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Reviews For Family Heirloom
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Whew! I was having some serious doubts about this story when I thought Dean was dead!! Just kidding. Wonderfully written. And a nice, happy ending. Kinda like the bow on a present. :)

--c 

Reviewer: Roguehunter (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was just awesome. I really loved the ending, i was getting all choked up and then there was Dean. Just beautiful. Also checked out your youtube videos, loved the one called, eternally restless. Watched it over and over again, brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks Rogue!!  And i'm glad to hear you liked eternally restless - the idea for it just came to me and i had to make it . . . even though i was supposed to be studying lol.  thanks again!! =D

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Liked the little twist!  Really hoping to see this happen in the show!  Loved that Sam is making Dean sweat his gift a bit! 

 



Author's Response: thanks gengen!!  =D

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

nice and sweet. One happy ending from time to time can't hurt right...

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just loved it! You sucked me in with every twist and turn! Yep, I assumed it was Dean and when I read "Sam" I nearly forgot how to breathe!

Loved how Sam was a gentleman holding the car door and I loved how you wrote him in hunter mode as second nature when he entered the diner.

You descriptions of the eyes, faces and body language really made this story sensitive. Your Tracy was very sweet. Great work!

And your ending was dynamite!! What a great line to throw at Dean - "My car...she has the hots for my car" Yep, maximum impact!

How cool that Sam's gonna milk a bit more out of the 'gift' but even more awesome was Dean honoring his gift and not assuming he would just have it back.

Fantastic little ficlet, creative and well written.



Author's Response: =D  I'm so happy you understood exactly what I was trying to do!  Thank you so much for that awesome comment!!!

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMGGG LOVED ITTTTT....FIRST I THOUGHT DEAN WAS DEAD:( even when he was going to meet someone i thought he just made that up to see her again but noppeeee DEANNNNN!!!!:D awesome one shot...o and also i love how you mentioned in detail what Sammy did when he entered the restaurant, it has Winchester written all over it!

Author's Response:

thank you!!!!  i just couldn't kill Dean ;)  i luv him too much lol.  i tried to keep the suspense going as long as i could though.  i'm glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

I thought Dean had died! Thanks for saving him! Loved the ending, great fic!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh praise the Lord and I'm so glad you are a sucker for a happy ending!  Good writing, you had my heart in my mouth and tears in my eyes for a moment there.

Bev xx

Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked that ending.  I was just beginning to get depressed thinking it was another Sam mourning Dean fic and then you had him say, "I'm meeting someone."  Yea, well done!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

I thought it was Dean "haunting" Sam -- I like yours!

Reviewer: Marcy (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thank you so much, i can't stand the idea of dean dying and i check  the site almost every day looking for stories where deal lives...thanksthanksthanks!!or, like we say in my country...grazie!!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

what can i say, i just loved the ending!! It absolutely brought a huge smile to my face!! thanks so much for sharing!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much bambers!  I was a little nervous about posting this one because I literally just started writing and let it go where it took me .  . . and I wasn't sure how everyone would feel about it.  It means so much to hear you liked it!! =D  Glad I could make you smile!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

.that was lovely,nice ending.

Author's Response: thanks!  i'm glad you liked the ending . . . it turned out much different than i thought.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

lol, very sweet.  I was already to get sappy and sad then you turned it around... - Thanks for the read - K

Author's Response: thank you!! =D

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