Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 The frienship we value
wow, i hope that Dean will have no memories of what happened, but i will, and i am traumatized!!! Terrific chapter Louy!
Author's Response: Hehehe, I shouldn't be happy about that, should I? But I am!!! Thanks for the review fredo...X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
oh god, poor Dean and maybe even more poor Sam! And Bobby, gotta love Bobby, especially when he tries to save 'his' boys lives...
Author's Response: Hey fredo, glad you're still enjoying...and not far to go now before it's over...lol Thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 1 The truth we cling to
Just read the entire thing in one sitting; very bleary eyed now but...wow...I don't know what else to say. This was excellent & I eagerly await the conclusion!
Author's Response: Wow, Kristen, I can't believe you read the whole thing...and in one sitting too...you must be pretty exhausted so I hope you're getting plenty of sleep now to make up for it..lol I'm so pleased you enjoyed it though, and that you're eager for the rest...only 2 more chapters to go and then we're done. Thanks for the great review and the stars and welcome to the site, hope you enjoy all the stories you read...and maybe you'll even get the bug and start to post..heheheX Louy
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 8 The dreams that teach us
I love your description, soul sick. it's so apt! and it's the first time i've ever read about it. it fits the Winchesters perfectly. And yup Sam is acting a bit out of character but then i thought that it was understandable considering that Dean nearly died and Sam himself was forced to take part in his brother's suffering. and the whole staying in the car, well, Dean is never going to go for it is he? But regardless of guardian angels or patron saints, Dean wasn’t happy…and by God if he could just stay awake long enough, he was going to make sure the whole damned world knew about it. This is so Dean... :)
Author's Response: Thanks Lyn, soul sick does suit those 'angsty' boy's to a T doesn't it...lol Sam's gonna be acting quite a bit more out of character in the sequel but as always, I hope I can give a good reason for it and it's believable...and that he goes back to being 'lovable Sammy' at the end...that's the most important bit for me...lol Thanks for the review and the stars and I hope you enjoy the last 2 chapters as much. X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 8 The dreams that teach us
Ahh, yes, I sure cannot imagine Dean wanting to be left in the car. This was a nice update. Glad to see Dean is recuping--somewhat anyway--from his freaky ordeal. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: You imagine right, Ness, hehehe, staying in any car that's not his baby is just so not Dean...lol Hope you enjoy the last 2 chapters too...X Louy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 8 The dreams that teach us
Aw, poor Dean. And Bobby. And freaky Sam! Can't wait for more, as always you leave us hanging on every word...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review cal and thanks for the great compliment, I hope you enjoy the last two chapters of this one, next update won't be long..X Louy
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 The dreams that teach us
This story pulls me in more with each chapter. I really loved the detail that Bobby calls the boys his boys. And the more of the the characters of Burgess and David you write the more I want to know how they will tie into the rest. And, despite my babbling, one more thing. i enjoyed the Dean point of view comments after he woke up at the end of the chapter. I could picture it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Anna, thats a great compliment. There is nothing better than to read a review that says you were pulled along with the story...you've put a huge smile on my face...thank you so much. X Louy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 8 The dreams that teach us
Lou. Sam's impending breakdown is freaking me out far more than I imagined it would. I think it's since Sammy got stroppier and funkier, but his descent into chaos is totally messing with my head. Bobby is wonderful in this, I am so pleased that he's there for Dean especially now Sammy is cracking up. There is no way though that Dean's gonna get left in the car is there? Surely not Lou? Great chapter love it. Bev xxxx
Author's Response: Wasn't sure how readers were gonna handle the whole Sammy slowly breaking apart thing, but we'll have to see...I'm going to stay true to the outline, but do not frett...by the end of the sequel we're back to good ol loveable Sammy...lol Thanks for the review mate, I appreciate every one.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 7 The frienship we value
Phew!! thank god the torture doesn't last...i mean when they were doing the ritual anyway..the rest...well.....we'll just have to see.... :)
Author's Response: Hehehe, oops, I'm afraid there's a bit more to come before Dean's saved from his 'lack of future'...thanks for the review Lyn and for the stars...X Louy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
Teetering on the edge here - guilt, loss, hope - emotionally a very raw chapter, beautifully written, enjoyed it - Angela
Author's Response: And if i'm honest...teetering on the edge is just where I'd hoped everyone would be...lol Thanks for the great review Angela. XXX Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 7 The frienship we value
If you dont know it by now i LOVE this story so much. i check everyday to see if it has been updated. Thanks for writing something i can look forward to. sorry back to this chapter. WOW i loved every bit of it. Can't wait to read more! sarah
Author's Response: That is such a great compliment Sarah, thank you so much. There's nothing better than to know someone is following and enjoying a story...you've just made my day again...Going to be a couple of days late with the next chapter as I had to have a go at the UnGen challenge but I hope you'll enjoy that one too...Thanks again Sarah...X Louy
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 3 The rules we live by
Wow love the story so far-the way you're slowly building the suspence is great. Noth boys are written perfectly too-keep up the good work! x
Author's Response: Thanks so much IHeartSam (wonder who your fav. brother is??? hehe) and I hope you enjoy the rest just as much...X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 7 The frienship we value
Fantastic! Simply fantastic. Loved all the hurt (and beginnings of comfort hehe). I have to say those symbols crawling their way into Dean's body is one of the creepiest things I've ever read. Such nice work, Lou. Impressive.
Author's Response: Now that is a compliment, thank you so much Ness, I'm very happy you're enjoying. X Louy P.S. Peeps are awesome! lol
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 7 The frienship we value
Argh, Three chapters over and done and I want more, god I'm greedy aren't I. I'm so completely loving every aspect of this story and I cannot wait for more. So glad that Sam caught a bit of a break with the kind nurse and that for the moment at least things are looking up - Thanks for the great read, what a nice way to spend a Friday evening - Kel
Author's Response: That nurse is based on a good friend of mine but she doesn't know it yet...gulp...I hope she doesn't mind...lol And I think that might be the last break Sam gets for a little while at least, he'd better make the most of it... Thanks again Kel. X Louy
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
“SAM?” Bobby’s shout had lost all its familiar control and fortitude, he’d been reduced to desperately pleading, needing to know his boys were safe. “Sam, you hear me boy?” - his boys, guh, that just kills me. Great update and I'm dying to move on - Kel
Author's Response: Thanks Kel and very glad you're still enjoying. Bobby is such a huge part of this story, and the sequel so I'm glad he's working for you...X Louy
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 5 The pain we endure
Okay so I've waited and waited and now I have three chapters to enjoy in one shot. Do I even have to say that the last line was a killer, LOVED IT, - Moving on - Kel
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kel, glad there aren't too many cliffhangers for you. Believe it or not, I tried to not do any in this story, but never say never...lol Thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 7 The frienship we value
Another great chapter. I like the idea of how to save Dean. Hope we get something half this creative. Thanks for a great read. Looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks Kim, and I hope you enjoy the rest as much as I'm enjoying 'Choices'...one of my faves. Thanks X Louy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 7 The frienship we value
LouLou. This is a wonderful chapter. I love Bobby looking out for Dean and Sam is great as he vascilates between Uber-macho and distressed and vulnerable. Great work - but then I already told ya that! Love ya Hun bev xxx
Author's Response: Ah Bev, thanks mate, and yeah Sam is great at vacsi,,,vasci...vascilating whatever that means...you always have to get one over on me don't ya??? lol
Reviewer: jensengal3 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
another great chapter!! i feel like i'm watching a finale of supernatural! cant wait for more. sarah
Author's Response: WOW what a compliment...thank you so much for that Sarah, you've made my day!! XX Louy
Reviewer: ellen42 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
I'm really enjoying this, would you please write more quick!
Author's Response: Thanks for this ellen42, I'm always so pleased when someone new likes a story enough to review...Thanks very much X Louy
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
Very emotional! I hope Sam can keep this secret from his brother. It's apparent that Dean remembering could have bad consequences.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, and yeah, that is the question. Can Sam keep it all to himself? lol Thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
I have no more fingernails left to chew on....and i think my lip has been bruised enough when i keep chewing on it...this chapter is nerve-wracking......all the things that's been done to Dean is so vivid... and i can't imagine how Sam must have felt to be the one to do most of them to his own brother...even though it's for his own good.... I can't wait to see what happens!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Sam is in a very bad place at the moment, having to do all these dreadful things to his brother in order to save his life. Next chapter won't be long, and thanks for another great review and rating. XXX Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make
awwwwww, Louy....your description of the faces...the symbols....the mystic whisperings.... Breathtaking!!! Am in awe of your writing......... More quickly...please???
Author's Response: Won't be too long I promise, been away for a few days and so I'm a bit behind but will be posting soon!! And thanks for yet another awesome review and rating from you Jude. Please post soon, cos I do miss your fantastic stories!!!! XX Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 The pain we endure
OMG....and not even a HELLHOUND...!!?? OMG, LOUY !!!
Author's Response: Hehehehe, yup, had to get at least one nasty slathering black dog in there...but your dog had better taste, he went for Dean's pants didn't he? hehe X Thanks again Jude...XX Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/03/08 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 4 The fear that controls us
okay...soooo happy the boys didn't have the doors locked on the Impala that other night.... and we ALL know Dean deserves to be saved....and that you, Sam and Bobby will be the team to do it!!!thanks soooo much, Louy !!!!!
Author's Response: Gotta say Jude, it means the world to me that you think this is worth sticking with, thanks so much for that and thanks for the stars...they mean so much...XXX Louy
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