Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
Dean is so sweet when he´s not behind the walls. Sam is taking care of him but also needs his big brother to feel secure. Great scene with the doctor, poor guy he was a little scared. Good work!!
Author's Response: Hey Gabriela. Yeah, he's wonderful isn't he? I've been having a ball writing him. And you're so right Sam is doing real good at looking after his big bro but he's missing having Dean there to make him feel safe. Hope you enjoy the rest new chapter soon but having problems posting at the moment! Thanks so much for reviewing. Bev xx
Reviewer: Pooka Bunny (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
Hehe! Loved this chapter! Made me laugh again!  Loved the line: “M’fine, Sam! But have we been drinking? Because I think you might have had one too many Bro, your ass is swaying about all over the place!” I couldn't just laugh for a sec. I sat down laughing like the nut I am! lol. Great beginning and ending! Keep writing or I may have to use force! lol
Author's Response: Pooka Hey sweety! Well I'm glad I made you giggle and as it happens I'm writing next chapter as we speak so the 'force' you threaten will be unrequired. Not that I was that scared because just what damage would a big old Bunny  be able to inflict on a big growly lion  like me? Better get a bigger army Hun! hah! Bev xxxxxx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
Firstly, yup, i heard that SN has gotten a 4th season too!!! Hooray!!!! Can't wait!!! Ok, back to the story....i was practically laughing in front of the screen when i read the first part of the story about the swimming pool. All the crossed signals, the communications breakdown.... it was hilarious. And making Sam confused along with Dean, hahahahahaha..... that was the best part for me.. i reread that part several times and it's still as funny as the first time i read it.. And the flashback to when they were younger was great.. it's nice to have flashbacks and made Sam rethink about their childhood... sometimes i feel that Sam only remembers too much of the bad stuff and not enough of the good things...and i think that Dean would at least make sure that Sam would have the good things to remember.. i have so much faith at Dean being the perfect brother, i know, but i can't help it!! LOL Isn't it sweet of him to subconsciously remember to protect Sam? *sighs nd drools over Dean* Can't wait for the next chapter....
Author's Response: Lyn! Hey Hun, yeah you came back! How is Singapore today? This is so lovely that you did a long review, it's so nice to really know what someone likes about a story. I'm glad you liked the pool thing. I have to say it made me giggle and I wrote it! And yeah, Dean was so confused that poor Sam lost it too! Sweet boys, and gee isn't Dean a great big bro? I am happy that the flashback worked for you. I agree that Sam has a lot of tough memories, but Dean is his anchor and brings him some normality and stability. Even when he can't really remember much he knows he's Sam's guardian angel! Thanks again for this lovely review hope to see you again soon. bev x
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
I love this story. 'Nuff said.
Author's Response: Hey TV! Thanks for coming back Hunny, that's terrific of you! Glad you are enjoying it! More soon bev xx
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
Great Chapter Bev, can't wait to read the next.... well actually I can but you know what I mean. Anyways great job! =D Tori
Author's Response: Hey Tori Sweety Thanks hunny more to come soon, how's that new story of yours coming along? ready to read when it's developed! Bev xxxx
Reviewer: Rodymenia (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
this is just too cute. Dean is even more adorable than usual (like that's possible). You are doing a great job and you are definitely becoming one of my favorite writers.
Author's Response: Hey Roda. Hey thank you I am so glad you are enjoying the story. Dean is just so wonderful normally that I am very pleased you would say he's even more adorable than ever! And I am very flattered to get to be one of your fav writers. With the amazing quality of the writers on the splendid UnGen site that is an honour. Thanks for reviewing and more soon! Bev xx
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
awwww Dean can't remember who he is buthe remembered that he takes the bed by the door....soo osweet:D
Author's Response: Hey Hunny, Yeah even when Dean doesn't really know who he is he still knows what his job is! He's a sweety huh? More soon bev xx
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
Ahhh this was such a wonderful chapter. There were so many things I loved about it. The pool conversation was hilarious. I'm still loving hurt/confused!Dean and Protective!Sam. Great update, Bev.
Author's Response: Ness. Thanks so much and thanks for IM-ing me, that was such a nice surprise. Glad you liked the pool conversation, years of working with head injured patients was imprinting I think! bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
lovely chapter,really enjoyed it.earl's disgusting yuk.looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Lindsay Now come on Hun. Stop tring to deny your feelings! give into it and admit Earl really turns ya on! heehee, sorry! More soon. bev xx
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
get job! keep it up and update soon!
Author's Response: Hey Gater. Cool penname hun! Thanks glad you like it. More soon! bev xx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool!
So freaking funny mate, this is cracking me up every time, and Dean is so sweet and innocent like this, I actually can't decide if I like the old one or this new one better...lol
Author's Response: Lout Gee hunny, do ya not want me to make him better then? He is sweet though I have to say! Hey don't forget - Give Owls the Vote! Bev x
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
Bev, what a great chapter. Dean so childlike and full of wonder is just so sweet, (If any one deserves it, it's our beautiful boy) but still Dean. Of course he would know a classic when he sees one. Heartwarming indeed. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal. He's adorable isn't he? I've just ben writing the next chapter and I have to say I do think it's kinda funny! Just gotta beta and then it'll be up. Thanks Hun. bev xx
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
Love it! Even without memory Dean's always protecting Sam... So cute! And I love how Dean's always smiling at everything, and finds every little thing wonderful, lol! A sweet sappy Dean and a 'parental' Sam, what else could you ask for? great story!
Author's Response: Hey Marian. Oh thanks Hun i'm so glad you are enjoying reading 'cause it's a blast to write! And yeah, Dean is so cute when he smiles isn't he? but you're right even with no memory he could never forget to look after his Sammy! More to come yet as i'm having too much fun to mend him just yet! Bev xx
Reviewer: Pooka Bunny (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
Hehe! FUNNY!! You wrote this sooo well! I could picture the whole thing in my warped head!! The line, "Holy Shit Sam, what the hell do we do with all these? It's like we're the freaking FBI or something!" That.. was.. priceless!!! I couldn't stop from laughing! I read it at school and was laughing for a good ten minutes with on boy looking at me like I should be locked in the rubber room! Oh and one more thing, if ye stop i will find ye and make yer write more!! Keep yer writin' goin', Ashy xx P.s. Had ter give ye some stars!
Author's Response: Hey Pooka! Heehee, lock ya in the rubber room! Haha that's a hoot! And don't worry there's more to come before the 'proper' Dean comes home! Thanks for sweet words and  's! Bev xx
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
Nice job! Sam dragging his big brother along at the beginning and Dean's last line were great, hehe.
Author's Response: Sanna sweety! Thnaks Hun, glad you liked it and I enjoyed his last line too! See Dean's in there somewhere! Bev xx
Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
I have to admit I giggled quite a lot at this one! Nice work! :)
Author's Response: Hey TozaBoma. What a cool name! and pleased to generate a few giggles for ya! More to come as i'm having such a good time writing it so stay tuned! Thanks so much for reviewing bev x
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
this is really good. !!!!!!! I'm laughing out loud at some of the things Dean is saying to Sam-too funny. a happy, smiling Dean , bumping into Sammy, noticing the Harley-too good. in the next instant, holding a shotgun at the doctor to protect Sam- excellent work!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter- OUTSTANDING work!!!!!!!! more please!!!
BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: Wow Hunny that's such a lovely review!  So glad it's giving you a chuckle as I'm giggling like a loon as I write it! And yup a bit more to come yet as it's too much fun to mend him just yet! bev xx
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
Love sweet innocent amnesiac dean (well innocent except for that part where he pointed the gun at the doctor...lol) Love this story- can't wait for more.
Author's Response: TV sweety! Haha - well he didn't actually shoot the good doc so no real harm done! So pleased you like it and yup more to come as I'm having so much fun that I don't want to mend him just yet! Thanks so much for reviewing! Better than chocolate to a review slut like me! bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
this is really lovely,just so sweet,loved deans remark at the end of the chapter.can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hey Darkhunter So glad it's warming your heart, and he is just so sweet isn't he (I'm mainlining sugar as I write and owwh! it's good!) more to come before he gets restored to our more recognisible Hunk! bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
You know I love it, Bev! It is just so sweet. And really, I could listen to Dean describe classic bikes and cars forever in that sexy drawl of his (whilst gazing into his entrancing emerald eyes, of course!) Can't think of anything I haven't already told you so I'll just repeat - love it, love it, love it! Oh, and had big fun with S, D & a whole packet of Lemsip (had to watch where we rubbed the Vic tho!) Kirst xxx
Author's Response: Geekster! Lemsip and lemur porn! What more could you wish for you S**GMonkey! Love ya  Bird to Bird! xxxxx
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
It was like ‘proper’ Dean was in there, but hidden just behind the sweet sappy Dean that was currently smiling up at him. What a great description! And the first scene where Sam is dragging an overly enthusiastic big bro along, what a cool picture:)
Author's Response: Anybod! Thanks so much and I couldn't describe him any other way as I can see his gorgeous face looking up at Sam, all trust and wonder! Ah lovely! And yeah I loved that image of Sam dragging Dean along to the car, so funny! More soon! bev x
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 A bang on the head!
Well dear "smash and bash"girl, don't you worry you did fine! This was cute:) Made me giggle, and I'm more of a barking laugh girl than a giggler so... Really, this was cool. And our poor lost Dean, remembers Sam's name but not his own -says it all. And on to ch 2.
Author's Response: Anybod my sweety! Oh that's so cool if I made a barking laugh girl giggle like a Sammy-girl!! haha I giggled a lot writing it! And yeah, however lost he is he could never forget his Sam! more to come soon! bev xx
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
This is so much fun to read! I love how Dean is enthusiastic about so many things and takes the world on like a kid. Looking forwars to more :)
Author's Response: Dagmar. Hey I'm so pleased you are enjoying it as I am having great fun writing it as Dean's so sweet in this and as I'm usually beating the c**p outta him he doesn't get to show that side! More to come! bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
When Sam raised a shotgun to shoot he exhibited skill; but when Dean held his Glock 17 or threw one of his Condor Wing knives, it was a sensual lesson in ruthlessness and deadly accuracy that had been honed to perfection over years of hunting. This sentence i feel is very powerful.. it's always different watching Sam handling weapons and Dean handling weapons...and you got the difference down pat...however did you manage to put that into words??? It's so lucky that Dean didn't shoot the doc; although yeah it's the doc's fault for sneaking up on them..thank his lucky stars that Dean is not really up to anything as of yet... And you guys had a gathering? Wow, that must be fun!! Why must i live so far away.... sigh...
Author's Response: Muse Honey! So good to hear from ya and wow I didn't realise you were in Singapore! How exotic and wonderful! Thank you so much for picking out that sentence and for your lovely observation. I just kinda feel that weapons are a necessary tool to Sam but are an almost erotic extension of Dean! heehee sorry getting carried away! And yup we had a 'Gathering' in London and it was just bloody fantastic! Fantasycatcher, Bulletbabe and Cookie6 and me (and Fantasys sis) we talked and talked and drooled over the boys wonderful! Bev xx
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders!
Aw Sleepy Dean, that gives me warm fuzzies. And I loved all the varied descriptions of his eyes, beautiful!
Author's Response: Heather! Oh I so know what ya mean about the warm fuzzies from sleepy Dean - he is adorable isn't he? Oh and my mates tell me i am totally obsessed with Dean's beautiful jade/emerald/moss green eyes so expect more of that! he's gonna have a few more adventures before proper Dean comes back! Bev xx
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