Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
God I love this story. I's so glad that Ben is adapting to his gift and that 'family' life for the Winchesters is getting back to being almost as normal as it can be. The plan to find this demon and the three way fight between the boys was fantastic too, and for a second there I smiled and thought...oh, Sammy's defending John...now that is interesting - and expertly written. And that poor little girl, awesome descriptions there...! Great work as ever!
Author's Response: I think the guys' relationship is such a complicated one that it's completely fascinating. I also think that Sam is getting a real view of how things may have been for John. I really liked the little girl. She walked into my head fully formed and ready to go, it was so easy to write until I realized she was going to die, then it became difficult. Thanks for reading my stories, I really appreciate your time and all the reviews!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ben is so stubborn just like Dean; I love it. Sam taking Ben's side; too funny. little nervous about Ben facing the Demon; curious as to how you are going to write the outcome. hope chapter 14 will be along soon; keep up the great work. Renee
Author's Response: I'm working on 14 now and it should only take a day or two to finish up. Then dear Katric tears it apart so that I can put it back together again - what a fun process. I thought Dean and Ben facing off was fun. I get intense pleasure when I fight with my kids (I know very wrong of me) but I love watching them growing and stretching their 'wings'. Thanks for reading and for the review! I appreciate it.
Reviewer: jdsreignsupreme (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 12
This story has really got me going....I have loved both Ben stories...You are a brilliant writer, sweet...You have had me on the edge of my chair, holding my breath so many times....And it's excellent that you haven't rushed the story in the sense that you have written little short chapters to try and make everyone happy to get the chapters faster. What I am very curious about is...has the story finished? It has been a while since you have added anything and the story could, technically, finish where it is...but it says on the lists that it's not finished yet.....I am interested to know..... Vicki
Author's Response: So glad that you are enjoying this story and liked 'To The Rescue' also. I prefer longer chapters that develop into something. Chapter 13 is up now and I'm working hot and heavy on 14. Hopefully just a few days. Thanks for reading and the review. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 16/03/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 12
"exitus acta probat" (the outcome justifies the deed) From the start of this chapter, actions are driven by truths recognized and acknowledged for the first time. "Premit altumcorde dolorem" (He controls the deep grief in his heart) Emotions, raw and overwhelming, cannot be used to direct the actions necessary for the fulfillment of their mission---the salvation of a child. And once the child, who imbues their souls with strength is found and saved, their lives have not a moment for reflection nor peace, as fear and death calls them to arms once more. "Crudelis ubique ivctus, ubique pavor et plurima mortis imago" (Everywhere cruel sorrow, everywhere terror and very many images of death) For many readers, this chapter brought salvation and light to our hero's lives. Their paths are not their own, however, and they are called upon to continue the fight against a great evil...but this fight will be waged as a team: strength shared and wisdom embodied in a complete and whole family of hunters... Winchester Style What a ride...this story is kick-a_s great...
Author's Response: What does a person say in response to that? There is nothing that I can say. Thank you. You keep me writing and smiling and those are two great things in my life.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter. you made me cry when Sam and Dean pulled Ben out of the air duct and he wrapped his wings around Dean...........father and son together again. this story just keeps getting better. keep up the great work renee
Author's Response: I do love seperating them so that I can get them back together again. I wonder how many times Ben can be taken from them before they put a literal leash on him. Thank you so much! I am so grateful that you read and leave a review! Makes my day!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 12
A beautiful and amazing chapter! I can't find the words to express all the emotions I've felt while reading it. I laughed and cried (and at the same time).
Author's Response: I was told that this chapter would do that. I had asked if it was too, too much but was assured that it wasn't it and that - and I quote, "readers will laugh and cry at the same time" so to have you confirm that for me is wonderful. I really appreciate the time and effort it takes to read and review so thank you so much!
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 12
Ahh, I loved this one so much, I had to go through it again. I love your fantastic imagery: The heavy tears made the dark brown of his eyes look like deep pools of chocolate. And I really love how you allow Sam to grow up and take some of the load off of Dean. He's more like an equal now, than a helpless little brother. --c
Author's Response: Wow, that's a compliment. I usually read them more than once but that's because I have to. My son has those eyes when he cry (lord, he'd be killing me right now if he knew I was saying this) and they get me every time. Sam has to grow up eventually - I wish the show would allow him to also. I don't necessarily believe in the nuclear family (meaning one mom, one dad and kid) but I do believe that kids need more than one person nurturing them - does matter who the others are as long as they are healthy for the kid. I think a Dean/Sam combo would be a very healthy environment - you know, after you remove the spirits, vampires, werewolves, and demons. Thanks for reading and for the review. I really enjoy reading them and they make me feel happy!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 12
I had a feeling they were blood wings. Dean's tears when he was looking out the window were almost too much to take. but in a good way:)
Author's Response: I am enjoying tearing these guys down just a little too much, I think. I do put them back together again so it's all good in the end.... usually. I liked that part a lot myself. I think just about the only thing that would break through to the affectionate, loving guy we all know is in Dean would be a child - especially his own. Thanks again!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ok, so how you are able to write all the mythology and not have it come off hokey is beyond me--but I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you. I dispense with disbelief and pretend it's all real. Then it just comes out pretending to be real. That explains it, right? Thank you so much. I am so happy that this is working for you! Thanks for reading and for leaving a review.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 9
Ugh..I was not expecting anything so brutal. This is the first story where I did not lke Bobby. And I hate Ellen. .......sorry I'm having trouble forming words right now. I have to read on.
Author's Response: Be patient I think most everyone else has forgiven my none too gentle treatment of Bobby. It did serve a purpose in the grand scheme of things. Ellen...hmm, still thinking about that one. Sorry if it was too much but I'm glad that you are still reading. Thanks!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 12
One of the things I love about your writing is that no matter who the characters are they are all real, be it human, monster, angel or anyone else... Beautifully written, especially the reunion and I loved the wings turning white once they were washed...just a lovely image. Awesome chapter as ever, I do love your atention to detail and the wisdom you give all the principle players. Great Job! Roll on next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I try very hard to make them all seem real so to have my work confirmed for me is wonderful. This chapter was so fun to write because it's been in my head for a very long time. Once it came time to write it, it only took about a day to do then Katric and I tore it apart trying to fix it. All in all it was satisfying to finally get that part out of my head and on paper. Thanks so much for your kind words, always reading and for the reviews you leave!
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
I'm so caught up in this one, hanging on every word. Of course, I say the same thing with every story of yours that I read! I love the way you write Sam and Dean. And most everything else, too! Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am really glad that you are enjoying it. That chapter was a pleasure to write and came about very easily. I wish I could say the same for them all. I'm especially happy that you like my Sam and Dean. I work very hard on keeping those two as true as possible within the confines of my story. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Tangled up in blue (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 5
Quick question - There is a reference to Dean being committed to an asylum. Is this in another story of yours or someone else's? I'd love to read it also. Keep going - I am eating this up!
Author's Response: I sent you a personal message. I am so glad that you are enjoying this story. I just submitted the next chapter, just waiting until it's approved for posting. Thanks for reading and for the review! I so appreciate the time and effort it takes!
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
With a loss so great, a family's strength is tested in ways beyond any measure. The challenges faced conspire to weaken inner resolve, but faith in the pure and true nature of the one held so dear, provides proof belief is enough. This chapter is a testing ground, challenging each individual on so many levels. The transitions speak volumes.
Author's Response: You make me think enough about my own writing that I have to go back and read what I wrote. Keeps me honest. Having your faith challenged is the core of any journey and necessary for success. If our hero is going to make the right choices he must go through the process of questioning his own resolve and his own belief system or learn from the actions of those around him. Thanks Katric...as always.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 6
OMG~ When Dean yelled "Sam" I forgot to breathe. wow!
Author's Response: Keep breathing, it's kind of important. I'm so glad that you are liking this....makes my day (I've needed that!) Thanks for reading and for the reviews.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 5
know what I like best? Dean is the one that refused to believe in angels because he'd never seen one....how funny is that? He is one!
Author's Response: Yeah, I liked the irony myself. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
So, I'm thinking....'touched by an angel'?
Author's Response: I'm thinking huh? Not sure what that means. I never watched the show so good thing or bad thing? Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh God I hope so too. I'm sitting here with fingers, arms, toes and eyes crossed, after all this angst the boys definately deserve a happy reunion with Ben...and isn't that just like angels, can't get involved...my a**...should have let Bobby deck him, that's what I say. Another fantastic chapter, great work!
Author's Response: Don't cross too much, it might all get stuck. Gotta love angels and all their rules. Gotta love Bobby and his lack of regard for the rules. Can't punch angels...that's bad right? Thanks again - for everything.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
this story is heart wrenching can't wait for the other chapters. hoping that Ben is in Indianapolis. Bobby almost getting into a fight with Gabriel; made me smile at the thought. the line you wrote about Sam loving Ben like Ben was his own. totally know the feeling i would die for my nephews. hope you post chapter 12 soon Renee
Author's Response: I feel the same about my nieces and nephews and I imagine it would be even more intense in the Winchester's situation. Next chatper should be here soon. Thanks for reading for the review. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: EarmuffedAmazon (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yea! An update! And I'm looking forward to some family reunion time. With a side of angst, easy on the emo. But seriously, I very much enjoy this story and I'm looking forward to the next installment! Good work!
Author's Response: Sorry about the long wait on this one, it really didn't want to be written. Good news, the next chatper did want to be written and is done. Just working on polishing up and my beta's got hold of it now. She's a cruel task master that makes everything I do so much better. Big side of angst....lite on the emo, how about fatherly/son love and uncle/son love - can I go heavy on those? Thanks for reading and the reviews. Makes my day!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, I love this story. I just watched "the Kids Alright" again today. Realy wish they would bring Ben's story line back eventually. If I weren't so freakin tired I would read this story straight through...damn work, my eyes hurt.
Author's Response: You and I can wish until the cows come home, I don't think they'll go there. I loved TKAA and would love to see them go there with Dean but....well, already talked about. Thanks for reading and for the review. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 11
So ... does this mean that there is another angelXhuman child as well as Ben, but this one has become a nephilim? I wonder who this child's parents are! Of course, I'm assuming the child in Indianopolis is Ben! Just love how you portray the sheer desperation of parents and family who have lost or are in danger of losing a child. It was heartrending. Let's hope there is some good news in the next chappie
Author's Response: I'm not giving away the punch line. Hope that I don't disappoint. I managed to get the next chapter written in it's entirety yesterday now it's waiting for a polish and a beta. Shouldn't be long now but I found it be a very satisfying chapter. Thanks for the review and for reading my stories!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 11
I hope so too! I was so upset that it might be Ben causing all this destruction at the schools. I was hoping you wouldn't be that cruel to Dean (and your readers!). I don't mind worrying about the bad stuff if it ends up not being what I thought. Thanks for the worry and for the hope!
Author's Response: I can be amazingly cruel. Hope is important though and I realized that everyone needed it...me, readers, and characters. This chapter was particularly difficult for me. Thanks for reading and leaving the reviews!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 10
i love how you made them let Ben stay if Ben chose to be a Seraphim. i love the relationship between the 3 of them. Ben is so much like Dean. Mary and the family curse would be a great way to explain why Dean and Sam have the life they have i like this aspect as well. i found myself laughing and crying with in these chapters especially at the end of chapter 10. please post the remaining chapters are i am sure others as well as myself need to know which way Ben chose. Renee
Author's Response: I'm working it through as fast as I can. I am so glad that these characters are working for you. I adore Ben and I'm having such a fun time writing him. It's good to know that the gammit of emotions are working in this, it's hard to do. Thanks for reading and for leaving a review. I truly appreciate it.
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
Vivid descriptions catapulting the intense and violent action forward, culminating in a heartbreakingly poignant revelation. Pain To The Max Dean and Sam now have to repair the inordinate amount of damage caused by all these good intentions. These are catastrophic events in the Winchesters' lives...plain and simple, you always make it worse before it gets better, and it's killing me...
Author's Response: Good intensions all around. It is a pain when everyone means well but knows nothing. Sorry to be killing you, really not my intention. Thanks for evrything, as always!
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