Reviewer: angelica (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
AWESOME CAN'T WAIT 4 MORE.I'LL GIVE A BETTER REVIEW L8ER GOT 2 GO
Author's Response: Angelica. Hey hunny, glad your enjoying it and please do feel free to come back as I loves me reviews like i loves me some peanut M&M's! hahahaha bev xx
Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
I'm not sure reviewing you would help. First it was poorly finger and now its spread to the rest of you.....hmmm. you're not falling apart are you? How about I review the chapter instead? (g) I liked this chapter for the human aspect - the mischievous Uriel against Dean, who could under normal circumstances hold his own but being hurt isn't firing on all cylinders and Jo being caught in the middle. I get the feeling she's a bit disbelieving that an angel (arch angel at that) could behave in such a childish fashion so she doesn't handle it with her usual panache. That in turn sends confusing signals to Dean - I guess he isn't quite sure of his emotions yet... I look forward - as always - to the next chapters and to hearing that YOU are firing on cylinders!
Author's Response: Whoa Tracy, you have found me out I'm really a rather crumbly revenant and yup now the warmer weathers coming bits keep drying up and dropping off...bugger there goes another finger!  heehee Thanks for your considered words on this chapter and yup you have so got they thread I was going for here.Uri is being a petulant child here but he's real good at it and he's gonna carry on a while because he's smarting from being left out and though its not Dean and Sam's fault they are gonna be the ones he takes it out on! Jo is confused, by how she feels about both Dean and Uriel, and you're right she's confusing Dean tremendously. Isn't it all wonderfully gut churning? Emo is so much wicked fun! Right off to sew that bloody finger back on or how will I do next chapter? Maybe I could get voice recon software? heehee thanks for lovely review ya cheeky girly! Bev xx
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
Fantastic chapter, it just keeps getting better and better. Keep them coming
Author's Response: hey Hunny. Cool so glad its still pushing your buttons, always the worry with longer stories that they'll go off the boil so good to know I'm hanging it in there for ya! More soon and hey - thanks for reviewing its such a lovely thing to do. bev xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
That was great Birdie. So much tension between Dean and Uri and poor Jo was stuck in the middle. With Jo going with the others it's Sam who's going to stand Dean and Uri. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hey Hunny, Well yup they are really snarking and spitting at each other aren't they? And you're dead right Sam is gonna have to be peacekeeper, poor Sammy! More soon hun and it's gonna be feisty! thanks so much for reviewing means the world bev xxx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
Can I just say here...I would take ANY offer from Michael he'd care to make me...or any from that sex on a stick Uri...or come to think of it any of those lusty angels...sorry, I know there not meant to be lusty per say but...;) Glad Uri is staying around for a while yet...loving this story...
Author's Response: LouLou. Well in that case Uriel wonders if you have any time tomorrow because he has the Harley machine that he'd like to show ya, Oh and Michael says he'll brush you down afterwards if you get all dusty... They are such share alls my angel boys!  Baby Bhuddie xxxxx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
"But wait...oh hell yeah; he had!" Laugh riot! I busted a gut! I hated coming to the end of this chapter! The verbal sparring between Dean and Uriel pretty intense and then the precarious relationship between Dean and Jo mde the tension even more impossible. I luuuuv it!
Author's Response: Shannon. Heehee, itchy submit button finger! Bev xx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
Hey Bev, babe, I enjoyed this chapter so much. I like the clashes between Uri and Dean. Over JO and the Impala, both Dean's girls - not Uriel's! But I think they'll end up being pals, men are so simple. Fight and then have a beer! HAHA... Keep it coming... Ilka
Author's Response: Hey my Sweety. You are so right - both Dean's girls! Haha. And yeah, Dean and Uri are gonna snarl and spit at each other but they may well end up having a beer...if they don't kill each other first! more soon hey I'll race you to finish our next chapters! bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
"But wait...oh hell yeah; he had!" Laugh riot! I busted a gut! I hated coming to the end of this chapter! The verbal sparring between Dean and Uriel pretty intense and then the precarious relationship between Dean and Jo mde the tension even more impossible. I luuuuv it!
Author's Response: Shannon. Heehee, that tickle ya funny bone huh? know what that means hun? Yup, you're one warped puppy but them hell it takes one to know one! Glad you enjoyed the Dean/Uriel dynamic. They are gonna spar and snark big time so lots more to come Shannon and poor Sam's gonna have to deal with their spitting and snarling! New chapter soon and I hope to see you there. Thanks and loves ya! bev xx
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
I love this story. I'm loving this Dean-Uriel tension and some of it directed over Jo. Great update.
Author's Response: Hey TV. Thanks for saying you love it that gives me goosebumps! The Dean/Uriel dimension is gonna be really sparky and poor Sam is gonna have to referree their relationship for quiet some time! More to follow soon. Thanks as always for sticking with me and reviewing I really appreciate it bev x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael
wonderful chapter,looking forward to them going to bobby's,love bobby.
Author's Response: Lindsay Oh I so love Bobby too he' just the best isn't he. Have you read GaelicSpirits In the Light? Just been reading it and her Bobby is to die for, wonderful. But then its Gaelic and she is awesome! Thanks for reviewing me I really appreciate you sticking with me bev xx
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 Nightmares
Have read all the chapters to date and must say I have enjoyed them a lot please keep them coming.
Author's Response: Maureen. Will do hun and thanks for reviewing. Bev xx
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 Nightmares
Brilliant start to the sequel. Will enjoy the rest just as much Ill sure. 10/10
Author's Response: Hey Maureen. Well thank you for your very kind words. I'm glad it lives up to the original and hope you try the other chapters and let me know what you think. love Bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
fantastic chapter,still loving this story.
Author's Response: Lindsay. Thanks Hun, glad it's working for ya. More to come soon, and many thanks for reviewing Bev xx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
Love this chapter, and especially Dean's panic and reliance on his little bro...awe!!! Mikey really is a freak isn't he, can't wait to see where that's going and as for the lovely Uri...well, that is my only complaint...not enough Uri, but as I've read the next chap already and know how good it is I will forgive ya hun!!
Author's Response: LouLouLashes! Now Lout, Mikey is my boy so how could he possibly be a freak? I think you misread his willingness to be close friends with Dean as freakery! And yup you know Uriel is gonna make his mark so don't worry your pretty little fluttering lashes... Thanks hun wovs ya! Bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
a few words......LOL there' i've written them...hahahaha.. sorry..need a few moments to be corny..back to my review...i'm sort of apprehensive at this point to let Uri stay with Sam Dean and Jo..he has a bit of an attitude and although i do love the cockiness that reminds me so much of our brothers, i wonder if they are ready enough to accept it. and what if having an archangel living with you attracts more of the wrong sort of things??? and Mikey is one sly b....... LOL can't wait for Dean to be strong enough to kick his ass! Dean gasped the question but Sam was pleased to see a healthy dollop of irritation lurking just behind the hiccupping pain. Irritation was an emotion he could harness and work with to distract his brother from his continuing panic. “You gotta calm down.” Good, a dangerous glower that said ‘yeah, Sam, let’s see you try and be calm whilst this damned angel tap dances all over your mangled ribs and this freaky new mojo I seem to have acquired ripples through your body!’ “Remember when we were on the plane? You were hysterical then too...” “Hy...s...t...r...cl!” Dean barely had the breath to get that one word out but there was no way he was going to let a crack like that go. His eyes sparked with a blaze of emerald green as they wordlessly shrieked in disgust at Sam’s ‘designed to patronise’ parental gaze. ‘ I love the boys when they do this!! especially when Sam does it to Dean... shows so much love in the most opposite way.. LOL
Author's Response: Lyn sweety! Hehee, ya daft beggar! Well I suspect you're right to be a bit apprehensive about the Sam/Dean/Uriel dynamic because it's going to be a bit of a rollercoaster ride. Owh and yeah having an archangel in your spare bedroom could cause all sorts of bother! I'm glad you liked that bit of the chapter, I love it when Sam and Dean are a bit pissy with each other and with great big adorable macho idjit Dean it's sometimes the only way to get through that thick skull of his! Thanks for reviewing hun, always appreciated. More soon. Bev xx
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
another great chapter. i was hoping you would have Michael still be in Dean's room when he woke up. like how Sam has become the protector for Dean especially where Michael is concerned. Mikey being able to see and feel Dean's pain both mentally and physically; he is going to be trouble for Dean again. Uriel staying with the boys, can't wait too read how this is going to play out. Him and Sam don't get along too well all ready. i have to say it YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love your stories and will be waiting ever so patiently for chapter 7. Renee
Author's Response: Renee hunny, Yeah Michael is still freaking Dean out but it is lovely that Sammy is looking after him. I think Sam is so sweet when he's being protective and of course Dean is just adorable when he's vulnerable. Oh and yup he is vulnerable and Mikey is waiting in the wings! And the Sam/Dean/Uriel dynamic is going to be colourful to say the least. more to come soon and many thanks for your very kind words, you have made my day! Bev xxx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
Great chapter. The healing was painful but at least Dean is getting better but emotionally he's still vulnerable especially when he's in the presence of Michael. While Uriel is staying with Dean and Sam the others'll go check the gate, what Mikey is going to do. Captivating story so far, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hey Hun. Yeah Dean is getting a bit better but you're right he's still a bit vulnerable and Mikey would love to get his claws back into our boy. There are gonna be some sparks between the boys and Uriel so hang in there I hope it's gonna be a lot of fun. Thanks for reviewing really appreciate it. Bev xxx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
Hey there BEV, glad to see you posted the new chapter. didn't expect it so soon. And I like it, really do. The whole angel concept is a nice addition to the "winchester tales". I like Michael a lot. Even though he seems very imposing an all. I think in time even Dean will be able ti relate to him. And what about Jo and Uriel? Were are they? That diner so frigging far away, huh? Uriel is kinda cute, him and his snarky remarks. Much like a mix between Sam an Dean. Nice character traitsin a perfect man/angel. Wanna thank you again for your recommendations about other stories. Can't wait to read the next chapter... hugs, Ilka
Author's Response: Ilka hunny! Hey new chapter yup! well you're getting spoiled because I'm on holiday from work so lots of time to write! I'm glad you like the angels, and Michael is a good guy really and Dean know's that deep down it's just that, after what Mikey did to him, he's a bit freaked out! Uriel on the other hand is a bit of a funky bad boy, noy your fluffy wings and halo type of angel! And it's gonna take a while for him and Dean to see eye to eye! More soon hunny and remember to let me know if you enjoy the suggested stories. Keep in touch hun, we're on Yahoo messenger a lot - you got that? bev xxxxx
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
I have been following, and enjoying,the story this far, poor Dean, the pain, love it , keep it up............
Author's Response: Hey hunny. Glad very much that you are enjoying it. I'm a terror for hurting poor Dean but he is so blooming adorable when he's all boboo'd up that I can't help myself. Hope to talk to you again and thanks for taking the time to review, much appreciated Bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
Great chapter! I was hoping that Dean wouldn't freak over Michael being in his room, but he held out longer than I could have. Love your unique descriptive words---soft-ish, quasi-friendly. Excellent!
Author's Response: Shannon Hunny, Yup he nearly held it together but Michael is a big impressive sorta guy and well Mikey had been a nasty host to spend those few days with! Thanks very much for the compliment re descriptive words, I do love to play with words (so of course mangle 'em real good sometimes!) Thanks for reviewing Bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
Well you know I liked it hun. Still think you could have improved it tenfold by having Sam kick the living daylights out of Michael for freaking Dean out and for being such a pious gobshite. Still, I'll forgive that slight oversight because you give us fab lines like: '...road construction gang of orthopedically reckless psychopaths...' And as Michael is going to be bogging off for awhile, I'll lay off him. Just for now, though. Sterling work, my dear idjit! Kirst xxx
Author's Response: Geekster. If i wasn't afraid that my only path to salvation was to keep in with any bleeding angel who'll speak to me then I would be pleased to educate Michael as per your delicate instructions, however I have much to atone for (I know you find it hard to believe) so can't whammy the Prince of Angels just yet! And the above line was wrought from personal experience having had a junior doc remove my wires following an orthopeadic reconstruction of my wrist! Thanks as always my beloved beta! Your Idjit xxxxxxx
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/08 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
Another great chapter. Thank you
Author's Response: Hey Jan. Thank you and thanks for taking the time to review it is always appreciated. bev xx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 Nightmares
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Author's Response: Ilka. Hey just visited your biog page and I was so flattered to see you had tagged me as a fav! That is such a compliment, I'm stoked! As to recommendations for other good stories? wow there are so many on this awesome site. I'll send you some via your 'contact' button OK? Thanks very much for reviewing Bev xx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 3 Rutting Stags
MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Author's Response: Ilka, Haha hunny that is a lovely review. So I take it i'd better get on with it huh?
Thanks hun
Bev xx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 2 Reunions
Love long chapters. This one sucked me in. So please do them long. I relish in them.
Author's Response: Ilka, oh you're doing every chapter that is so cool! I really love it when someone does that.
Like longer chapters huh? OK I'll do my best!
Bev xx
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