Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/02/09 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks you for adding the poem at the end.  It was beautiful and added a sublime hope to the story.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Of course my take on Dean's deal is a little irrelevant now...

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow...heavy....great though..

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this Kelly. It was originally paced and well written but it also had that little promise of something.

Loved the theological discussion, you got inside Dean's head a treat, very believable dialogue.

I'm going to keep my eyes open to see what you come up with next...nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the vote of confidence!