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Reviews For Talking 'bout the break of dawn

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great description! I could feel it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

You write couple sentences and I can see that you are good at writing. That tells about some real talent! Beautiful and very well described. The way you ended it was cool too.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! This one jsut strolled into my head and put it's boots up on the coffee table, so I have NO IDEA where it came from or what it means... scary, somehow.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

very abstract and well written. I could just see their faces, hear their voices.
And yeah, I can put my own slant to the story...
Cool little idea.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I think this might just be the shortest piece I've ever written, so it's good to know it turned out OK.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Like the way this is very well described but at the same time left open ended and up to our imaginations...liked it, thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It just appeared out of nowhere while I was making sandwiches and wouldn't let go till I'd posted it. Glad you like dit!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lara
Cool! You ever seen Barbarella? The angel Pygar comes to mind!
Or how about a were-falcon! heehee
Bev xx

Author's Response:
That's the one with Jane Fonda, right? Now I'll have to go look up Pygar...
Glad you liked it, thanks Bev!

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