Reviewer: justbored101 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 12:16 PM · On: Hunter Bridget

its GREAT!!! keep going...bt you and me this is my FAV story eva!! ! lol are you gonna bring tha demon back into the story? and when will sam and michelle have some real fun??

Reviewer: samsangel (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 12:54 PM · On: Full Moon Blues

Just so you know, the correct what to spell "lican" is lycan... which is the Latin name for wolves.... it's where we get the name 'lycanthropy', the psycho-
logical term for werewolfism. And yes there is actually a psychological condition called lycanthropy.

Author's Response: OK, I'll keep that in mind. That's just how my computer corrected it though. ^^; And I do know about the psychological condition called lycanthropy. I had to study it in my English class in college for a paper. :D I personally would be a little freaked if I saw a person acting like that.

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 19/11/07 04:22 AM · On: A New Side of Dean

Aww bless Deans a good Daddy, but everyone knew he would be from the way he is when you watch him on the show!!

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 10:06 AM · On: In Her Time of Dying

good stuff well worth the waite

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 03:29 AM · On: Old Friends, New Enemies

that was so great espesialy with the twist in there two Simplify fabulous 

Reviewer: Deans_Girl (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 05:23 PM · On: All is Fair in Love and War

I LOVE this story , it has a good plot line . You need to write more chapters  for it SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 10:24 PM · On: All is Fair in Love and War

so far i love u story .all of it

i hope t read the next 11 ch. already!!

tomorow?! maybe one!!!!!

i like t know what happen w the boys and girl?  keep goin!!! fine job 

Reviewer: Burrito1024 (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 12:04 AM · On: All is Fair in Love and War

Hey! I love your story so far! Keep up the good work and update asap please! ")

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 01:03 AM · On: A Night on the Town

i get it lol  i wan't pierre to waite me lol great stuff again keepthe good stuff coming

 

Reviewer: loftymnd (Signed) · Date: 22/03/07 11:38 AM · On: The Graveyard Lady

I didn't get any further than Amber saying she was sorry to Dean for hitting his car and I just had to stop and comment.

So far I had to reread what little I got through twice and skim it a third time.It's a little confusing how Amber was the sassy one when she hit Dean's car then all of a sudden she became the mellower one.Same with Michelle and her "cute" wave to Sam then the attitude in the store.Saying as long as she didn't have to ride with "him"(meaning Dean,I guess) when up until then they hadn't minced words or anything to merit that comment she made.Not to mention-you didn't even give the girls the slightest descriptions - physical or otherwise. Leaving the reader to draw there own visual of the girls only to have it confused when you finally do get to their descriptions.I like when a story jumps right into it but this just doesn't seem to work.The guys just happening  to bump into a set of female hunters and not being the least bit set back.Accepting it right away and even the way they all got together.Sam just says lets go together.Its just odd.I am going to read some more in hopes the story gets better....maybe a little more sophisticated in style. 

Author's Response:

I'm sorry really don't like my story. I'm also sorry I didn't put descriptions in. The only reason I didn't put descriptions in, because I usually do, was because this story was orginally made for just my best friend and my enjoyment. I just put it on the internet to see what other people thought. (I was already seven chapters in before I even put it on the internet.)

Also, Amber and Michelle switched to their actually additudes in the store. Amber was orginally pissed off at Michelle and Dean and her hitting doors didn't help. She just calmed down when she was in the store. Michelle, on the other hand, is a hot head, but thinks Sam is cute. She was just flirting with Sam and she doesn't like Dean (throughout the whole story may I say)  which makes her hot headedness reach a peak.

I'm not trying to change you're opnion bacause I respect your opnion. (that's why this is on here in the first place) I just wanted to clear some things up and I hope I did. If I didn't, I'm sorry again.

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/07 09:57 PM · On: A Half Pint of Moon Shine

i don't know how you comeup with new ideas each week lol your a ntural at this great stuff  looking forward to next weeks tale of advencher and fun

Reviewer: katiegirl14 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/07 10:51 PM · On: Switchup!

I loved it!!!! The body switch was a great idea!