Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 07/01/09 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
So ...this was indeed very nice and funny ! i just couldn't stop reading and you deserve every star I can give you ! GREAT !
Author's Response: Aww thanks hon, I'm glad you found it funny and couldn't stop reading. I love the stars, they're blinding, just the way I like it. lol x
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
gud
Author's Response: Ta.
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
this story's so cute!! keep up the great work!!! for your series you should name It Bruised but not Broken!!
Author's Response: Hey Impaladean1, Thanks so much for this review, I am glad you found it cute! Thanks for the stars too... Cheers for the suggestion on my series title, I have another idea for a title that's not on my bio and I am stuck between that and "bruised but not broken" Thanks again, Schelz
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
...and i forgot to say... I LOVE how you write Missouri. You have her personality and quirks down pat and your dialogue is spectacular. You capture her relationship with our boys so well. Great job! She is such a wonderful character. The beauty of fanfic is that we can get to know these varied and once-or-twice-only-seen characters even more through the talents of writers like you who feel and write them so perfectly. And it this second review a double-dip??
Author's Response: *claps with excitement* that is a huge compliment for me, I’m glad you love how I write Missouri, it’s a great feeling to be told that you have done something well, but this is even better, to say I have her personality and quirks down pat, gives me confidence to write her again. Cheers for saying my dialogue is spectacular!!! I agree that Missouri was a wonderful character, I would hope we see her again before Supernatural ends, but if they don’t at least there are plenty of great writers who can bring her back! Thanks so much for the double dip;)
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Oh Schelz, i really loved this. Besides the fact that it's original and very well written, you have tapped into Dean so beautifully. I loved this snark and his advice (the whole 'women' conversation was a blast!) and the "can't hold your tequilla" just so funny! But you actually melted my heart with Dean's reflections on his mother and Sam's thoughts about Dean needing to see himself as more than a hunter. And the scene of sleeping Dean with a sleeping baby on his chest - breathtaking! You highlighted the hearts of our boys with style and love and it was simply stunning. This is a wonderful piece of work and your featured status is much deserved.
Author's Response: Aww Pet I am so chuffed you loved it. Thank you so much for finding this original and very well written, it means the world to me coming from you. WOW! The fact that you think I’ve tapped into Dean beautifully has got me smiling, so glad you liked the snark and the advice he gave to little Josh! Thrilled you liked the ‘women Conversation’ and the tequila joke. I did want the humor, sweetness and Dean as we know him to mesh and be realistic. Aww I melted your heart! I’m really happy that Dean’s reflection on his mom, and Sam’s thoughts were able to do that, and especially glad that Dean asleep with Josh on his chest was breathtaking! It’s my favorite part;) Hun, you have lit up my face with this stunning review!!!
Author's Response: Dunno how that happened, but I hope you have reading glasses LOL
Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
amazing job and great idea! i think dean would make a great dad...
Author's Response: Thanks you very much gater91 ;) I agree, Dean would make a wonderful, not to mention very sexy dad.
Reviewer: orlilover621 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
AWWW... That's sooo adorable. Exactly how I picture Dean with a toddler. Right on! Perfect in every way. Dean would totally have tried to teach the toddler about women. hahaha. Two Thumbs Up.
Author's Response: Aww hun, thanks for the stars. Glad you found it adorable, thanks so much for calling this perfect in every way! Hahahaha I reckon he would too try to aswell... Schelz x x
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
It really is funny how Missouri always know's what they are thinking they can't really get away with anything. I wish that there was a picture of dean in that towel. oh well I guess my imagination will have to do.yuck missouri how is she lettin the boys see her in such a mess.and Dean is a big kid sum tym so Josh is Dean match, cant wait to finnish the rest.even tho josh is being a little naughty dean is handling it better than he thinks.I knew it that was just such a sweet story he did so well and little josh loved him really. I love the bit were dean say come on have a heart. and you can just see the connection wen sam sed he could imagine dean givin him advise about women and that was exactlu what he did. dean had that advise spot on too. really good job with that one. it would be really cool to see josh again too he was still a cutie.jj_heavenps. I can see why you got a badge for that story I would have given you one too.
Author's Response: LOL can't get nothing past good ol' Missouri, imagination is the best tool we all have, defo use it!!! Hehehe...Its amazing the mess kids will get you into without you realizing you didn't clean it up you just told yourself you would. LOL Thank you for finding the story sweet, not even Dean could resist Josh, kiddies have charm too you know? ;p I'm glad you said that it would be cool to see Josh again. Aww thanks for thinking I deserved the badge!!! Schelz
Reviewer: Huey Riley (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
So Schelz, I was bound to review something of yours and Merries but this was one of the highly recommended stories. Wow!!! Incredibly ORGINAL!!! very well written, look forward to reading more. I was Josh when I was young. Lol. Corey xxx
Author's Response: Hey corey, Enjoying the site so far? Highly recommended?!? I'm honored ;) Wow!! Thank you very much for finding this original and well written. Thanks for the stars too. You were Josh?? You little terror!!! LOL Schelz xxx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Aw Schelz so sorry I haven't been around much, schools just started and I've kinda lost track of time..anyway excuses excuses! This was just so amazing..the concept, the writting..EVERYTHING! It was a geniune pleasure to read! -Bex
Author's Response: Bex!!! Missed you heaps, so understandable, I know school can get hectic. So glad you liked it, finding the concept and writing amazing is a great compliment to me. *Grins while reading genuine pleasure to read* aww thanks hun. Love the stars xxx Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Fantastique!!! The whole thing is just amazing and written soo sweetly;) Josh is a monster but you can't help but love him and neither could Dean..hehehe Love Missouri! I hope I see some more of her in your stories one day. Suga xxx
Author's Response: Merci beaucoup Suga!!! So glad you enjoyed this and found it sweet. Gotta love Josh eh? Ha...Missouri will be in my future stories (the series I'm working on) And ta for the stars xxx Schelz | |
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Very cool, Schelz! I like the respect Dean gives mothers for the work they do and also the love he develops for Josh as he cares for him.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, really glad you liked it. Thought I would do a quick shout out for mothers, not one myself but have six youngers sisters who are still a handful even though they're grown. LOL not to mention 20month old nephews who are like Josh. Glad you saw the love Dean developed for Josh. Thanks for the review!!! | |
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
It's featured!!!!!!! Congrats!!!
Author's Response: I am so shocked I keep refreshing the page to see if its gone yet. LOL Thanks mer!! | |
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
I know i've already reviewed but had to come back to say congratulations on your FEATURE STORY!!! Well done mate...you rock!!!
Author's Response: OMG OMG!!! I am so stoked, thanks for the second review hun, it means as much as the first. You rock!!! | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
It was brilliant good work. Deean really did meet his match. I don't know what I would do if that happened to me.
Author's Response: Thanks hunny. What are you talking about if that happened to you? Have you forgotten our nephews already? LOL we meet our match with them every time. | |
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Got this lovely story in the post and had to come check it out. Josh is definitely nothing compared to Lucifer...but he is soooo adorable. " I love when Josh said "Peeze" he made me melt and Dean.
Loved his little 411 on women, he's right about us..got us sussed. Lol Great portrayl of Missouri, you have got her spot on!!! And this wouldnt be half as AWESOME if your dialogue wasn't so strong. Josh falling asleep with dean on his chest with his little hand wrapped around the chain ...wish i was there to take a picture of that perfect moment. DRU-BABY!!!
Author's Response: Awww Dru!!! Where've you been girl?? Glad to get such pretty stars from you, I agree, Josh is so adorbale. Thanks to Lou, ya'll can get a visual of him. I like how you put that...411 Lol Thank you SO much for liking my portrait of Missouri!!! And just ecstatic that you think I have strong dialogue... You readers are really making my day. Thanks. Schelz | |
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
i enjoyed this,made a nice change,well done.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch Darkhunter, glad you were able to enjoy this. I feel sometimes the boys just need a break from getting thrown around and tortured. Lol | |
Reviewer: dookie (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Schelz, i dont even know what to say, it was really really really really really (just repeat that until about 10x, lol) CUTE ! the fic is adorable ! it makes me wanna hug dean afterwards :D
Author's Response: Hey Dita, I find you being speechless a compliment;) Thanks for reading, I am glad you found it cute. I wanna hug Dean too. | |
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
dean would make a wonderful father, just look how he has cared for ,his brother sammy, what and idea.....................
Author's Response: | Thanks heaps for reading this, I agree, Dean would make a wonderful but Unique father. lol | |
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Aw, Schelz this's lovely! It's so cute and funny. The image of Dean and little Josh sleeping was really sweet. I loved it how Sam knew exactly what Dean had done; "he could bet on his life that Dean tried to tell jokes, maybe even advise the little boy about women". Those brothers just know each other so well! This bit made my heart break: "Probably miss your mom huh? I do too, my mom I mean. Wish she was around long enough to teach me how to do all of this stuff." Those are great lines, dear. They reminded me of one scene in 'Dead in the Water' and I can imagine Jensen speaking your lines with the same tone in his voice than in that scene.
Author's Response: Awww Sanna, Glad you found it cute and funny. I still have that image carved in my head of Josh on Dean's chest. Sooo adorable!!!!!! The brothers know each other soo well I just had to put that part in. Lol Makes me smile to know what parts really made you feel something, that is a personal fav of mine. Dean talking about his mom with Josh. :) Thanks soo much for letting me know that you can imagine Jensen saying those line, means so much! | |
Reviewer: Pandemonium (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
This has got to be the SWEETEST thing I have ever read honey. Josh Vs Dean....so good!!! Josh reminds me of my girls when they were toddlers. lol I love how the humour is meshed so well with the serious moments, sweet moments. You spread it all out evenly. I have to say Schelz, I am growing to admire you, your choice of topics to write about and the way you write it...speaking to you via e-mail, I find you truly unique and genuinely a star person. I can tell by the way everyone talks about you that its a natural quality you possess. So sorry...back to the story. I just loved Dean advising Josh about women like Sam knew he would and then talking about his own mother. Very heart warming scene, something I would gladly watch on SN. Josh is adorable, Dean would make a great daddy and you totally nailed Missouri, shes made of such fire but loves the boys and you really showed us the Missouri we know and love. God bless Kaide xxx
Author's Response: WOW!!!! Thank you SO much Kaide;) Josh is like your girls??? They must be a handful then. Lol Happy that you think I spread the humour and serious moments out evenly. growing to admire me??... I am about to have a hear attack!!! I am speechless...what can I possibly say in response to that except it means the world to me that you feel that way. I have to say I like that you find me unique!! Everyone talks about me??? *smiles nervously* glad you liked it and found it to be heart warming. Dean would make a sexy daddy. Lol I am thrilled you think I nailed Missouri!!! You give the best reviews. Schelz | |
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
The image i have of Dean and Josh sleeping...awwww....it'll be sooo sweet!!! Hope you are feeling better after writing this schelz... :)
Author's Response: So adorable isn't it? Thanks loads Lyn, I'm glad you liked it and Yes!!! I am feeling heaps better thank you. Thanks for the stars!!! | |
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Very sweet! And nice to see Dean at least consider that a future may happen for him. I liked this one a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Angela, I just liked that whole idea of (Ben) I wanted to hold on to the idea that a future was still possible for him. Glad you liked it hun. Schelz | |
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Schelz, What a sweet little story. I can see Dean dealing with the little demon. Talking to him like a little man, giving advice, too much fun. Crys
Author's Response: Crys Glad you found this sweet, this was so much fun to write and I think I forgot how to do that (have fun)but now I am feeling positive again. Dean dealing with the toddler (demon) I could just see the advice thing so clearly in my head that I had to do this. Thanks for review. Schelz | |
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean
Bebg As I told ya Hun this is just spot on. Made me laugh then when ya hit me with that image of Dean asleep with Josh on his chest! irresistable! and the line about wanting kids of his own! tears hun! your Aba xxxx
Author's Response: Aba So glad you enjoyed it, feels great to know that it made you laugh, and glad you liked Josh on Dean's chest...totally irrestible!! Aww *wipes tears* thank you!!! pulls on my heart strings coming from you. Your Bebg | |
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