Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
29/02/08 04:10 AM · On:
Saw your shout and thought I'd come take a look, and very pleased I did. This is a great premiss for a story...and you have a very nice style.
I am quite frankly amazed that you are writing this standard of story and are still at school! Can definately see you published by 18 at this rate! X Louy
Author's Response: I'm so glad you took time to read my story! Thanks tons, and thanks for all the really nice stuff said, always makes you feel good to hear those things! Thanks again, I'll be checking out some of your stories soon too!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed)
28/02/08 10:47 PM · On:
Saw your little note that you'd like more input/support so I decided why not? (Besides I'm feeling the same way about Leap of Faith right now, the more out on a limb something is the more the feedback monster rears its head, huh?) I like this. The idea is good and you have a good dialogue flow, maybe a little fast in spots but overall a real enjoyable little tale. Think I'll check out another one of yours before bed. Nice job, the cursing lecture in heaven is too funny!! - Angela
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your time! I'll go check out Leap of Faith once I'm done reading the story I am on currently. I can't wait! And again thanks for the time and commet/review!
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed)
14/02/08 06:04 AM · On:
Nice job, I liked Dean swearing in Heaven, lol. This last line was my favourite: "Driving into the distance the brothers took a moment to remember this time forever, the time spent in an old Impala, and so far the journeys they had spent together, and would spend until Hell came crashing down on them. "
And you used Nightwish lyrics, that was pretty awesome. I'm not a big fan but of course I know the band 'cause it's Finnish. ;) Music can be really inspiring. I hope you manage to publish something, like you said you'd like to. So good luck!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I always love hearing peoples favorite lines, so again thanks! I'm also glad you know Nightwish, I was worried no one would know them, so I'm glad at least someone did! Oh and thanks for the good luck too!
Reviewer: RedDevilGirl (Signed)
12/02/08 04:28 PM · On:
Like it..... I was worried there for a minute though! And Dean being scolded for swearing.... only Dean Winchester would curse in heaven!!! xxx
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Hope it didn't worry you to much though. And I agree, Dean is the only one who would swear in heaven...lol.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed)
02/02/08 06:35 PM · On:
Very nicely done. I really liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's always nice to hear someone say that. And glad you liked it!
Reviewer: f250 (Signed)
02/02/08 04:53 PM · On:
I enjoyed reading it very much, just loved the way , you put Deans feeling for his brother, how he would give up, and do anything for him.....................
Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Check out my other stories sometime!