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Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh, it´s heartbreaking to see Dean so helpless, he can´t defend them and Gordon took his Baby (that was real evil). Let´s hope that Sam and Helen can give Gordon what he deserves.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

Fantastic chapter and great cliffy, you have me on the edge of my seat here, I actually growled when there was no more to read. Please update soon..got to find out what the deal is with Gordon and Sam...and thank you for not hurting the car!

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 6

OMG, that was intense.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh oh, you don't intend on leaving us there for long are you...? Please. Love the tension and this story is really building up... 

He can't take the Impala... poor car... and they haven't emptied the trunk yet...

I really need more. Feed me please... You see.. I'm desperate here! 

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

Nice twist at the end of this update.  I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Love the idea of the boys at the Roadhouse while Dean's recuperating.  Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow--can really feel Dean's excrutiating pain in this chapter.  And I love Sam being all determined, caring, and "rescue-y".  My favorite.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ooohh, fantastic first chapter.  A great hurt!Dean fix for me.  Thanks!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

Go Ellen...!!!

Great update and now a double threat...Gordon's free and out and about, and something is going on with the car...my third fav. character...please don't hurt the car...do what you want with the boys but...

Looking out for next chapter...

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 5

I really enjoyed this update. I like the way you portray all the characters. I was afraid Gordon would be back... Ok, what's going on outside? Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

You have a good feel for all the SPN characters.  It was nice to see Ellen and Ash in this chapter.  This was another good chapter.  I am really enjoying this story.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

Good update..and I'm starting to feel quite sorry for Dean with Ellen Ash and Sam all on his case he's not gonna be getting much fun...lol

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was an excellent start to what I think is going to be a good story. 

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 3

Good story - thanks!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 3

I just came across this story and read all available chapters so far in one piece. I really like it! It's not overdone but shows the way the brothers care for each other in a great way. I'm glad Gordon seems to be taken care of for now, or maybe not? So Dean will have to take his time to heal and I am looking forward to how you will continue with this story.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter. I really like your style of saying just what's needed and not going over the top. You let the reader fill in a lot of blanks and that works very well for me...A great read - Thanks.

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

Love the story. Gordon is an awesome adversary and I loved Sammy kicking his evil butt.

Beautiful hurt Dean as well!

Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response: Thanks!  This story has been complete for some time,  and although I am a feedback junkie---I do wonder what sort of frequency of updates people prefer.  Even with a story still-in-progress--i tend to update about every two days.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

Another fantastic chapter...you have done a great job of detailing the pain and anguish that Dean's working through. Really enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to more...hopefully very soon...:)

Author's Response:

Again,  thanks.  I really like the format of this site--I found ff.net to be a little cold---this,  for me,  is preferable.   And i like the option of responding to feedback individually.

I'll probably add chapters every second day,  i have to go back through and combine what i realize in hindsight,  were dissatisfyingly short posts on supernaturaltv.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

Loving this! Great action - love how you move it along and give us great insight into the boys. what is it with Dean and trees anyway?? Why do I think that getting to the car was too easy???? Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks--yes,  my son had the same response---too choppy at first.   When i wrote it,  quite some time ago-I had the story whirling in my brain and the immediacy of the action seemed to necessitate such a style,  but later i veered away from that.  I do use punctuation to (hopefully) define dialogue cadence successfully,  although i am aware that grammatically,  it would be incorrect on occasion...

Author's Response:

oops--sorry Lam  {or Iam)

I responded to Bulletbabe here by accident.

But thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Mal, this is a briliant piece of writing. It's fast and furious and very adictive. I think the format may make it a tiny bit hard to read in places but that doesn't detract from the obvious talent you're displaying here. Great work and I'll be looking out for chapter two of this...

Author's Response: Thanks--yes,  my son had the same response---too choppy at first.   When i wrote it,  quite some time ago-I had the story whirling in my brain and the immediacy of the action seemed to necessitate such a style,  but later i veered away from that.  I do use punctuation to (hopefully) define dialogue cadence successfully,  although i am aware that grammatically,  it would be incorrect on occasion...plus--a one-handed peck-typer--hopeless!!!!

Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am so excited to see this story over here! Can't wait to re-read it AGAIN! Woo! Hoo!!!!!

YAY!!!!

hugs

 jen



Author's Response: Thanks JennieC---glad it hasn't grown stale for you!

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