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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 13 Breakfast Discussions

So first - Thankyou for posting...needed something to read and as if by magic there it was...

...and am I the only person with a stupid and huge crush on Uri...love that angel...lol

And now you're hinting at the full on return of 'Mikey' that is Belial - can't wait for the next one mate...gonna be awesome. XXX Louy



Author's Response:

LouLou.

How many times do i have to tell you...you only have to ask and it will be there!

And no you're not the only one who fancies Uriel but you maybe are the most devoted!  But then seeing as he was written for you that's a relief!

So you don't fancy Belial then?  I kinda like him myself...

And for the stars...i am humbly grateful.  Love ya hunny. bev xxxx 







Reviewer: Geena (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

awwww... This was a fabulous chapter.  I soo needed that.  *hugs the boys*  Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

What a funny chapter. Dean and Uriel're so acting like brats. Uriel haven't been charitable but in the end he paid for that, lol. Can't wait to know what's next.

Author's Response:

Hey Hunny.

Yup, such terrible brats huh? I kinda figured a bit of down time mightn't go amis and I did enjoy undressing them!

More soon as just been refreshing my plot scenario and am now heading into chapter writing!  Hope to hearfrom you again and thanks.

bev xx

Reviewer: angelica (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

LMAO.I CAN TOTALLY PICTURE THIS AND DEAN'S FACE.BEV SWEETIE YOUR A GENIOUS!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WAS DIEING WITHOUT MY ANGEL FIX.I SEE YOU'VE PUT YOUR STORIES UP ON FANFICTION.NET.ALTHOUGH THAT SITE IS CRAPPY IT'S GOOD TO SEE YOU BRANCHING OUT IN OTHER PLACES AND LETTING A WIDER FAN BASE SEE YOUR AMAZING WORK. GO URIEL!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Angel!

I'm so pleased it gave ya a giggle hunny, i thought the boys deserved a bit of down time and I enjoyed taking their clothes off!

Yup am trying FF.net as well, although Ungen is always my spiritual home as it rocks! Its really cause I'ma review slut and another site means more reviews!!

And more angel fixes soon hunny as I've just had a plotline review and am all geared to crack on with this one now!

Thanks as always for lovely review, they so keep me motivated!

 bev xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

What a brilliant chapter.

Some very funny lines.

This one had me laughing out loud,make the little winged shit come outta there this minute,Sammy.

End of chapter was really funny.



Author's Response:

Hey Lindsay.

Nice to hear from ya hun! And very pleased you liked it.  Uri is a bit of a brat isn't he but I do like him.

Hey Lindsay, where in the North East are ya?

 

Bev xx

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

I loved this.....awesome!!!! I like evil Dean with the archangel in the freezing shower. hahahah....GREAT keep posting!!!!!

Pranami :)

Author's Response:

Hey Pranami.

Thanks for this sweet review, much appreciated and I'm  glad you enjoyed Dean getting his revenge on Uriel! More to come soon.  Bev xx

Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

Y'know, every time I start to think maybe Uri isn't such a bad old stick after all, he goes and does something to make me wanna bitch slap him!  Glad he got his just desserts though - yay for Bobby's dodgy plumbing (Ha!)

Great chappy, you write so well that the whole hunting lark just becomes secondary to Dean being bashed, healing, being bashed a bit more then having a shower to clean off all the muck from having been bashed so much.  There's an entire story just in that!

Good work, Hunny.

Kirst xxx



Author's Response:

Hey Snow (animated southern slut!)

Now, I know ya really adore Uriel, its that thing about refusing to aknowledge a boy that ya like! And behave or I'll bring Michael back.

And OK i get the drift and there WILL be a bit more action in the next few chapters, (might have to hurt them a bit too!)

Kiss kiss snog snog.  bev xx

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

Hahahahaha....this chapter is very lighthearted and i'm enjoying the reprieve from all the angst and anger.....and i'm enjoying Uri's and Dean's relationship more!! it reminds me of Sam and Dean's, with more explosives! LOL

“Make the little winged shit come outta there this minute, Sammy, or I swear there will be one less freaking angel trumpet playing Dixie...”

“I’ll leave you my conditioner when I’m done so that spiked up mess of yours might look as good as my blond perfection and ...”

This 2 sentences had me laughing out loud..more of this please!!Both Uri and Dean will come to blows if they are not careful... :) although i think Sam and Bobby will be there to make sure they don't.

Which reminds me, are you going to give us a glimpse of what the other angels and Jo are doing, or are you just going to concentrate on what's going on at Bobby's? 



Author's Response:

Hey Lyn.

Well I'm pleased you enjoyed the chapter and that Dean and Uriel's relationship is giving you a giggle. Uri is a terrible brat isn't he?

Umm, do you want to see what's happeneing with the other angels and Jo?  Maybe I better write them back in eh hun?

Thanks again!  bev xxx

Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

ha ha ha, that was great, really really funny. I loved the chapter, im waiting for the next one. Thanks :)

Author's Response:

Hey Rut.

Well I'm real glad it made you smile and thanks for coming to review. I love reviews!  bev xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

Great chapter thoroughly enjoying the story. Always eager for another update. Keep writing Please.

Author's Response:

Hey Maureen.

Thanks so much and I am very pleased to know that it's still floating your boats. Will be more soon. Thanks as always for the review, much appreciated.  bev xx

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

Fantastic update! Funny, (The Winchester/Angel Entente Cordiale, 'Angels suck!' Great!) Sweet, sad, in all the right measures.

Lovin' the downright contrary Archangel at the end too...!



Author's Response:

Cal-baby!

Heehee, ya know I'm fond of my angels too!  Uriel is an annoying brat but god is he adorable!

Hey hows that sweet new laptop? 

Big snogs  Bev xxx

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

Now who would have thought, a whole chapter dedicated to injury and showers, and the title says it all...lol

Love this fic Bev, you do have a unique take on the whole hurt Dean thing and Uri is just more and more appealing every time you write him. Great job all round mate. XX Louy



Author's Response:

Loulou.

Awh, you kinda like my angel huh?  Loulou and Uriel sitting in a ... 

He's a wondeful, lovable brat and I adore him!

Love ya Lou  bev xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

Bev,

Welcome back babe................missed ya

this chapter was great had me laughing at Dean and Uri.  i would have kicked his ass! 

loved these two lines the best,
"Make the little winged shit come outta there this minute, Sammy, or I swear there will be one less freaking angel trumpet playing Dixie..."  and "Uriel, open the damn door and get your feathered ass out here this minute!"......LOL

the line with the conditioner also great. 

Poor Sam trying not to laugh but thankfully Dean had the last laugh thanks to the plumbing.

again glad you are back

Renee 



Author's Response:

Renee.

Hey Boo, I'm glad to be back too. The laptop meltdown was terrifying and scary, i very nearly lost all my stories and everything, thank god for my external hard drive and regular backups!

I'm glad you liked the chapter, Uriel is a brat but i do love him!

Thanks as always for your kind words of encouragement. Reviews make my day!

 bev xxx

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

Ooohhh, Uriel is a cheeky one, isn't he?  Poor Dean.  I had to smile at the scene of Sam holding Dean back while Dean's growling lemme at him.  hehe

Nice update, as always.  :-)



Author's Response:

Ness.

Uriel is a terrible brat isn't he? And ya know something..I adore him!  Heehee.  Thanks for that Ness, much appreciated.  bev xx

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing.

That was a delightful chapter!  Definitely a he who laughs last, laughs best.

I'm so glad your back up worked!  The thought of all your lovely stories being wiped away is horrifying!



Author's Response:

Shannon.

Awh thanks for that hunny.  Oh and I am so relieved now that I'm back up and running again.  Has taken hours to reload programmes but have lost one file only and that had all my Dean and Sam pics!  Fortunately I had copied them onto Lou's computer when we all met in London so can get them back!

Its put me back though so now have to get my writing hat on!

Thanks again  bev xxxx

Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's

ok, i loved this story. Michael, Raguel, Raphael and Uriel are wonderful. I think Uriel has some things in common with Sam and with Dean, but sometimes he can be so annoying, ha ha. Please, please, i really want to know what's gonna happen with the boys, continue, please :)

Author's Response:

Rut.

Hey babe!  haha, so pleased you liked it and more to come soon.  I'm so pleased you like the angels and yeah, Uri can be annoying but he's a sweet heart really. Thanks for coming to Ungento review, very much appreciated.  bev xx

Reviewer: WICKY987 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's

love this story cant wait for the update you have created so many posibilities for the plot, i asume dean is heading for more pain, and cant wait for the joe/dean thing to kick in again!

Author's Response:

Hye Hunny.

Well I'm real glad ya like it and another chapter very soon ( gotta go to my betas) as I've been away in France for a week and got chapter 12 done.

And yeah, seeing as it comes from my furtile imagination its always safe to assume there will be pain for Dean... i do so love to hurt that boy!! Heehee, I'm bad!

Thanks very much for reviewing and hope to hear from ya again.

bev xx

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's

Ah....Sam and Uri's talk is so heartwarming, from one younger bro to the other....i'm glad both of them understand each other, although i think that Dean and Uri should be able to get along since both of them are so cheeky!! 

bobby and Dean's talk, on the other hand, is heartbreaking in a sense....i mean, Dean could only say these things when his guard is down, and it took him at the edge of exhaustion to admit to even Bobby that he's afraid...

And Dean and Sam think alike!!!! Or rather, i think Sam knows how to read his bro well...



Author's Response:

Lyn,

you are so sweet for reviewing each chapter like that!

I think you're right Sam and Uri have a baby brother bonding thing going on but stick with it and I suspect Dean and Uri might find common ground too as you suggest.

I was worried people might find this a bit of a 'talky' chapter...you know...not enough action but the reviews suggest it went down ok so thats a relief!

More soon and thanks again

bev xx

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 10 Freaking Arch Angels!

“How you doing, Dean?”

Sam spoke to the top of his brother’s bowed head and he was surprised when he heard a mildly pissed response.

“Quit stalling, Sam! Let’s move. Don’t want ...get caught...with ya feeling ...up...merchandise.”

Bobby’s voice betrayed his growing concerns as he crouched down and pulled Dean’s feet by his jeans centring them under his sagging body, and Sam was relieved to feel Dean take some of his weight himself. Bobby rose just in time to hear Dean mumble.

“God, does everyone wanna cop a feel?” 

LOL doesn't he know that a lot of females would love to cop a feel at him!!? and that is so sweet of him, trying to ease everyone when he's the one that's hurt and about to collapse...

And Bobby's reaction to having an archangel in his kitchen is priceless!!! Although, forgive me for being so ignorant, but what's the difference between an angel and an archangel? 



Author's Response:

Lyn.

Hey I'm so with you on the whole 'copping a feel' deal! and isn't he just so adorable trying to make light of the situation when he's feeling so poorly! I'd risk being ill though if i could get them to manhandle me like that!

As to angels vs archangels, here's a bit of info from Wikipedia explaining that archangels are the highest ranking in the heirarchy of the angels.

 Hope it doesn't bore ya!

Love Bev xx

Archangels

Main article: Archangel

The word archangel comes from the Greek αρχάγγελος (archangělǒs), meaning chief angel.[7] It derives from the Greek archō, meaning to be first in political rank or power; and aggělǒs which means messenger. This suggests that they are the highest ranking angels. The word is only used twice in the New Testament: 1 Thessalonians 4:16 and Jude 1:9. Only Michael and Gabriel are mentioned by name in the New Testament.

Michael is the only angel the Bible names expressly as THE archangel. In Daniel he is referred to as "one of the chief princes". The word "prince" here is the ancient Hebrew word sar, which means: "a head person (of any rank or class), a chief, a general etc."[8]

In most Christian traditions Gabriel is also considered an archangel, but there is no direct literal support for this assumption.

The name of the archangel Raphael appears only in the Deuterocanonical Book of Tobit (Tobias). Tobit is considered canonical by Roman Catholics (Both Eastern, and Western Rites), Eastern Orthodox and some (but few) Protestants.[9] Raphael said to Tobias that he was "one of the seven who stand before the Lord", and it is generally believed that Michael and Gabriel are two of the other seven.

A fourth Archangel is Uriel whose name literally means "The Light of God." Uriel's name, along with Raphael doesn't appear in the Protestant Bible, nor the Apocrypha, but rather the Book of Enoch, which is considered canonical only by the Ethiopian Orthodox Church.

Another possible interpretation of the seven archangels, is that the seven are the seven spirits of God that stand before the throne described in the Book of Enoch, and in the Book of Revelation.[10]

They (The Seven Archangels) are said to be the guardian angels of nations and countries, and are concerned with the issues and events surrounding these, including politics, military matters, commerce and trade: e.g. Archangel Michael is traditionally seen as the protector of Israel and of the Ecclesia (Gr. root ekklesia from the New Testament passages), theologically equated as the Church, the forerunner of the spiritual New Israel.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 9 And So to Bobby's...

Hey, i don't really have to hide my face in my hands anymore, since they seem to get along pretty well now! well, not that well,but considering what happened before they start the journey, i think it's awesome that there is no yelling....

And bad bad Mikey!!!!!!!!! damn him for making Dean afraid to get some sleep... 



Author's Response:

Lyn.

Hey your reviewing each chapter! That is such a nice thing to do, thanks babe you rock.

Yup they are getting along a bit better but don't mean to say it'll continue!  

Oh and Mikey...well he's just plain mean so he could do anything yet!

Thanks sweety. Hey I was talking to Janger (Jane) today and she said you had reviewed her first story and I said lucky you cause Lyn is a fab reviewer!

Bev xx

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 8 Departures.

So are Sam and Uri going to be squabbling as well, since, you know, Sam would do anything to defend his bro and Uri has already annoyed the both of them....

Jo stepped closer to Dean and was unsurprised that his face was a purposefully unreadable mask.  She had known the hunter long enough to know that his place of safety was deep inside himself and those expressive eyes, that could occasionally offer such a privileged view of his complicated soul, could also be as cold as emerald ice.

I like the reaction that Dean has to the whole Jo/Uri hug/kiss. Dean's not the type of guy who wears his heart on his sleeve (blood, maybe, but not heart....LOL sorry, can't resist being corny) so maybe him being completely unreadable is good. and yup, his eyes can be cold as well..

Next chapter... 



Author's Response:

hey Lyn

It's so good to hear from you, I've missed ya!  How's Singapore? 

I have a happy obsession with Dean's eyes and think they are just beautiful but you are so right he's not as open with his heart as Sam is. I'm pleased that you found this writing of him recognisable.

Bev xx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/05/08 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's

Awesome chapter. Dean confiding to Bobby and Sam, doing the same with Uriel was beautifully done. Hope Dean is fine. Poignant, emotional story, Birdie, can't wait for your next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey Ocea.baby!

Wow such kind words, i thank you very much!  Trying to get my act togethher and speed it up chapter wise...trying!   bev xx

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's

Bev,

once again you have touched a be founding core deep inside of my soul.  

the test to have faith, to believe;  i feel is in all of us. to do what is right is thrust at us daily.  the knowledge that good can not exist without evil is part of our everyday life.

i love how you have written out this chapter  Dean trusting Bobby enough to not only tell him how he feels scared as hell but also being able to shed the tears he so desperately tries to hide. 

i love how Bobby has become so much of a father figure to these 2 my heart breaks when he is hurting just as much as if were Dean or Sam in pain.

i am also really liking how you are having Sam bound with Uriel.  Sam telling Uriel why Dean is afraid is profound.  Uriel and Sam relating on how their big brothers forget they are adults too real had me laughing.  

"Dean looked into his brother's wide, warm hazel eyes and saw the unvoiced concerns in his worried frown. He managed a smile, and for a moment exhaustion caused that simple gesture to roll back the older hunter's omnipresent shutters allowing Sam to see straight into his brother's complex and damaged depths. It was like being instantly sucked into a churning vortex and the turbulence and terror roiling within the outwardly tranquil man was breathtaking. The sudden revelation of his brother's inner turmoil left Sam reeling."  this description of Dean to Sam left me breathless the realization hit hard.  i loved this paragraph.

You have described Dean's eyes in so many different ways and i honeslty feel this is one of my favorites, "turbulent green ocean."  talk about getting lost in a sea of green and melting like an ice berg when ever you look into his eyes. 

as always Bev, you're handling of words leaves me wanting more.

Renee 



Author's Response:

Wow Renee

That's a beautiful review, you have put such thought into it and I'm flattered you would take the time to do that for me. Thank you so much.

I laugh that you point out my minor obsession with Dean's eyes as I know I have a fixation with them but I do think they are exceptionally beautiful! And i would be with you as a melted little puddle of an iceberg if I ever was lucky enough to see them in person.

I'm glad you like the Bobby I write, I think he's a lovely character and so want to do him justice.

Thank you Renee, you rock!  bev xx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's

Great update,

Some lovely moments between Dean and Bobby.

Also with Sam and Uriel.

I hope you all had a wonderful time in London.



Author's Response:

Lindsay.

Thank you for the sweet review and I'm glad you enjoyed it.  we did have a wonderful time in London and just to remind you that you'd be very very welcome to join us...you are Brit aren't ya hun?

Next likely 29th Nov. If ya fancy it t all drop me a contact.

Thanks again  Bev xx

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's

Awesome chapter.  It's actually nice to see Dean's vulnerable and scared side.  I loved how he was swaying from exhaustion, etc.  And I also loved how Bobby was there for him in this chapter--a nice switch up from Sam (not that I don't LOVE Sammy taking care of his brother!) 



Author's Response:

Ness.

Wow thanks for your very kind words, it was a chapter I hadn't really planned exactly getting as introspective as it did and was worried it might seem boring.  I love vulneracbe Dean too, he's so guarded normally that I always feel priviledged to see him when his guards are down.  thanks Ness, made my day.  Bev x

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