Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 8: Mrs. Dean Winchester
Ahah!!! i think i know what the demon is doing!! or at least why Dean is having different dreams of Asher...i think i know anyway, but i'm still waiting eagerly for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: So glad you caught on! It's fun to string people along, but more fun when they get their 'ah ha' moment! Thanks for the review! More action to come Friday.
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mrs. Dean Winchester
OH CRAP!!!! That was close. Def time to kick some demon ass. WOW. Awesome & hot!!! More soon please. LOL.
Author's Response: A little too close. Dean's gonna want a hot tub full of Lysol when he's finally free. I'm delighted that you're still enjoying it! Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mrs. Dean Winchester
wow,great update. really really looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it! More on Friday.
Reviewer: EmSyd (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
LOL...I missed the last chapter, so right now just finished reading both chapters at one go...and love Asher's way of tackling the issue.... She was still a she, female. And her sights were on Dean. No woman was going to mess with her man. Hahahaha...girl power!!!! Yup, and i can't wait to know what it's like to be Mrs Dean Winchester.. Happy Anniversary!!!! (Of your wedding??)
Author's Response: The way I see it, Asher can take on any female to protect her man---even if it is a demon. I know I would. and being Mrs. Dean Winchester isn't a piece of cake (wedding or otherwise)! Yeah, my wedding anniversary. Thanks for the good wishes and a big chunk of cake to you for the review!
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
I saw your shout in the box about the next chapter being up. I hadn't realised quite how behind I was on reading and reviewing. I'm not one to take the cream cheese mints when there's a weeding cake on offer so here you go... ;) This is getting better and better, can't wait for the next chapter. Happy anniversary Shannon! Merrie
Author's Response: A nice big slab of cake for you then! I like those mints, except when they're mint-flavored. ;( I'm glad you still like it and think it's improving. Thanks for taking the time to review, Merrie!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
I like how Dean always seems to figure out its not Asher. The sumarian text conversion from "night" to "light" was cool. Is that real or did you just use your imagination.?...my ancient sumarian is a little rusty too:)
Author's Response: I'm happy that you had to ask. That means I'm a good bluffer! I know nothing about ancient languages. No matter how many guys you kiss, you always know "the one." Dean has lots of practice telling the difference! ;)
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
Loved the last paragraph, "She was still a she, female". Asher is pissed, the Queen has a dark future. Please update soon.......
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! That last paragraph is one of my favorites too. Don't mess with Dean's real woman!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
fantastic update,i'm more then curious to know what it's like to be mrs dean winchester.please update soon.
Author's Response: *Evil laugh* Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
Happy Anniversary!! Hope you had a great day. This chapter was fantastic!! My theory was correct!! Well, not down to the who was doing it, but basically the how was right. LOL. I love Asher, she's cool. I don't think I'd like to be standing between her & Dean. he he he. More soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the anniversary wishes. I'm glad you were able to figure out at least part of what was happening and glad you like Asher. I don't think I'd get between her and Dean either. She could do some major damage.
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 6: Married With Children
I have a theory, but I will wait to see if I'm right. I hope the real Asher finds him tho. Awesome update!! Looking forward to more soon.
Author's Response: I hope the real Asher finds him, too. But how will he know it's really her? It would be terrible if he hurt her by mistake! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
WOW, what is happening here?? Poor Dean. Going to read the next bit.
Author's Response: Yeah poor Dean. That man goes through hell, doesn't he? And there's more to come.
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 2: A Desperate Connection
Loving it!!!!!! On to the next chapter I go.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Hope you continue to love it!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 6: Married With Children
ACK! Where the heck was I when this was posted up? Oy... *shakes head* great story. MORE MORE MORE!
Author's Response: SOON, SOON, SOON! I plan on posting 2-3 chapters a week, the last one on March 9th because of the moon phase. Thanks again for reading!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 6: Married With Children
this is very very good,can't wait to find out what the prophecy is.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far. Prophecy? What prophecy?
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 5: Hope and Disappointment
Thank god for the real Asher!! yup they should rescue Dean already...i don't think it's wise to leave him alone for too long right?? That boy will attract a lot more trouble!!! Waiting............for the next chapter......
Author's Response: Dean will be rescued soon---just a little more mental anguish yet to dole out. Thanks for the review and for waiting (patiently or impatiently?).
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
That's not Asher!! Those of us who know your Asher have alarm bells ringing right now. Go Dean for resisting!! And Dean collapsing after beleiving that he is losing the plot was heartbreaking. Great chapter! Heading for the next button with anticioation..
Author's Response: Wow! I'm impressed! You know Asher very well. I hope the next few chapters live up to your expectations. Thanks for your reviews! They help me strive to do better with each chapter.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 3: Religious Mumbo Jumbo
ok...someone in this picture shouldn't be here... John feels all wrong, but Asher's history and skills don't fit. You've made the timeline obviously out of kilter, and Sam's acting like everyone should be there. Hmm, the whole scene is out of left field compared to the first two chapters. Yep, I'm lost! Clever story direction, I'm sucked in!! Loved how Sam related to Asher at the end, and your description of Sam's 'look' was fantastic. Intriguing, exciting! Well done!
Author's Response: Petra, there's no fooling you! You have picked up on all the reasons this scene is WRONG! I'm glad that you think I was still able to make the characters relate to one another in a successful manner. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Hope and Disappointment
Great Ash is Dean´s perfect match. Poor Sam she took business in her hands. I loved Bobby embarassment. I will be looking for Married with Children (Dean is having a hard time with his visions, what do they want from him??)
Author's Response: Yeah poor Sam. Asher is used to being the big sister and sometimes doesn't know how to keep the balance between being involved in the Winchesters' lives and being bossy. We'll find out what they want form Dean in a few more chapters. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked Bobby. Jim Beaver does such a great job portraying him!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: Hope and Disappointment
this is getting very exciting,looking forward to more.you did say you would be quick with next chapter if you got reviews.
Author's Response: That's what I said. Thank you for taking the time to review. I'm glad you're still with me! The evil plot begins to unfold soon.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
i love this story,can't wait to find out whats going on.more please.
Author's Response: Okay. Since you asked so nicely...more.
Reviewer: Supernatural227 (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
Keep it up......i love your story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R! Peanut M&M's to you! Your encouraging words mean a lot to me!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
I knew it wasn't the real Asher!!!!! although you had me convinced there for a while...i thought i got myself confused....but was i relieved that it wasn't the real her.. Can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Hee! I like that I was able to mess with your mind even for a little bit. You're clever and pick up on the clues, so it's hard to confuse you. Isn't it a relief knowing it isn't really Asher? Thanks for the review! It brightens my day!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
oh wow.....great....wow....Poor Dean! Nicely done! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me, Kayla! And for your great reviews! They make me smile!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 3: Religious Mumbo Jumbo
Is he having a vision?? A dream?? A nightmare?? Another djinn?? Although i absolutely adore John it just feels so wrong having him there.......... Maybe it's an alternate future...like a different dimension.....hmmm..... There....lots of guess...can you update faster??? :)
Author's Response: Yeah, lots of questions. All will become clear in future chapters, but it will take more time and mental anguish on Dean's part. I'm glad you thought John being there felt wrong! That means I've accomplished my goal. Look for more on Friday. And thanks a million for the review! It makes me write faster (and post faster, too)!
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