Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 5: Hope and Disappointment
God I like her, she's feisty...and that last line is a killer..."Now down to business. We have a white knight to rescue." OMG great line!!!!! Was going to stop for the day but have to read just one more chap...
Author's Response: I'm glad you like Asher. I have to confess, she's my daughter, Ciara. I'm always amazed by her big heart and her endless courage. No waiting for the prince to rescue her, she'll slay the damn dragon herself! Thanks for the R&R Louy!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
Damn, girl you are so skilled at keeping your readers hooked...what the **** is going down here... I'm getting more and more worried about our boy...but at least Sam is living it up with Lorraine * smiles* Moving on...
Author's Response: Skilled? Wow, thanks! *smiling ear to ear* Don't worry about Dean---true love conquers all!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 3: Religious Mumbo Jumbo
Okay so officially confused but in a good way. The way you have each chapter starting at completely different points...almost in different dimensions...it just riveting, I have absolutely NO idea what's going on except that I MUST find out... Moving on...and beautiful writing by the way , especially...'A jolt of shock zipped through him as he recognized himself lying in a bed. Not even his worst imaginings prepared him for the state of his fragile, unconscious body. His face was drawn, ashen, devoid of natural color. Dark bluish circles hollowed his eyes like skeletal orbs. Bruises in shades of purple and scarlet mottled his cheeks and forehead. A large angry gash on his cheek had been stitched.' Oh boy...
Author's Response: I'm glad you're confused in a good way. that means my evil scheme is working! *a flash of lightning, a crack of thunder* Mwaahaha Thanks for your sweet compl;iments. You know Dean, if he's going to be hospitalized it better be a doozy!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: A Desperate Connection
Damn, short but VERY worrying...where the hell is Dean... how is she gonna find Sam and Bobby...and how are they even gonna start looking for Dean if they havent a clue...OMG Shannon! Moving on...
Author's Response: So many questions. All will be revealed. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: "What's Wrong, Lover?"
Wow Shannon, easy girl gotta watch my blood pressure...and what a start... I loved the prequel and I've been wanting to start this for the longest time and now I have, I know I am doomed...you have me hooked and I'm just gonna have to read the whole thing... Moving on and great chapter...explosive start!
Author's Response: Louy, Now you know how I feel when I start one of your stories! Just sit back, put your feet up and have a glass of wine while you read---that should hep the blood pressure. Thanks for taking the time to review! Shannon
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Last Kiss
OMG the screen is blurry.......*snif* *snif* That was so sad, I was so caught up in Dean and Asher's confrontation and farewell. Very realistic the way doubt crept up when Asher wanted a baby (it even made me doubt for a moment) But that would have meant that the real Asher was dead---and you wouldn't have done that, right. You so need to write a continuation. We have to see Dean and Asher finally consumate their relationship and Dean getting out of his deal. OR Dean going to hell and having to watch Asher finally settle down with someone else. And if you wanted to get really cruel..she and Sam could "help each other cope". Hey we could totally have another ground hog day???:)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for you encouraging words! It seemed only natural for Asher to want a bit of Dean to hold onto and only natural for him to question what was before his eyes considering his recent ordeal. You're right, I would never kill Asher. Or would I? That gives me an idea. I'll have to work fast to get Dean out of his deal before Kripke (the man's a twisted genius!) Now that would be hell to see his brother and his woman in the throes of comfort. Hee! I might be mean enough to do it.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Last Kiss
just read the last 4 chapters,so heartbreaking,i'v really enjoyed reading this story,outstanding well done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Last Kiss
Yup, i'm sad that this story has ended...been reading the last 6 chapters at one go. it was quite intense, especially emotionally. was slightly sniffly when Dean finally confessed to her about the deal.... Hope you'll be writing more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the lovely review! I have some ideas boiling in that head of mine for another story. Just don't know when I'll be able to post (hopefully before season 3 ends, but I don't know). I'll let you know if you'll need tissues for the next one.
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Last Kiss
It´s so sad, I cried all the chapter. You must write another story saving Dean, maybe Sam and Asher together can find a solution. PLEASE. Asher is a great character and I love Dean even more when she´s around. I´ll be waiting for their next story. Great writing it´s easy to be there with them and let the feelings wrap you. Thanks.
Author's Response: What a wonderful review, Gabriela! I'm so touched. Thanks you so much for reading and for all your kind reviews! They're better than chocolate!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Last Kiss
I am sobbing my heart out here!!!!! More!! You HAVE to write another one & SAVE DEAN!!!!! Please?? This was a total rollercoaster ride & it was awesome. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. Please (I'm on my knees begging here) add more to the story soon.
Author's Response: I'd love to save Dean! I wonder what Kripke has planned? It would be nice to write one where Dean was more his cocky self again. Thanks for all the wonderful reviews Jo! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: Pillow Talk
*sobs as she goes to read the next bit*
Author's Response: Here's a tissue. *hands you a linen handkerchief* I'm glad it touched you. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Sacrifice
oh don't worry i'm a jensen ackles ass junky... lol hehehehe. oy! i sure hope that's the real asher they are with. i was kind of waiting for the question, "how did you know which one was the real asher?" maybe that' ll be answered in the next chapter? update soon please =)
Author's Response: Now we know what you look at when you meet a man. ;-) I guess we'll find out if it is the real Asher and how Dean thinks he knows. Thanks for the great reviews!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Sacrifice
WOW, that was heartpoundingly awesome. *heart rate slowly going back to normal* Thank goodness they have him now, all will be ok.......right? How did Dean know which was the right Asher tho? WOW, just WOW.
Author's Response: Ahh...you'll find out how he knew. True love conquers all! No one has ever been so speechless and so eloquent at the same time. thanks a million Jo!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 13: Trapped Within These Walls
*mouth gaping wide open, breath coming in ragged & sharp* Nooooooo!!!!! No, no, no that just isn't fair. OMG how could you?? *nervous laugh* Please, please, please come back with the next chapter!! Oh, LOL, you have, ok........off to read.
Author's Response: Thought I was going to have to perform CPR for a moment Jo. Your review was very flattering and amusing. Thanks!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 12: Party Dress
just read chapters 11 and 12,what can i say brilliant as always.
Author's Response: Brilliant? Wow! Thanks Lindsay! I'm so happy you're still entertained. I hope you enjoy the last chapters as well.
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Party Dress
WOW!!!! *is clapping hands in appreciation* Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Hold on Dean, just a little longer!!! Can't wait for tomorrow!! *big cheesy grin*
Author's Response: Just hang in there a little longer Dean (and Jo). Today is tomorrow and the rescue begins! Thanks for the great review and for sticking with me!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: Party Dress
this demon chick... what a bitch! sam should get his damn sexy ass over to where dean is *shakes head* please please update soon!
Author's Response: LMAO! That's my very favorite line! You're right, Sam should get his damn sexy ass over to where Dean is. Although, people do worship at the altar of Jensen Ackles ass (it's youtube). As for updates, how about today? Thanks for all your wonderful reviews and encouraging words!
Reviewer: Supernatural227 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 12: Party Dress
lol, I've been pretty shy lately but, wow, Im amazed. This story is so amazingly great!! Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you got over your shyness and gave me a review! I hope to see your name around more often. I hope future chapters don't disappoint. And peanut M&Ms to you for your kind words! Thanks a million!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 11: Loose Ends
YES!! Love it. More, more please. We def need to see how Dean is. LOL. This is one of my fav's. Keep up the great, awesome & fantastic work!!! We got a SEASON 4 of SN!!! Whhhooooohhoooo!! *grin*
Author's Response: Season 4?! Wooooohoooo! Oh, thanks for the review (very much appreciated but not as exciting as season 4, don't you agree?) I'm thrilled that this is one of your favorites! Your sweet words fill me with happiness!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 10: Cat Fight
great update,an action packed chapter.please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you liked this chapter! Action is hard for me. Update soon? How about tomorrow? Soon enough for you?
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 10: Cat Fight
Great action description in that update. Poor Asher & Cat. Has Meg gone to hell for good this time? One can only hope. I agree with Bobby, why are they all teaming up? More soon please.
Author's Response: Action is always hard for me so I'm glad I passed muster. Asher will be fine (how could you not when you're dating a Winchester?) and Cat...well I have a few loose ends to tie up. As for Meg...she's back in hell until some other writer needs her demonic sarcasm. As for why all the forces of evil have teamed up...I guess that's another loose end. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cat Fight
LOL love the last exchange between Asher and Sam. After the whole bloody fight it's relieving in a way to read how Sam and Asher talked about more normal things like cars and driving... Can't wait for you to get back to Dean...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I actually had the problem of only two people able to drive and three cars so...glad you thought it fit because that was a fluke. I'll be getting back to Dean soon. Just have to tie up a few loose ends.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 9: United Forces
brilliant,this fic is really heating up,can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! I hope I don't disappoint.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 9: United Forces
Hmmmm.......the plot thickens!! can't wait for the next chapter....
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me and for the review!
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 29/02/08 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 9: United Forces
Uh oh, things just got a whole lot more complicated. AAAAHHHHH. More soon please, how's now sound??? LOL. No, seriously,now would be good. he he he.
Author's Response: Hey Jo, you crack me up! How's tomorrow sound? Thanks for the review!
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