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Reviewer: Marcy (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

Pretty good, i think you really caught the deep and super complicated relationship between the brothers.Clap Clap, waiting for your next stories!!!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh, did you bring this story home, what a perfect ending, touching and bit funny and with this little reminiscence to the days 'when Dean had still had hope' there was another higlight.

As it is said everyone can write a story but only the gifted can write it well and deal with the subject and you sure are gifted.

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, yeah I liked this story.  Great insight into Dean and Sam.  Just the way I think of them. Though I could never have written such a great story, well done.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

The best part was when Sam told Dean "F-you!"....I actually started ROTFLOL

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

so you really wrote this before "dream a little dream"? I'm curious to see if you go the same places they did.

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

AWWW MAN PERFECT ENDING TO THE PERFECT STORY....loved this...AMAZINGG STORY!!!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

"he's seconds away from ending up with a broken nose. Or a broken brother. He knows exactly which one he preferres".......that was a fantastic line!

I also love the part where Dean tells Sam that he lived without him before--and then rushes to add that he didn't mean it that way.

well done!

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW....IM SPEECHLESS...WHAT AN AMAZING CHAPTER...I'd pick out my favourite parts but then I'd haveta quote everyhthing in this chapter LOL andthe fact that Dean let Sam win in the end...so Dean...i'm going straight to the next chapter right now!!!!

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wonderful story. I read it straight through, no stopping, you had me hooked. You do the angsty-emotional overload stuff so very well!

--c 

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

OH MY GAWD! I'm loving this story. This chapter had me in tears. The walk down memory lane ... having Sam see it all from different perspectives. Brilliant!

--c 

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

Be proud! Here you come to the very center of Dean's world, how much he loves his brother, he'd rather die before not longer be a part of his life and for Sam, he can't go on without his brother anymore, too; it hurts to read but also it is so true and really does cover it completely.

Believe me, this story is 'round' and I'm so looking forward to the final chap but I should make sure this time not to read it before going to work, I always cry and have to do my make-up again - no, just kidding, I don't care at all and will read it as soon as you update.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is a great story.

You have totally grassped the Winchester way-every painful piece.

Each chapter has built up the  tension, anguish, fear, love-all that we hold dear as Winchester

AWESOME writing!!!!!!!!

This chapter has just torn me apart.Sam's journey in Dean's mind is so painful and revealing and loving-OUTSTANDING job!!!!

Dean-his deal- Sam- his fear-..

Excellent in every way!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!

more please.



Author's Response: Thank you so very, very much for your kind words. And I am so sorry it took me this long to reply because your comments really mad e my day!

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh yeah this really rocks.  Fantastic story so far, I think you have really caught the brothers relationship, certaintly as I see it. Keep up the good work, and many thanks.

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 4

This one left me in tears, I don't know how you're doing this, but it sure is beautiful, so good!

Don't you ever say again the story doesn't reach the episode, it is outstanding and I'm begging for more!!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

Haven't seen 'Dream a little dream' yet (UK scheduling. Damnit.) but if it's half as good as that chapter, i can't wait!

Fantastic writing!



Author's Response:

Thank  you so, so much for making my day! And my sincere apology for taking this long to reply. I hope you'll keep reading. Thank you again!

 Holly

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

definately! all of a sudden, the actions picking up, and the tension is sending chills down my back...QUICK, next chapter...

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

God, how could anyone not want to review this story? You're doing such an amazing job, I just loved this chapter and it really made my heart ache how much these two guys mean to each other; now I'm dying to know what Sam will learn while connected that way with his brother (I especially like the 'old magic' part of it), hope it won't hurt him too much so. You have to update very very soon!!!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

This one is leaving me breathless and I love every single word of it, it shows so much what this bond is about and how it feels to lose a loved one, I think we all know a bit about that; can't wait for this to continue!!!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, angst and chick flicks galore! great!

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

more???

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