You're lucky you're my friend (and you live quite far away) or I'd lamp you one for that! Otherwise, another fine and dandy chapter. Love Sam's wistful prompting of Dean for a bit of 'bitch/jerk' banter and Dean's concern over Sam's digestive system. Good work Chuffy! Geekster xxx
Author's Response: Geeky! Now come on admit it you love's ya a bit of steel guitar and I've heard ya yodelling when you think no-ones about! good job I didn't have them swap the impala for a Prius hybrid then huh? Love you hunny especially for helping me with my homework  Bev xx
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
awww loved this chapt. First when Dean didn't answer the phone and then telling Sam why:(:( then him not wanting to talkto bobby:( andthe singing OMG THE SINGING LOLLL i can't wait for Sam to hound him about that when Dean gets his memory back...if Dean gets his memory back...he does doesn't he?:(:( plz say yes lol but o man i can just see it now Sam drilling into him bout singing country HAHAHAHHA priceless...but yea i agree jensen would sing it beautifully:D "The tune was soft and lilting, and Sam dwelt on the words wondering if Dean realised how appropriate they were to the role he so unconsciously accepted every day of his life"- LOVED that part when Sam was referring to the song....soo very true.... And when Sam asked DEan to say bitch....omggg it was like...perfect, i love how Sam asked him to say it:D and DEan's uncomfortablness with the flirty waitres HAHAHAH AWWWW that was a lil sad...fing funny but sad becuz he's lost his memory...andthe last part...“You should have more respect for your digestive system, that’s stuff’s full of cholesterol and saturated mono tri glyceride doodahs!” BAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA O MAN IF HE ONLY KNEW THAT HE PRACTICALLY BREATHES THAT STUFF WHEN HE'S THE REAL DEAN LOL awesom chapter update! can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: Hey Hunny! oowh! you write such lovely reviews, I love it when a reviewer tells me which bits they really like! Thank you. Haha, the singing is sweet isn't it? I'm a total country fan, I know Dean tells me I will go to hell for it, but that song's words so fit Dean's life and Jensen sings like an angel so I love to hear him sing that one for me! More to come soon, his memory is coming back and yup Sammy is so gonna love tormenting his poor embarrassed bro! Thanks so much for sweet review Bev xxxx
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries!
Just read all the way through. This is adorable. I like cute, vulnerable Dean. I can't wait for more of this.
Author's Response: Kim Wow thanks I am so pleased you like it, and yup, Dean is so sweet when his defenses are down isn't he? More to come soon as he's getting his memory back now Bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
Alrighty Bev? Tryin' to catch up with my reviewing and up waaaay past my bedtime to do it! Well, you know how much I love this although you missed the opportunity to send the boys skinny dipping in the non-existent pool. Could they not have staggered around a bit in there undercrackers looking for it? Love the whole 'shit head' expression thing - been on the receiving end of that more than once! Although, sadly not from Dean (hey, he can look at me anyway he wants too with those big green/jade/emerald/sleepy/sexy eyes - enough descriptive for you?) And didn't I suggest a 'brown gloop' warning at the beginning of the chapter? Making people spew their tea; you are evil woman. Pure evil! Kirst xxx
Author's Response: Ah there's my wonderful little shagmonkey! Can I just point out that it was really cold, snow on the ground, Dean has been poorly, Sam is all worried and parental and you are still determined to get your evil jollies by nicking his pants? Wicked Geekster! And you call me a perv! Oh so now I'm intruigued! Who does the shithead look at ya? Dan? No wouldn't dare! I know Crazy Eddie - nah too busy running round naked and licking the jam off his feet. So who then? Ah...Elvis! Oops, forgot the brown gloop alert! Silly me! hahahahahahahah Snogs Hun Bevxxxxxxx
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