Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 07:04 AM · On: Low Down
This is one little masterpiece, absolutely wonderful, so well written, overwhelming, touching, can't find the right words to tell you how much I loved this. It truly shines! Don't ever stop writing!
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 06:16 PM · On: Low Down
That was absolutely beautiful. I especially liked the “Oh.” It is just so Dean.
Reviewer: Abni (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 07:33 AM · On: Low Down
Uh. Trying to figure out something coherent to say after this. (Once I'm done sniffing and wiping away tears, that is). This was a brilliant, insightful, heartbreaking piece. Very well written, the boys were in character and your dialogue was spot on - I could hear their voices in my head while reading. I love how Sam finally manages to get through to Dean how much he means to him - that he can't go on without him (LOVE how you use the short exchange of lines from the Pilot). Sometimes Dean needs to be smacked a little (metaphorically speaking) to really listen to what Sam says to him, and that long speech of Sam's does the job perfectly. And oh, the hug. *sniff* Perfect ending. Great job. Looking forward to reading more from you (altough I better go buy more tissues if it's all this powerful). Love, abni
Author's Response: I am horribly sorry if I haven't said this before: Thank you so much for saying these amazing things. Just.....thank you. I treasure every word. I really do.
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 05:05 AM · On: Low Down
Wow, I don't even know where to begin, I just ... wow! You just summarized it all in this story -their lives, their very motivation for being who they are, what they are to each other. And you did it with so few words, that I'm totally amazed!
Like with this: But when it comes to a choice, between him and Sam......well....there never really was a choice, was there? So true, and it kind of summaries Dean in one sentence.
Or: "....You are the one thing in my life that I did right. The one single thing I didn't screw up. The one thing keeping me here. As sane and grounded as I can be. I think he really believes that, and I do believe Sammy is what keeps him grounded, in the only way a winchester can be:p Loved your Sam POV when he realize what Dean's saying, and you hit it spot on, cause Sam's reaction to Dean's few open-up scenes; they always leaves him a little astounded. Hehe, and I can really picture Sammy giving the 'little' speech you let him have:p But what got to me was this one single sentence: Why can't you see that I'm not Sammy, when you're not there to be my big brother?" And of course the pilot flashback: " Yeah, well. I don't want to." Because we can all do it, we live our lives and deal with whatever it throws at us, and we do what we do to survive, cause we don't have choice--- but then there's the want to thing, it really makes the whole difference. And by making Sam say that, you also manage to combine two whole seasons! And my favorite, -the end. The way you put it, the preparation for the hug (Sammy's: "Don't be scared, Dean. It's just a hug. It'll be over in no time." lol, that is so cute:). And the rest from there on, -wow! You so totally un-chicked the chick flick moment (I mean that in a good way:). GREAT! To summarize this little review; your story is AWESOME! Thanks for sharing:)
Author's Response: If I haven't said it before: Thank you from every piece of my heart for what you said. I have no words..except...thank you!!
Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 06:07 PM · On: Low Down
Where are the tissues? That was amazing!
Author's Response: Oh. Sigh.....Thank you so much!!!!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 12:00 AM · On: Low Down
ugh! that was so freakin' awesome! and that last part? dude, i almost cried. you know, seriously i want to see kripke use this one on the show. seriously.
Author's Response: If I haven't gotten back to you then I'll go and crawl under a rock. You have put an enormous smile on my face. You give me too much credit. Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Holly_Winchster (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 11:11 PM · On: Low Down
That's cute. A bit of Sam taking over the situatin there. "Don't be scared, Dean. It's just a hug. It'll be over in no time." I like that. It's cute. HWxx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 05:06 PM · On: Low Down
Incredible! I love it! It's so tender, yet not mushy.
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 11:17 PM · On: Low Down
Yeah.....we ALL needed that hug! Good job:)
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 10:33 AM · On: Low Down
Great story. Just the right amount of emo. And a much needed fix as part of the deal's fallout.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 10:02 AM · On: Low Down
Beautiful....not sure if this conversation will ever be played out on air, but it should!
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 08:37 AM · On: Low Down
Yeah I thought this was very believeable. I could really see this happening on the t.v show. Well written I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great writing. Thanks.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 08:33 AM · On: Low Down
very good. The final embrace is reminicent of the the end of AHBL I.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 06:18 AM · On: Low Down
oh ,that was wonderful.really sweet ,loved it.
Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 11:20 PM · On: Low Down
Beautiful. If only they could have a heart to heart like this in the show.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 11:07 PM · On: Low Down
Very well done - that brought a tear to my eye. And I really loved the hug at the end - so fitting, and so well crafted. The thoughts, feelings and emotions were just so spot on. Thank you for that. Jules
Author's Response: I am so late in responding it's not even remotely funny but I really wanted to say: Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 09:43 PM · On: Low Down
Very nice....I liked!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 09:19 PM · On: Low Down
Great Job! very emotionally charged...*sigh* Dean's gotta find a way out of the deal!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! And yes, he does. I agree in the worst, worst way.
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 08:56 PM · On: Low Down
ok... I'm totally crying right now. I think I'll dehydrate or something, seriously. That was just... wow. Amazing, PAINFUL, beautiful, heart-wrenching, awsome... Dean hugging Sam back, just priceless. I don't know what else to say but bravo!
Author's Response: God, that is such a nice review. Nice isn't even the right word. I'm so glad I made you cry! (okay, that sounds just wrong even in my angsty head). I sure hope you'll forgive my lack of response till now because it means a lot you left me a word.
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 07:53 PM · On: Low Down
awww loved it! i absolutely loved Dean's reaction..."Oh" HAHAHAH priceless
Reviewer: sprntrl_grl (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 06:35 PM · On: Low Down
It was quite powerful, and I only wish something like this would happen on the show. Thanks for the read. =]
Reviewer: sprntrl_grl (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 06:35 PM · On: Low Down
It was quite powerful, and I only wish something like this would happen on the show. Thanks for the read. =]
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 03:40 PM · On: Low Down
Wow! Loved it! It starts off quite light with Sam annoyed at Dean's 'okay-ness' and then BAM you hit us with the kind of conversation we all want in the show but will likely never get. This was great, thank you for sharing. Kirsty x
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 02:02 PM · On: Low Down
What a beautiful one shot and so deserving of the Featured list. If this is an indication of the caliber of your stories then I look forward to reading more- - Thanks for the great read - K
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your reviews and I hope you'll forgive my extreme tardiness. I really, truly appreciate you taking the time to leave me a word and I hope I won't dissapoint.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 12:58 PM · On: Low Down
wow. Usually I like to quote my favorite lines, but here, i'd have to quote the whole thing. I loved it, it was perfect, thanks.
Author's Response: Wow. Uhhmm....wow. Thank you. A lot.
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