Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
Well, this was worth the wait..... It might have been long to post But this chapter was really worth it. Well, feel bad to see Dean so exhausted and good to feel dean and uriel getting close. I would never have expected that, ...... Its a real good surprise. Well, looks like dean and Uriel have got a lot explaining to do to sam and bobby. Loved the fight at the local bar. That was AWESOME!!!! A brilliant job!!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Hey Hunny. Phhew! Glad it was worth the wait! And I'm writing the next chapter as we speak so it won't be as long. Thanks for hanging in there! Bev xx
Reviewer: WICKY987 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
HI LOVE THIS STORY WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE SOME MORE I CHEQUE EVERY DAY I FIND MYSELF TRYING TO GUESS THE NEXT STORYLINE PLEASE CONTINUE SOON
Author's Response: Hey Wicky funny enough i'm writing as we speak! I'm on holiday in Menorca and some of my time is spent reading and writing! So soon hun i hope to finish the story real soon! Many thanks for reviewing much appreciated bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Uriel sipped his beer and watched his companion intently over the rim of the bottle. Dean was looking directly at him and the angel was reminded why humans and demons alike were captivated by this hunter’s eyes. Great. if angels are not shielded from the power of his eyes, what more us, mere mortals???????? I'm glad Uri and Dean are getting along. over drinks, it may be, but hey, it loosen their tongues and they had fun! i'm glad they didn't go to the library. i can't imagine them bonding over books. LOL So, if Dean can see them for what they are, what about Uri? or is the flirting just to cover up his masterplan of catching them? :) Can't wait for the next chapter. and congrats for passing the 200 reviews mark!
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
I am so hoping for more of this story! I have read it a couple of times now. I really like it!
Author's Response: Hey Sharon. Have ya really read it more than once? that's so flattering thank you. There will be more real soon but I'm just finishing off a portfolio for a training programme I'm on and it's just distracting me a bit! Sorry will be back with the boys asap and thanks for reviewing. Bev xx
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Wow and wow! Hope to have more to read soon! Love the story!
Author's Response: hey Sharon. I love the word Wow! kinda says I managed to at least partially knock someones socks off! more to come soon but I was just writing someones birthday prezzie so I'm a bit behind! hang in there bev xx
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted?
Great story. I wanted Dean to believe in Angels and in God. This story is capturing that and I am grateful to have found this story. It is great!
Author's Response: Hey Sharon. Wow, there you are again! It's very kind of you to come straight from The Fallen to here and I'm really pleased you like this one too. yes, Dean believes in both God and the angels, he's a bit spooked by it but he believes! bev xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Terrific update Birdie. Who thought that Dean and Uri would become friends over a beer and small talk, how great. So, Sam is afraid of and for Dean. Sam and Bobby've been lucky to not be on the were-leopard menu. Dean discovered a new ability and realized that he and Uri're surrounded by were-creatures, not good news. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Hey my sweety. glad you liked it and yup, for now at least Dean and Uri are best buds but then it took falling out with sammy to do it! More to come soon and thanks as always for reviewing I do love reviews bev xx
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Looks like Dean's always landing into a world of trouble. Feel bad for him Though. Well hoping Sam and Bobby make it fast to them. Great job!!!
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Hey sugar yup he's just always in trouble isn't he? Heehee i so love him for it! Sam and Bobby to the rescue? Who knows? More soon. bev xx
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Bev, chapter ends......what the hell. OMG!!!! i get so excited when i see a new chapter up i can't wait to read it. this chapter was getting better as it went along. like the bonding with Uri and Dean. Sam afraid of Dean, interesting. hope the next chapter won't take too long. Renee
Author's Response: Renee. What can I say I enjoy a bit of a cliffhanger...its gets the adrenaline flowing! Its nice that Uri and Dean are getting along a bit better isn't it, pity Dean and Sam hadda fall out to make it happen. No, not too long to next one...I'm doing a bit better with space between chapters aren't i? thanks as always for reviewing babe bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Dean and Uri are very much alike and they seem to be getting on a bit better for now lol. But oh my they are in a world of trouble. Can't wait to find out what happens.
Author's Response: Lindsay Umm they do have there similarities and yup they are they are so in trouble. more soon thanks for reviewing hunny bev xx
Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Now there's a twist I didnt' see coming. You do realize at the rate you're going this story isn't going to be finish by the year 2030...you'l still be writing it and people like me will still be egging you on BIG TIME!! All I can, sweetie, is, keep it coming...this is getting real exciting
Author's Response: Tracy hey how's life down under today? oww i'm glad I managed to get the drop on ya! And yeah I know this one is really dragging on, god i'm so wordy aren't I? Its got another few chapters yet, likely 4 or 5 but there is a bit of action coming, honest i promise. Thanks for hanging in there bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Oh my stars! How exciting! Sam left Dean behind so he'd be safe and he's in worse trouble than Sam. That's the Winchester luck in full force. I'm curious why Uri asked Dean if he was tired of watching over Sam. Does he know something we don't?
Author's Response: Shannon. Yup that Dean Winchester just cannot keep out of trouble can he? and oh god isn't that wonderful? And Uriel is curious about Dean's willingness to always be the guardian of Sam because he is realising that maybe that's how Michael feels about him. More on that to follow. thanks so much for reviewing it makes my day bev xxx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
I thought it was a wonderful gesture on Uriel's part to give Dean one of his shirts to wear. Dean winchester in an Armani shirt. It doesn't get much better than that---except maybe Dean Winchester in Armani sheets. ;) I love how the dynamics of the group constantly change. People who are at odds with one another find themselves as allies minutes later.
Author's Response: Shannon. Owh you're doing each chapter, that's so nice of you xxxx Yeah thought Dean would look lovely in elegant and tight Armani but I like your suggestion very much too! heehee I'm so glad you noted and like the rollercoaster dynamic between the hunters and angels. I so wanted to use the angels to explore the boys relationship but was worried how people would like that given they are oc's. Thanks for the reassurance. You're a doll! bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 14 Awh crap! I liked that shirt.
A very intense chapter! I'm glad the two groups are reuniting. That will add more emotion to the already emotional situation. The verbal and expressional exchanges between the hunters and the angels are so vivid. Great job!
Author's Response: Shannon hun! so nice to hear from ya, how's tricks with you? I'm glad you liked the chapter and your words are very kind. I'm a bit concious that its been a bit 'tlky' to this point but there is a bit of action coming I promise! Bev xxx
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
Dean and Uriel really should have stuck to research and the Library.... Great chapter, look forward to the next. Jacq
Author's Response: hey jacq yup this is one time that they may have been safer in the library...but then this is Dean so who wants safety. let's get him out there with the monsters! Thanks for reviewing bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
Awww....Sam!!!!! you did not do what i think you just did!!!!! Dean's in such a sensitive place right now that he'll just misconstrue everything and there, he did!!! *sighs* On the other hand, i never would have thought that Uri would be the peacemaker in this story! LOL i thought he was the TROUBLEmaker.... :p And Dean watched as the Impala growled her way down the street, his face an impenetrable mask. I hate it when Dean is like this... :(
Author's Response: Lyn. Yeah, you my 200th reviewer! wooha. Yeah Dean's very fragile and big old Sammy goes in with the boot. What a meany! And its left to poor old Uriel to sort out the squabble, well he is an angel after all. Action to follow soon Hun. Bev xx
Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
great chapter! poor Dean, he's so hurt, but Sam couldn't risk him to be attacked by the criatures, sometimes this guys are so complicated, ha ha. YThanks for the chapter :)
Author's Response: hey Rut Yeah that mean old Sammy has really upset Dean and you know how reckless he gets when he's upset! Bit of action to follow hunny. and as always thanks for reviewing me. You take care bev xx
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
Don't worry about all the talking, I love all the talking when you write it. I have a feeling that Dean and Uri are not going to behave themselves...bad boys. Thanks for the read, I always enjoy this story so much.
Author's Response: Kim. Oooooo the boys, Dean and his angelic friend, are so gonna misbehave! It's gonna be cool! And Sammy is gonna regret being mean to my green eyed wonder. thanks for review Kim, I'm made up with your words! Bev xxx
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
dear god, worman, that's bravery...dealing with a winchester scorned
Author's Response: Oii, Yankee baby! Don't you call me a WORMan! Cheeky young puppy, I'll have you know I bypased worm level and an currently at raccoon level....ask Lou she'll explain! snogs bev xxx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
Oh Bev, but I like the talking. Especially the arguing. Although, with what you promised the were-racoons are going to do to ole gobshite... I'm holding you to that, hun. Another great chapter. Sam had a valid point, so why do I feel the need to slap him silly? Must be hormones (or poor, hurt Dean.) Kirst xxx
Author's Response: Hey ya deranged Essex tart! Look I know ya have it in for Michael but are ya really sure that the delicate girls at UnGen are ready for...Umm no neither am I! As to sam, yeah he's a real bossy, little monkey ain't he? And ya just know it's gonna make Dean recklessly angry don't ya? heehee So better go write some action so my lovely wonderful beta-girl has something other than Winchester Objectification to amuse! Love ya babe bev xx
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
I like the way this story is Going. Another hnt.....WOW!!!! thats so awesome. But I do feel bad for dean though. But I also know that Sam is just protecting Dean...... Well waiting for the action to follow.....bring it on!!!! Good Job.....keep posting :)
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Hey Pranami Well thanks I'm real glad you like the way its going and yup some hunt action to come soon. You're right that Sam is just trying to protect Dean but Dean is upset and he does get reckless when he's angry so anything could happen! many thanks for reviewing I love to know what readers think. bev xxxx
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's
all that chatter and concern for the (sacred) mac and cheese and nobody eats it? that hurts, bev. hell of a chapter, though. some weighty issues and discussions to delve into!
Author's Response: Hey BooBoo Hey Uriel ate his, he's a good boy well I'd go as far as to say he's an angel! Haha, Atticus and Boo Radley have been swooping round the living room again, can you tell them to cool it as it gets Bird over-excited and you know what happens then! thanks my little Yankee Brat! bev xxx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
Brilliant update. Poor Dean he must be feeling very betrayed.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay Thanks hunny, glad it was OK. And yeah...that Sammy is so mean isn't he? Dean IS feeling betrayed and you know how reckless he gets when he's upset...action to follow. Thanks for reviewing i really delight in reviews. bev xxxx
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
Oh- but the talking is so sweet! Sammy sticking those great big giraffe feet in his mouth, poor Dean - you're bringing tears to my eyes with that last image! (But were-rabbits? ever seen Monty Python? *shivers*)
Author's Response: Cal-babe ha see i knew i'd convert you to foot fetishism in time...and you an angel and all! And were-bunnies rule! love ya hun bev xx
Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures
Promise you'll stop the talking? I wish you could write as fast as you talk. I've just reread The Fallen and I'm struck again by how great these two stories are and I'm thinking of sending you a Cloning machine in the hopes that two of you will write faster than one! (g) Please don't keep me in suspense too long...I love all this Dean hurtage and the potential depth of the friendship with Raphael !
Author's Response: Tracy. Wow, what a nice review! I like NewZealand girls, you're so sweet! Thanks for re-reading the Fallen, i read it myself to post it on FF.net and even though i know it has lots of flaws I am kinda proud of it. And i'm hearing your message and am trying to go faster....i had a couple of friends here in the RW who were real poorly and it took me away a bit but they are both a bit better so I'm really trying to speed up! Oh and never fear my poor Dean always gets whumped and Raphe will be there to help! thanks again hunny really appreciate it bev xx
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