Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 7

TozaBoma,

excellent story.

I live 20 minutes from Grand Rapids and my cousin lives off of Division Ave so this story made me picture this area in GR.

28th street also has the Police Station on it and is a very busy street in GR so i was imagining where everything was as i was reading this story; know exactly where the Travelodge is.......too funny for me.

nearest forest is over an hour away so i was picturing that in my head as well.

i was laughing so hard at the bathroom seen. i didn't know what comment made me laugh the most.

"You're my brother and we grew up together, but i ain't never touching another man's-", "Oh man!", "oh this is just wrong!" and the best "oh Jesus, that is something i never wanted to see in this lifetime!"  Poor Dean, but i can picture Sam's facial expressions and him actually saying this; too funny.

Bobby calling Dean a dumb ass also had me laughing out loud; somthing Bobby would actually say.

again this story was great.

Renee 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice review, and for telling me which bits were worth reading! It's always good to get this kind of feedback.

I've never actually been to Michigan (or the US at all until last week), I just picked it cos of Evil Dead 3, where they make double-barrelled Remingtons, ROFL

I had to spend about 3 hours on Google Earth making sure I got all the place names right, cos I just knew that someone would spot the place and would tell me if it was all wrong, LOL  I was so stoked to find out there was really a Winchester Place!

I had so much fun writing the bathroom scene - for some reason I just got the feeling that Sam would be able to handle it (er, poor choice of words, maybe!) better than Dean. I just got this image in my head of him being morally outraged at the whole idea of going to the toilet, LOL

Thanks again, for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

Well, crap, Dean - Did he have to shoot.  Great chapter...lol.  Love Dean's choice of ringtone. - Kel

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was great! Funny! Good story. Entertaining dialogue .Can’t wait for your next offering. 

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

LOL, so now they've switched huh.  Very cool.  Poor Sam's probably skeeved all to hell to be in Dean's body...lol

 

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well now Fredo suggested I give this a read and so far I gotta say she's right.  Nice job.  Can't wait to see what's got Sam. - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 7

hehehe, yes, i liked. Looking forward for something else...

Author's Response:

Ta for reading and recommending it to someone else!

I am *trying* to write an angsty one, I really am, but mine just all turn out either a farce or just plain amusing. Can't write for toffee, I guess. 

Cheers for all your comments! 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 5

yeah, why the forest...

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

what the hell is going on here??

Author's Response:

I hope you meant that in a good way, LOL

DOn't worry, it all becomes clear.... 

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

Very nice finish. Loved that the rattling sound is still going on - my poor Dean...

Hope you write another one - this one was fun.

Author's Response:

Ta very much for reading and leaving a comment!

I am planning another one... but usually these plans turns into 3 weeks of jotting down random moments and then one night settling in with a lot of vodka or Purple Nurples and banging it all out on my trusty Mac.

Nice way to excise the week, and of course it's fun to play with The Boys, LOL

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 5

Good for Bobby - but I'm guessing this is going to get a little out of hand before it gets better....

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

Uh-oh - they've already swapped, it seems. That was rather funny, having Sam in Dean's body with the girls ogling him.

Reading on.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

you've got me interested, will come back later for more...