Reviewer: Themis (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
I loved "The Fallen" , so the sequel ? Yeeaaahh ;-)
Author's Response: Hey Eveline I'm real glad yoy enjoyed the Fallen and that the sequel's working for ya! I'm fond of my angels and of course Sam and especially Dean are my favs! Oh and you're French huh? Cool...where in France? Was in Normandy in the summer, was really lovely. Many thanks for reviewing bev xx
Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 21/10/08 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
I've been away and when I came back oh joy! You've been writing again and my favourite story too!!! I'm loving Uriel's almost reluctant sympathy with Dean not to mention Sam's jealously - wonder if its because he thinks he's not the centre of Dean attention and provider of Dean's only emotional support. I like Dean having other friends outside of Sam. In TV land Dean always seems to luck out that way...I mean Sam had Dean, his Dad, Jessica, and everyone seemed to revolve around him. Dean only had his Dad who left him and Sam who left him. As ever, darling Birdie, you provide a wonderful light in my life. Something to look forward to. So thanks again, sweetie!
Author's Response: Hey Tracy. What a lovely lovely review. Its my first day back at work today after two wonderful weeks on holiday and as always first days back are the pits and then i find this and you have made my day all sunny and sweet! I agree very much with you about Dean never having any real friends so i wanted to give him some and see what efect that might have on his relationship with Sam. And Sam is jealous which i find quite interesting to write. Hope you like the rest (once I bloomin well written it! ) heehee. Thanks again for review I really appreciate it. bev xxx
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
Bev, yeah another chapter. and i will take the ride with Dean thank you. if it is not too much trouble to arrange. Sam jealous of Raphe; i was wondering if you were going to go there. i love Raphe i am glad you have returned him to the story. where are the others? and what of Micky? surly he is around. can't wait for another chapter. as always another great chapter. Renee
Author's Response: Hey Renee. Sure you can have a ride, hunny. The boys will be round in about an hour ok? I like Raphe too, he's a real spiritual being and he makes me feel good to write him! Oh and the others are on their way hun! hang in there. bev xx
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
I think it is great! Glad to read more of the story. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Hey Sharon. Well thank you I'm so happy its working for you. Many thanks for reviewing it means a lot Bev xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
I enjoyed Dean and Uriel's ride on the Harley, too bad there're no place for a third person, lol. Raphe is back and Dean knew it was him, I love his connection with the angels but I understand Sam's feeling about this. Birdie, captivating story so far, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Hun. Gosh I am blown away when prople use words like captivating cause it suggests that the characters are hitting a believable note. That's really important to me. I like Dean's connection to the angels too, I always think that Dean has a great spirituality, with a raunchy twist that's very appealing! Thanks hun you made my day. bev xx
Reviewer: angelica (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
I do I do!!!! this line: So, he bit his tongue and concentrated on clinging onto his own ‘Hell's Angel' and enjoying the ride. had me laughing so hard.My favorite line in this series.
Author's Response: Hey Angel! Ok hunny they'll be round to pick you up in about 30 mins, get your leathers on! Oh and thanks, I'm real glad you liked that line, I know it was cheeky but I couldn't resist! I have Hell's Angel friends and they liked that line! Bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
*blushing* Sorry. I kind of forgot to leave a proper review. Great chapter! I'm thrilled that Raphe is back. And with bad news I'm sure. But its's good for Uri to have him back and he and Dean have a great newfound sympatico. I love the bit about Sam feeling jealous and out of sorts with Dean's connection to the angels. Poor little brother.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon...sorry I knocked ya off kilter with the motorcycle image didn't I? Biker boots, tight jeans and a tight black T straddling that metal and leather? Sorry see I'm just slightly obsessed aswell! Thanks hun! bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
If anyone wants to...hell yeah! The bitch seat is where I belong! This has got to be my favorite chapter of all!!!! (Maybe because I've been riding cycles since I was 6 months old) OMG! I can just picture Dean driving a Harley. The wind rippling his tee shirt, coming between the cotton and his muscular body. Female hands sliding over the washboard abs to hold tight---mmmmm! Talk about jell-o legs.
Author's Response: Whoohoo Shannon, so pleased you enjoyed it! And that, for a biker girl, it was reasonably accurate. I have some biker friends and they helped a lot! I am so with you on the image on Dean astride the sleek chrome and leather beast, the wind pulling at his sweaty shirt and ...I'd better stop there! And the bitch seat is absolutely yours hunny! Thanks for a real cool review! bev xx
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
Bev, I am so proud of you. You actually called it by the correct name. Jell-o. hehe. luvs. your Yankee Princess
Author's Response: Hey Yankee Princess. As we have established its a corruption but if that's all ya can understand then I can lower myself! Heehee! Snogs Baby go buy us some sticky tape! bev xx
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
Great chapter, loved Dean's attachment to the shirt, considering his usual clothing. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Maureen. Heehee, yeah he loves that shirt and we know he looks so good in it! Thanks for reviewing hun. bev xx
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
How 'bout riding in between? Go on... pretty please? I'll be ever so *ahem* good! Loved it hun - short and sweet, and really moved the story on, setting up a few hints for the future... and loved the reminder that Uriel is an angel - 'warrior of the lord' and all that, and poor Sam - looks like he's feeling a little jealous. Might come back to haunt them! Thanks hun! cal
Author's Response: Cal-baby. A Winchester/Angel sandwich huh? You little minx you! And yeah Sammy's green with envy! Bev xx
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
Wow!!!! That was awesome. Well, Enjouyed the drive of Uriel and dean. Oh, How I wish I vcould see that. It would have been nice!!! Well, a nice chapter woven there....Keep it up. Cant help to wait for the next chapter to be posted. Keep it coming. Love stories with Angels in them.......
Pranami :)
Author's Response: Hey Pranami. Hey hunny thanks as always for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed Uri and Dean's bike ride and yeah I'm kinda fond of angels too. Bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
Another great update, poor Sam feeling a bit of the green eyed monster. It's a hard choice who to ride pillion with but i pick Dean LOL.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay. Yeah Sam's feeling a bit left out. Interesting dynamic I hope? Pilion with Dean? OK he'll be round Thursday night. OK? Get your leathers on. Oooo I wish....heehee. Bev xxx
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
Too short!!! lol Awesome update. Love that Dean can feel Raphe's presence. That was such a great touch. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hey TV Sorry hun, I'll try and do better with the next one! Thanks for reviewing. Bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 18/10/08 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine
Bev, you're an expert on these kinds of things so, tell me, is it wrong to be jealous of a motorbike? Yeah, it's a sickness, I know. So, like buses, wait for ages and then 2 bright and shiny double decker chapters turn up (almost) at once. Loved the action, loved the aftermath. Even almost, sorta love Uri a teeny tiny bit. But you are well aware of where my heart really lies... can't wait for next chappie and the return of BGR! Fab work! Big snogs, Hunny. Kirst xxx
Author's Response: Kirst. No Hunny, nothing wrong at all with being jealous of a motorbike and see! I knew you'd get to like Uriel. He's a bit of a brat but lovable and yeah, just for you BGR is on his way back. See you...yeah actually see! god I'm nervous! see you soon booboo! Bev xxx
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
So glad to see this story back...It was well worth the wait Fantastic Jacq
Author's Response: Hey Jacq. So sorry for wait! but next chapters just to correct (hate doing the punctuation corrections!) and then it'll be up! Many thanks for reviewing. bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
Good for Uriel! What aqn exciting chapter! I think once the boys compare notes on who had the worst evening the vote may go to Dean and Uriel. So, what are Jo and the other archangels up to?
Author's Response: Hey Shannon. Nice to hear from ya hunny. Umm yeah I think Dean and Uri won the 'rubbsh night out award' by a head! Oh and the others? Hang in there they're on the way back as soon as I correct this next bloomin chapter! I hate doing my commas! bev xx
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 14/10/08 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
Too funny. Finally Uriel and Dean bonding. I knew I was gonna like this story. I love the fact that Dean is now "Special" even if a demon had something to do with it!
Author's Response: Hey Kris. Umm, me too I always wanted Dean to be special too! And from the daemon? well we'll see... Next chapter just to correct and then post! Many thanks for reviewing much appreciated. Bev xx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/10/08 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
Brilliant chapter, worth waiting for. That was a great fight scene, lots of action, i love how Uriel is becoming quite protective of Dean.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay. Thank you very much! I always feel i struggle to write fights so that nice to hear. And yeah I too like the growing closeness between Dean and Uriel, adds an interesting angle on the Dean/Sam relationship I think. Next chapter just to correct (i loathe doing my corrections!) and then its up! Bev xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/10/08 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
I liked it indeed, it was worth the wait. What a fight, Dean and Uriel got some more bruises to add to their already injured bodies but they won. Love the new bond between Dean and Uriel, they won't so not let Sam to pick them up,lol. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hey hun Well thank you very much and I'm real pleased you like the Dean and Uriel angle. Sam's nose is gonna be out of joint i suspect but don't worry Dean still remembers who his brother is! Next chapter just to correct and then post! Bev xx
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
Bev, i am glad you are back; missed you. this chapter had my adrenaline going. Dean and Uriel fighting for survival from the were creatures. Great action. i do understand Sam's anger but i think you nailed it perfectly how he was to angry to notice Dean's tone of voice and that he was crealy injured did not come to Sam. i also liked how you had Uriel getting mad at Sam for not noticing. the 2 of them protecting each other was great and the bond you are creating with them just keeps getting better and better. as always you never disapoint. hope the next chapter will be soon. Renee
Author's Response: Renee my sweet! You are just soooo good at massaging my ego hun! heehee I'm glad you like Dean and Uri making friends, I always thought i'd be interesting to introduce a third person into Sam and Dean's relationship and see what it did to the dynamics and who better than a bratty spoiled angel? Next chapter just having its punctuation corrected and then its posting! Thanks Hun Bev xx
Reviewer: angelica (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
FINALLY.WHERE THE HE** HAVE YOU BEEN GIRL!!!!I love this story.Great ending wonder how Sam and Dean are going to take that.
Author's Response: Angelica I'm sorry ok? Life, (i mean non Supernatural life!) got in the way for a while there! Back now tho and another chapter to follow as soon as I've corrected the punctuation mistakes (I hate doing corrections!) Thanks for the encouragement. bev xxx
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
oops -Sammy boy pissed off tha angel... but it looks like Dean found a new friend! aww... great update hun - all the gory, desperate action you write so well and the post-battle weariness too Lovely! Cal
Author's Response: Cal yeah, I likes to kick the crap outta our boys as do you missy! Want an angel for a friend then? Bev xx
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 Moose Drool!
eek! and funny! love michael on horseback... moving swiftly on... (but have soe stars before i go!)
Author's Response: Cal baby Don't you dream af angels on horseback? Heehee bev xx
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 17 Watch Out for the were bear!
Hehe....like Dean and Uriel befriending each other and Uriel giving it to Sam......Good one!!!! I waited a long time for that last chapter and it was well worth the impatience. Well done...... Vicki
Author's Response: Hey Vicki. Apologies for delay and i'm just correcting next chapter ready to post! Thanks as always for taking the time to review and I'm glad you're enjoying Dean and Uri making friends. Bev xx
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