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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

Damn, nowhere to go...please update soon! Great work..

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 4

You have really got into your stride with this chapter..some fantastic descriptions and beautifully paced...I could hardly stop reading...moving on...

Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you so much! This chapter just started flowing, the action just happened on its own :) And I promise, I'll have chapter 5 up soon!

Love, abni

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love the way this whole story flashes from past to present nearly as much as I love the boy's having to drag the information out of each other...great read so far...

Author's Response:

*blushes* oh your reviews make me absolutely speechless! I'm so happy the past/present works! And yes, those boys are way too good at keeping things from each other!

Love, abni

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

Heartbreaking beginning to this chapter with Sam misreading Dean's words and thinking that he didn't want to see him...but beautifully written, as is all the emotion in this...very nice work.



Author's Response:

Oh thank you, I'm so happy the emotion works!

Love, abni

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice start, interesting plot with the mystery scar and a beautiful depiction of Sam's feelings about being away from his family...liking this a lot!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it - I felt, with the strong bond that we see between the brothers on the show, it must have been pretty hard for Sam to leave Dean to go to Stanford :)

Love, abni

Reviewer: MuffyMorrigan (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

I can't believe it this story just keeps gettting better and better. I love the past sections--and the present poor Sam, poor Dean! Can't can't wait for more don't keep us waiting too long.

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'm so happy you like both the past and the present sections - it's a bit of a juggle to keep the boys in character at different ages. Chapter 4 is up!

Love, abni

Reviewer: shattershockred (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

Holy cow!!!

 

What a clilff hanger!!

 

Please update soon!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Sorry for the cliffhanger, I know it was evil to end it there :) Next chapter will be up soon, I promise!

Love, abni

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm totally curious as to what Sam did that makes it his fault that time...kept thinking about it and i can't come up with anything.......

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Well, Winchester logic isn't always logical to other people, so what Sam sees as his fault - especially in his messed-up emotional state of mind - may not be seen by other people (read: Dean) as his fault... Next chapter will be up soon!

Love, abni

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oooohhhh man had to end it there didn't you. Will be waiting for the next chapter. Good update!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And yes, I know, evil me to end it there! I'll update soon, I promise!

Love, abni

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

:O continued his story.....ahh i can't wait to see what happened that night! aww Sammy saved Dean...love it!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so happy you like my story! Hope you like the next chapter as well - there's plenty left to be revealed about what happened that night (and in the days after).

Love, abni

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

this is fantastic,can't wait for more.please update soon.

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much!!! I'll update soon, I promise!

 Love, abni

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh please! Hurry with this story! I can't take not knowing how Sam saved Dean! Please? I'll give you a lolipop! :)

~Kayla



Author's Response:

Hi Kayla,

Thank you so much for your review! I'll update soon, I promise! (Who can resist lollipops????)

 Love, abni

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is very well written - nice suspense and I feel so sorry for the pair of them - too much left unsaid for too long.  Glad you're giving them the opportunity to air it out, even if they reluctant - lol - Angela

Author's Response:

Hey there Angela,

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! *blushes* I'm so happy you like the story! Yes, they always keep quiet about so many things, don't they? I always feel that there's so much emotion just beneath the surface, they just aren't that used to talking about it. Hope you like the next chapters as well! :D

Love, abni

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

i like this story:) flashbacks in stories are great, they always add more dept to asotry, good job with this one, can't wait for the rest:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like the way I use the flashbacks! Chapter 3 will be up soon! Love, abni

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow.......this is keeping me on my toes literally.............*chewing nails*


Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! *blushes* Chapter 3 will be up soon! Love, abni

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 2

I liked this chapter.  You did a nice job writing Sam's perspective.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it! I'll update soon, promise! Love, abni

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

will be waiting for the next chapter good job!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so happy you like it! Chapter 3 will be up soon! Love, abni

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

wow,very exciting chapter,more please.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll update soon, promise!

Love, abni

Reviewer: Sekhmet (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this story! Sam in the present struggling to tell Dean, wanting to believe but not able to! Heart wrenching stuff Abni! Feed my addiction. More more more!

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much, Sekhmet! I better feed your addiction soon, can't keep you waiting!

Love, abni

Reviewer: MuffyMorrigan (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 2

Awesome update! Love the past and present sections. You can't leave it there! More please? I'll give you chocolate!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like the way I switch between past and present! And oooh chocolate???? I'll update at once! LOL

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start to the story....i always love to hear about Sam's Stanford days...whether or not he'd gone hunting....if he misses Dean and Dad badly....all those things.....

Can't wait for the next chapter... :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear you like it - hope you like my take on Sam's Stanford days :) Chapter 2 will be up soon! Love, abni

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Will be waiting for the next update. good job

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter 2 will be up soon! Love, abni

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think this is a good start to what sounds like an interesting story. I liked how you wrote what Sam was thinking about what happened.  I can't wait to see where this story leads.


Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm so glad you like the way I write Sam, there'll be much more insight into his thoughts along the way. Love, abni

Reviewer: Sekhmet (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

ooh, this rocks! Can't wait for more, love stories with Sam at school

Author's Response: Hi Sekhmet *waves* Thank you so much for your review! Love, abni

Reviewer: MuffyMorrigan (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great work, awesome beginning can't wait to see where this goes! Don't keep us waiting too long for updates!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter 2 will be up soon! Love, abni

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