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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 10

A great ending!  Especially Sam's nightmare.  Life for the Winchesters can never be happily ever after---that wouldn't be a proper fit.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 9

Finally they get it all worked out!  Boy, those stubborn Winchesters sure cause a lot of problems by bottling up their emotions.  Silly pride!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

Now we know what Dean was doing while Sam was hallucinating he was by his side.  OBE or wishful thinking?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is the saddest chapter of all.  Johm, Sam and Dean all want to be together and yet their human weaknesses keep them apart.  John would have to give up his pride, Sam and Dean their doubts and lack of self-worth.

At least we know it all works out in the end.  Until then---sad.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

Another marvelous chapter!  I like the repetition of Sam's "I don’t feel so good. Guess coming here was a good idea after all."

So finally the truth is coming out.  At last!  Now they can mend things properly.

Ughhh!  That last paragraph did me in.  Major sympathy pains!  Been there---done that.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 5

A very emotionally charged chapter!  The passage where you expressed Sam's conflicting feeling about being away from his family, needing them in his life but hating the life they had was amazing! 

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 10

This is a really good story.  I have enjoyed reading all your stories.  I hope you continue to write and post.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear you like my stories - I hope to get back to writing and posting soon, but real life has been a p*** these past months :(

Huge hug,

 Abni

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

Awwwwwww, how could you end it like that?! You evil evil  person! Lol, lovely story, love how you tell what they're thinking, and it's actually believable. :P

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it! I know it was an evil way to end it, but it felt like the right way, considering Sam's state of mind in season 1 :) 

 Thanks again for your review, it means a lot!

 Huge hug,

 Abni

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good rapport b/w Sam & Dean, very true to the show.  I’m anxious to see what the story is/where Sam’s story leads.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear the boys are true to the show, that's about the greatest compliment I can get!

Hope you like the rest of teh story too.

 Love, abni

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 10

Got a little dizzy with all the back and forth between past and present, but I adjusted. Nice meaty sentences and a good tale. Look forward to more of your work!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your reveiw! Sorry about the dizziness - glad you adjusted! I didn't originally plan the story to go that way, things just started happening and then I felt the boys had to deal with each other's reactions in teh present as the tale progressed.

Love, abni

Reviewer: MuffyMorrigan (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

What an amazing story and what an amazing ride! I hope you keep on with this idea, sequels are always awesome. This is such a great first posting! I can't wait to read much much more from you! Please!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *blushes* I'll definitely keep up with the idea, Sam's bugging me to start telling about more hunts during his time at Stanford.

Love, abni

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

A fine finish, and I will be forever wondering whether the boys would really watch 'bladder' and if they did, would they get the jokes? In my world I've decided that they would...lol Great story Abni and I'll be keeping an eye out for the follow up...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *grins* well I think Sam might catch on to more of the jokes than Dean, geek that he is - but I'm sure Dean would love it too LOL!

Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews along the way, they mean the world to me!

Love, abni

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

I'm happy that all three of them are ok, but Sam must feel so sad.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews!!! I'm so happy you like my story - hope you liked the last chapters as well :D

Love, abni

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ok something is really serious Sam is in really bad shape, I hope he's alright.

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 5

I wonder what's wrong with Sam, maybe he should take a risk and overcome his fear of what might happen.

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is really god but it's bad that all three of the winchester boys got hurt.

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 10

dying for one of those sequels!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm hoping to start posting on one soon!

Love, abni

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oooooo....is this the start of a sequel?? I enjoyed the story very much....love the way you tied in the past and present together...and of course the hug in the previous chapter..... :)

Author's Response:

Thankyou so much!!! And thank you for your support along teh way!

Well you never know - I've got some different sequels fighting for attention in my head - I hope to start posting on one soon!

I'm so happy you like the way I shift between past and present - I felt it would add a dynamic element to the story (and of course give me an excuse for a hug *grins*).

Love, abni

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 10

This was an excellent end to an excellent story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! *blushes* and thank you for your reviews along the way!

Love, abni

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

good job! I will deffently be waiting for the new stories! Again awsome job!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And thank you for sticking with me all the way, your reviews mean the world to me!

Love, abni

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is really good your making my suspision increase. I wonder whats going to happen.

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 10

WOW! That ending was perfect.

really loved this fic....and I'm sad to see it come to an end, but all things must I suppose =]

can't wait for your sequels to start emerging. you are a great writer.

soph xx



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much!!! *blushes* I'm so happy to hear you like my first fic! I hope to start posting the sequels soon!

Love, abni

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is really good I wonder if it is them or not.

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

 I feel sorry for Sam, he feels like he cant even think about the past without feeling pain.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 10

really enjoyed this story,well done.lovely ending,enjoyed their talk.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like the ending, I felt the bitter-sweet ending fitted the boys well, since things are never quite easy in their world.

Love, abni

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