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Reviews For BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/04/09 12:51 PM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

Beautiful story! I was so drawn into your main character, I felt like I was living her life. She had some very astute perceptions. I especially liked that she noticed Dean's words and his eyes weren't in sync. And the way you ended with her not really knowing if it was Dean (Ralph) and not really wanting to know was brilliant!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 01:14 PM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

Nicely written. I always love stories that show what other people think of the Winchesters. And it was nice to come across a story that doesn't cause the boys more pain and suffering and has a happy ending.

Thanks.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 12:58 PM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

that was very beautiful,made me all tearful.

Author's Response: Here, have a tissue *g* Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 10:47 AM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

Great story, I really enjoyed your take on Faith and I enjoyed that in the end the nurse got a smidge of hope in seeing Dean again. Nice job and thanks for the Read - Kel

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 12:39 AM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

Aww...this is so sweet.........i often wondered how he'd managed to get to the motel that time...i always thought that he'd taken a cab, but your version of it is so much sweeter... :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 01:13 PM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

That was nice. It was very uplifting and hopeful. I would've like to have known who the 'I' character was a little sooner - I couldn't place the doctor with what you were writing. But once I knew she was a nurse it worked really well. I liked the perspective of the outsider. It's hard to do effectively and you did a good job. Thanks for a good read.

Author's Response: Glad you like it. The reveal of who the 'I? was, was always meant to be the last possible thing to know, turning, hopefully, Mary in to a little hidden angel.

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 06:28 PM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

good job

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 04:25 PM · On: BROKEN – A tale of fairness and maybes

Have love, candy and sugar in abundance then because this is awesome.
Having spent a good few years as a paediatric oncology nurse I can safely say that you hit the nail firmly on the head with this one. I remember feeling everything you documented, and you did it so very well...
I think it was very brave to look at the boys through the eyes of a stranger and a lovely touch to call her Mary. Beautiful last few lines too...
All in all I enjoyed this a lot and I'll look out for your next post. Well done!

Author's Response: Well thank you! That was very nice of you to say. I get my experience from the other end of the spectrum, working with cardiac patients. I'm glad that sort of sentiment translated :)

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