Reviewer: Rodymenia (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is such a great story.  It must be really hard to write what happens next.  You are on my favorites, so when you do update this, you'll make may day!

Reviewer: anniesmom (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 3

Just curious about when there will be an update to this story.  I'm looking forward to seeing what happened and what's going to happen.

Reviewer: ktboundary (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

Please - Please finish this story - it took off to such a great start i really would like to know its end! thanks

Reviewer: emmanu (Signed) · Date: 12/06/08 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

Please update

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm relieved, DEan woke up, he talked and even managed to go the bathroom by himself. Can't wait for Sam to continue his story, so captivating.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

Beautiful chapter and the last line was a killer...'And before Dean could say thank you, the arms of morpheus had stolen him away into the darkness.'

This whole plot has me transfixed and I'm enjoying it more and more, keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

I read this yesterday but hadn't had time to review.

 Yay! Dean said said something!  This is good.  But it makes me wonder how much time they have until trouble starts again and when Dean really remembers what happens, how is he going to react?  And if the baddies didn't get their ransom, how did Dean escape?

 

Write more soon!  The questions are burning!  Put them out!  :D 

Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 3

Poor hurt Dean. More please!

Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

Awww Dean! :( well written

Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 3

great job! =)

poor dean! =(

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

My God, what did they do to our boy to destroy him so utterly?? The picture you painted of one scared, traumatised brother and one caring, alarmed brother was amazing. I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation to see where you're going with this.You caught my heart with a number of your beautifully written phrases. Your whole paragraph where Sam observes that Dean looks defeated and likens it to his reaction in the days after John’s death was stunning. I loved Dean’s hand snaking out to hold Sam’s wrist for security, and Sam knowing to leave the chick flick moment alone because Dean needed his contact *little sob*. And Sam realising that Dean hadn’t spoken a single word just broke my heart into a million bits.Ch 2 is as awesome as your first. A well written blend of mystery and drama with angst and the brother bond. *applause*

Author's Response:

Thank you!  *blushes*   I always love it when someone takes the time to let me know which parts they liked.  :)

I'm really glad you like the story so far, more will be coming soon.

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

-An intriguing beginning - and the writing's solid too-- I definitely look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is horrible!  :D  You need to write more!  I can't stay in suspense too long or I'll go insane!  Well done and keep writing. I guess I just have to reread the first two over and over until the next post.  So hurry!  :D

Author's Response: For a second I was worried I'd done something terrible!  ;)  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  I'm hoping to update soon.