Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 9: United Forces
Much better!
Author's Response: Happy you approve. Now lets see if I can trip you up. Which hand is it in, the left or the right? Thanks for all the lovely comments and the constructive criticism!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mrs. Dean Winchester
Yea I'm sick of the porn more ass kickin time!
Author's Response: Okay, no more porn. Too bad for Dean. He's got the Platinum Membership to the Spice channel. Asher flexes her spiritual muscles a bit. If a girl's gonna run with the big boys she's gotta show 'em her stuff. Hope you like!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
Way to capture Bobby DEAD ON!!! Sucka that wa awesome. I love that the BA Asher is comin out more!
Author's Response: More capitals and exclamations---woo hoo! I'm honored! We get glimpses of the ass kickin' Asher. She'll come out to play more in future stories. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: Married With Children
Oh boy lets keep it g-rated there's a baby in the room.ha! It was pretty good but so obviously not asher nor has it been for awhile poor Dean.
Author's Response: How do ya think the baby got there? Hmmm...? You're a bright one! There's no foolin' you. Lets see if I can get ya toward the end. Thanks again!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Hope and Disappointment
ha such a funny one. I like when asher cracks jokes...keep that goin.
Author's Response: Another reason why Asher and Dean are perfect---they're both smart asses. Glad you approve!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
Good...now next chaper. I'll just have to read this all tonight!
Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you like it, just don't blame me for skippin' class tomorrow. Hee! No, seriously. Don't blame me.
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 3: Religious Mumbo Jumbo
What is going on! I love it! NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oooohh! I love capital letters and exclamation points! Thanks Bam!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 2: A Desperate Connection
Theres my stubborn girl! Stick it to da man! ha!
Author's Response: Now you know if she's Dean's girl she's got a little stubborn in her. If Dean can't boss her around, there's no way Sammy will. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: "What's Wrong, Lover?"
Ah ha ha I knew it wasn't Asher! Love it! Great start!
Author's Response: No tricking you! Good to hear from you again Bam! Thanks for dropping a line!
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Last Kiss
Aw that was so sad poor Asher. And Dean being noble so sweet!
Author's Response: Not always a happy ending but I believe in the end of it all will be a happily ever after. Thanks for all the reviews dawn!
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 21/07/08 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mrs. Dean Winchester
i'm jealous of a demon. but bad demon tricking dean like that.
Author's Response: Bad demon? Aren't they supposed to be bad? ;) Sorry the demon gets all the fun in this story. Don't worry---Sam and Asher won't let her have much more fun.
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: Married With Children
hmmmm what could be wrong with dean? i have my theories though.
Author's Response: Good! Keep those theories in your head because one of them just might be correct. I hope you like how I constructed the ending. *fingers crossed* Thanks for taking the time to read and for the lovely review.
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 4: Nothing Left But Crazy
This is very good and interesting. What happened to Dean?
Author's Response: wow! You're really moving through this. I'm glad you like it! It's always nice when one of your past stories gets a new review. Thanks bunches!
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: "What's Wrong, Lover?"
Oh very good start! I can't wait to read more and I wanna know why Dean doesn't remember.
Author's Response: Hi Dawn, don't worry. All will be revealed in time. Thanks for reading and leaving me a hug (reviews are love!).
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Last Kiss
Incredible end to a beautiful story Shannon. Going to add this to my fave list and recommend it because it's been a great evening's read. Thank you for sharing and I feel sure it's not the only time I'll be reading this great story!
Author's Response: Wow! I don't know what to say.... uh.... thank you and you're welcome! Friends always share.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 15: Pillow Talk
So if making me cry once wasn't enough for you, damn where are the tissues..I know they were here a minute ago...
Author's Response: Here. *hands you a handkerchief* You're going to need this.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Sacrifice
Another wonderful chapter full of suspense and great descriptions...and now, we get to see the TLC that boy needs. And although it's been a long ride I'm kind of sad there's only 2 chapters left...
Author's Response: I always get sad at the end of a story, too. You can't wait for the end so you know what happens and the bad guy (or girl) gets what's coming to them, but on the other hand it's the end. Nothing left but TLC---and lots of it. Although, there is one more itty bitty thing...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Trapped Within These Walls
What an absolutely beautiful chapter. Your whole description of the relationship between Dean and Asher has been explained in full and it brought tears to my eyes...He so deserves her... 'With her he was complete on a level he could never reach with Sam alone. She nurtured the deprived, love-starved little boy hiding behind the rough, fearless hunter.' Just beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks Louy! Sometimes I surprise myself. :) I think Dean deserves her, too. They're perfect for one another!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Party Dress
So no sleep for me tonight. Fantastic chapter Shannon and some of the most powerful and emotive descriptions...I love the way you weave your stories...from one frame to the next..this is playing out in my mind like an episode... Moving on...
Author's Response: Awww. That's one of the nicest compliments I've ever received. thanks for reading and sharing your encouraging words!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 11: Loose Ends
Ok you're doing this on purpose aren't you? You know that by now were all on the edge of our seats worrying about our boy and chomping at the bit for the next chapter...lucky for me though...there it is...lol
Author's Response: I wouldn't be doing my job if you were lounging back sipping a latte. That's why they pay me the big bucks. Oh yeah, I don't get paid. lol. That's the good think about waiting to start a new story---we don't hang from the cliff for long. The next chapter is already there.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cat Fight
And Cat's in there too, Yeah...lol Gotta keep going till my eyes close on their own tonight, need to see the guys finding Dean!!!!
Author's Response: I always like to surprise people with their own little cameo appearances. Hee! Only a few more chapters before bedtime.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 9: United Forces
So you can write sex and action too!! lol...great chapter Shannon, and great cliffy, have to move on straight away...
Author's Response: That means a lot coming from you!! Thanks a million!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mrs. Dean Winchester
Gotta tell ya Shannon, you are having WAY too much fun with this story girl!!! And I'm VERY impressed with Dean's control, he really is in the drivers seat isn't he...lol Gotta move on...see this ass kicking thing your talking about!!!!
Author's Response: Hee! Writing this was lots of fun! Especially toying with Dean. Hope the ass-kicking meets your approval.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Child of Darkness, Child of Light
Well once again you had me from the first line and that beautiful description of the snow...and boy do I wish I'd read this chapter yesterday...I would have understood exactly what was going on then, as it was I spent an almost sleepless night wondering...credit to your writing! Moving on...
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! I think snow can be so beautiful at night so I had to put that in. Sorry to have kept you up all night. How was I to know?
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Married With Children
Well, LK must have been doing her happy dance when she first read about Sam's honeymoon...lol And this tale is just getting better and better...I actually have to stop, work to do and hubbie to feed but I'm already looking forward to picking this up tomorrow...Awesome job Shannon
Author's Response: LK said she was eating a sweet and nearly choked when she read this part. Hee! I'm really glad you're still enjoying it! Thanks so much for the review!
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