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Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this line "It has always been about the one next to me." Both thinking the same and never saying it... very true to characters. Good job, I think you should keep on writing.

Author's Response: 'Thanks! We're working on a longer piece and hope to have it finished soon so we can start posting. :D Glad you liked this one!

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good Job I think you captured the boys thoughts perfectly

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think you should try your hand(s) at an actual short story. Will be watching for it.

Author's Response:
We're working on a short story, but we won't start posting until it's finished. (this way we won't leave anyone hanging in the middle of a story.)
I'm so glad you liked this little piece! Thanks!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes! It finally worked! I've been tryna review ya for days now;) Again, love the story!!!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

WOW!!! Such a small piece but SO inspiring! Very powerful. Loved it!!!
Love how you gave us something from each brother but in the end their feelings about each other is the same. You conveyed the message so well, and it's so true!
Whatever I am, or whoever I am doesn't matter. It has always been about the one next to me. -I would love to read more from you! Schelz x x

Author's Response: Thanks Schelz! Gotta love your work too! ~April xx

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was a very controlled piece, but you somehow manage to convey some of the brothers deepest thoughts in such a short space.
Loved this from Dean; "I say I have to because to say they're optional means there is room to fail in my tasks. I cannot fail." The idea that he feels any greatness he may have, has been swallowed by the needs of others - great image.
Also from Sam;"So I do the little things to try to bring a smile to your face. The little things that make us as normal as we can be."
I like how you capture their bond through the fact that they both end with the same conclusion ... though I think Sam only arrived at this realisation after rejoining Dean.
Enjoyed this your first fan fiction, it was very inventive.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback. I agree that Sam's pov isn't as cohesive as Dean's but hopefully this means that whatever I do next will be better. :D Thanks again! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Looooove it! Especially the end and how each lives for the other. "Whatever I am, or whoever I am doesn't matter. it has always been about the one next to me." Now that's selfless love.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was just perfect.
It's so right on the Winchester way- each thinking the same thing-yet never saying it.
One cannot be without the other -
Beautifully done.

BRAVO!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was really good, loved the "It has always been about the one next to me" in both, they think the same and don't even know it. Great job, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is great! Good Job : )

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

well done,sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's certainly interesting....not so many words, but it captures the essence of each boy and their thoughts - or what they might have been thinking- perfectly..

Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to know I wasn't totally off the mark. :D

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