Supernaturalville
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

that was heartbreaking ,very sad.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! This was great!

No, then again, maybe it wasn’t raining . . . perhaps the skies were clear, and maybe just maybe the only thing falling was tears.

I really think this line summd it all up, like he felt it should have been raining because the world should have been as sad as he was in those moments.

Great work! Keep it up!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Perhaps so too.....not everyday that you see it's 'raining'.....sweet...sad but sweet...

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

WOW!!, this is absolutely stunning, so powerful and so much emotion in so very few words.  Bravo!!

Crystal

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

OH!!  So beautiful.  So sad.

 

Good job!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

You are really talented, while reading this I was thinking it was Dean's tears and then I get to the end and it is. Very clever!!!

You write in small bundles but the delivery of the emotion is just as strong as when I'm reading a longer story.

Thanks for sharing, you're doing very well, I like all your stories so far.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. So happy that you thought it was a clever idea. lol, Yeah, I really do love to write little stories compared to larger ones. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

soooo beautifull!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It makes me so happy that you thought it was beautiful. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

GOOD JOB!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm happy that you liked it.

Reviewer: aggie rose (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

excellent.  so nice to read something that is finished too. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: IrishTwilight (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow.  i've got tears forming here.  i think part of my heart just broke for Dean.  awesome job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I am so happy you liked the story. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

awww that was beautiful!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked the story.

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